FF: Madhubala...A Heroine's Bitter-Sweet Journey

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-Vinu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey!!! good job Sanchita..! 👏nice concept!! Yo sistas hv done smthn awesome frm da first attempt!! 👍🏼 waiting to see hv u unfold da story..!

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elusivepixie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: VinuRox
hey!!! good job Sanchita..! 👏nice concept!! Yo sistas hv done smthn awesome frm da first attempt!! 👍🏼 waiting to see hv u unfold da story..!

Gee thanx vinu! m shit scared here. I dont knw wich way d story vil go...wil make it up as i go! d difficult part was dun! i finally managed to post d prologue! phew...damn m really scared! wat if evry1 thinks my writing is stupid? Asmi is soo cool here. EEEkkk!

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-Vinu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: elusivepixie

Gee thanx vinu! m shit scared here. I dont knw wich way d story vil go...wil make it up as i go! d difficult part was dun! i finally managed to post d prologue! phew...damn m really scared! wat if evry1 thinks my writing is stupid? Asmi is soo cool here. EEEkkk!

hehe even I was hell scared like you when I was writing my FF..! but I'm glad my readers love it hehe so nothing to worry here..! keep writing! I'm sure u will end up with an awesome piece of work...! If u want any help, just buzz me..! 😉

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 12 years ago

UNRES

Kid.. I might just murder you if you don't PM me when U update.. :P

Loved it.. :) I like the concept.. :)

Edited by -Stephanie- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very impressive plot,gripping storyline..RK in devdas demeanour when drunk is quite a treat to watch😉..RK confessing to Abhay is quite appalling guess its due to his drunken stupor lol!! Very much anxious to know what is Abhay upto😳?? Is madhubala a heroine already here?? Well do cont soon and add me to ur pm list😛

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elusivepixie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdear
Very impressive plot,gripping storyline..RK in devdas demeanour when drunk is quite a treat to watch😉..RK confessing to Abhay is quite appalling guess its due to his drunken stupor lol!! Very much anxious to know what is Abhay upto😳?? Is madhubala a heroine already here?? Well do cont soon and add me to ur pm list😛

well dis scene is d prologue...chapter 1 starts where rk gives madhu d royal ditch! abhay's entry vil b later on in d story. i just hd to keep dis scene as prologue!

i will add u rite away! 😊 plz accept my buddy request.

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RuthlessQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello there! Now that was a fantastic start! I like the unique concept. If you don't mind can you please give the English translation of the dialogues in brackets from next time? That would be a great help.

It was funny how RK's dealing with his conflict in feelings. Dayum, now doesn't he have a big ego? 😆 Not surprised at all. His Devdas avatar is funny in a cute way! Now how can you not love this guy? He's adorable either way. Looks like he spilled the beans to Abhay in his drunken mess. But Abhay Raichand? Now don't tell me they look like twins! LoL Else poor Madhu would be in trouble.

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! 😊

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elusivepixie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RuthlessQueen
Hello there! Now that was a fantastic start! I like the unique concept. If you don't mind can you please give the English translation of the dialogues in brackets from next time? That would be a great help.

It was funny how RK's dealing with his conflict in feelings. Dayum, now doesn't he have a big ego? 😆 Not surprised at all. His Devdas avatar is funny in a cute way! Now how can you not love this guy? He's adorable either way. Looks like he spilled the beans to Abhay in his drunken mess. But Abhay Raichand? Now don't tell me they look like twins! LoL Else poor Madhu would be in trouble.

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! 😊

Lol no! Of course they are not twins. At first, I was going to keep Sultan in Abhay's role, but now-a-days Mr. Dupatta Don is irritating me...so I decided to keep him out. And bring in our very own cute vampu!

Edited by elusivepixie - 12 years ago