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CHAPTER-1

NEW GIRL

That day is final day to all of them.

They r going to complete their studies. so it is their last meeting. They don't know will they meet again or not?

so they arranged a party tonight.

One girl " hi,neha."

Neha "hi, swetha"😔

Swetha "what happened neha?u r luking so sad."

Neha " ya,swetha.today we r all going to our houses and we will never meet again. really I am feeling bad to leave all of u."

Swetha " me,too neha.we r going to miss our college days, our buddies ...especially...we r going to miss our surbhi"

Neha " ya,u r right.we will miss her definitely. Afterall she is our best buddy."

Swetha " ha,ya she supported us in every moment.she is a gud supporter and best buddy.now a days no one will help others like surbhi.she is really a pretty girl.who always makes fun and wants to keep others happy"

Neha " ha,she knew how to make others happy when they r sad."

Swetha " yup, where is she?"😕

Neha "she gone to complete her daily job first."(her daily job is meeting her friends(childs).she likes to meet orphans.so today also she gone to meet them and will come back in any minute..)

Hi girls...

A 24 years girl wished her friends.

Swetha, Neha " hi..."

Girl "sorry for late"

Swetha " it's ok surbhi.no need to say sorry.how many times we said no need to say sorry and thanks?"

Surbhi " ok ok girls.so wat's up?"

Neha " oh my god surbhi.today we r leaving this college and our friends. u r luking so normal as daily."

Surbhi "come on girls.why we should feel sad?infact we have to feel happy. bcoz we r going in to a new phrase in our lives.so we should feel happy.from today onwards our responsibilities will increase and we will get a chance to prove ourselves in this world."

Neha "again started...surbhi plz stop it yaar. atleast today don't talk about responsibilities blah blah...it is our last day yaar. We should have fun"

Surbhi " ya,neha,we should have fun."😆

Swetha " ok,girls.now I am hungry yaar,plz first I have to eat something."

Neha "swetha,daily how many times u will eat?few minutes ago u completed lays packets na."

Swetha " neha,I know u r jealousy of me."

Neha " why should I feel jealous of u?"

Swetha " bcoz I completed lays without offering u?"

Neha "excuse me.if I want to eat it.i can get myself."

Swetha "then why r u teasing me?"

Surbhi "oh,come on girls stop it.neha plz don't tease her."

Neha "surbhi luk at her.when she joined in this college.she is normal weight like us.luk at her today she is double size comparing to her first days in this college.(to swetha)u can do diet na."

Surbhi "wait girls'''.i have to say a shayri regarding to dieting''..

Dieting karvaye akle ko, akle hoi hai moti,
Dieting karvaye akle ko, akle hoi hai moti,
How will you kicher that, when there is no choti!

How is it girls'''.

Swetha and neha "waahwa ..waahwa'."👏👏

Surbhi "thanks thanks.." 😛

Swetha "surbhi I want to ask u a question from so many days.today I will ask u.when u first joined in this college no one wants to talk to u.honestly, all used to tease u.but never u luk so sad or feeling bad regarding their comments.how can u be so cool?

Surbhi "swetha,i will never ever wants to take their words to heart. so I am happy."


Neha "u moves closely with all.but u never shared ur pain with us.

i mean u moves with us closely.but when I saw ur eyes.i felt that u r missing something.i mean someone is there in ur life that u can share ur pain or happiness.am i right?"

Swetha " surbhi,today we r leaving u and this college.atleast today can u tell us about ur family?"

Surbhi "swetha...my family is ma,papa,two luvely sisters elder than me."

Neha "really,then why u hidden about ur sisters?u never said about them.plz tell more about ur family"

Surbhi " about my family'''my parents luvs me a lot.my sisters r my world.i luv them.i can do anything for them.they too luves me."

Neha " their names?"

Suddenly a boy interrupted them..

" hi girls'."

Surbhi, neha, swetha "hi,varun"

Swetha, neha giggling " aashiqui No-1"

Varun " surbhi,I want to talk to u urgently."

Surbhi "ya,varun."

Varun " surbhi''I want to tell u something from so many days. But I am nervous to tell it."

Surbhi " come on varun.u can share anything with me."

Varun " surbhi''i''.i luv u'..(he said by shutting his eyes with nervousness)"

Surbhi , neha, swetha stood numb.

After few seconds surbhi started laughing'''

Surbhi " varun plz stop jokes."

Varun " no,surbhi.i am not playing jokes or pranks.seriously, I luv u."

Surbhi taken deep breath " sorry varun ."

Varun " but,why surbhi?"

Surbhi " varun,I never felt for u as u felt for me.u r my friend.just friend.i like u as my friend."

Varun " it's okay.atleast we should be friends na."😊

Surbhi "ofcourse'.."😊

Varun " thanks alot surbhi.. I am going to miss u badly."

Surbhi " I too'"

Varun " bye."

Surbhi "bye'."

Swetha " surbhi,u know varun luvs u a lot.and he is a gud guy.then why u rejected his proposal?atleast u can accept him.why r u rejecting all? Not only he so many guyz proposed u.but u never said ok to any guy?why?is there anyone in ur life already?"

Last question made surbhi numb.

*flash back*

someone is running behind her.and he is calling dimpu '''wait''''u will have to pay for it'''.

Surbhi or dimple " try to catch me''''."

That guy is 5 years older than surbhi " his face is not clear''''.."

Surbhi "try to catch me rish'''u can't.as always u r a looser'''"

Suddenly neha disturbed her

Neha "what happened?what r u thinking?"

Surbhi "nothing'''nothing.ok girls i have to leave now."

Neha " ya, we have to leave.."

Swetha " but,what about party tonight?"

Neha " ya,we will have to attend to party.what about u surbhi"

Swetha "surbhi r u coming to party tonight?"

Surbhi "sorry,friends..."🤔

Neha "oh,come on surbhi.plz it's our last day."

Surbhi "ya,I knew it.but I can't attend to party."

Swetha "ok neha leave her and we also not attending to party."

Surbhi "plz swetha'.."

They stood silently'''

Surbhi "ok,fine.i will come."

Swetha neha "yay,that's my girl."

All r attended to party.

Swetha,neha,surbhi also'''

All r enjoying party a lot'''..

Except surbhi.she sat at a corner of that hall.she is thinking something.her friends r enjoying party with other friends.

*Flashback*

Rish " dimpu,what happened?"

Dimpu "Rish,today we r leaving this school and our friends."😔

Rish "come on dimp.we should feel happy.now we r going to higher studies.it means we r entering in to a new world.smile now"😊

Dimpu "Rish, I am going to miss u badly'..(she made a puppy face) u will never meet me again na."

Rish " oh,plz sweet heart who said that i will never meet u .u r my buddy.if i wanna take any step in my future i will decide after consulting u only.u r so important in my life.u knew it.i will never leave u."

Dimpu " promise me."

Rish "promise''"

*present*

Surbhi to herself " Rish,where r u?u said that u will never leave me.but today I am all alone here.without u my life is incomplete Rish"

IN RK MANSION

RK conversation with a photo

in photo he is with a girl(dimple)

RK : dimpu,i miss u alot.i don't know u remember ur Rish or not.but i will never forgotten my Dimpu.without consulting u i made so many mistakes in my life.in school days when i need u u r there for me and supported me alot.today when i need u u r not there with me. Dimpu plz come back in to my life.i need u badly...plz dimpu comeback in to my life..."

in party:

surbhi "swetha neha now i have to leave.plz ..."

swetha neha" ok..."

surbhi "thanks...bye..."

they shared a group hug with their friends.

all luvs surbhi alot. bcoz she is cool and pretty girl.genious in studies so their lecturers also luvs her alot.

she bid gud bye to all and left that place.

she reached her room.she was hell tired.so she went to bed.

in RK mansion

Rish " Dimpu...plz come back.i want to share my pain with u.plz...only u can deal me."

he is crying holding their photo.

slowly RK stood and trying to move.mistakenly he stepped on a broken glass piece.

"ouch..."he shouted with pain...

in room:

" RISH..." surbhi opened hey eyes with fear...

she is sweating...

surbhi " Rish...what happened to him?is he okay?why i am feeling that he is calling me?i think he needs me...no,surbhi plz calm down.he is happy in his life.nothing will happen to him."

surbhi" Bappa plz stay with my Rish always and save him from all obstacles.plz bappa...plz give him happiness which he deserves..."

MALIK MANSION:

it is madhubala shamsher malik mansion ...

while she is watching TV.she saw her interview in TV.

when reporter asking about sultan and her relationship.

madhu "while she is asking about sultan and my relationship.why i left that place without giving answer?really i made a big mistake without clearing that crap news."

hope all of u like it..

P.S: plz do comments...😊 and hit LIKE button

Edited by sai.janu350 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me 1
Awesome update
Con soon
Edited by alexrock - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nc start Sai.. SO SURBI rks childhood frnd.. Cool, cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE START
WILL SURBHI REUNITE MADHU AND RK
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
surbhi is childhood buddy of rk , that cools , i always wanted someone so close to rk , so that he freely share his happiness , pain every thinggs , thanks for completing my wish
waiting for nxt update
thanks for pm & continue soon
Edited by singhshailesh86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Chapter Saj! I like Surbhi! 😳 I don't mind if Surbhi & RK get together even, because I'm pissed with Madhu in the show 😡 Yuck today we have to put up with her meeting that sadak chap again! 🤢 So I ship RK/Surbhi in this story! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice , read first chapter .
Amazing , do continue soon and pm me too .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RuthlessQueen

Awesome Chapter Saj! I like Surbhi! 😳 I don't mind if Surbhi & RK get together even, because I'm pissed with Madhu in the show 😡 Yuck today we have to put up with her meeting that sadak chap again! 🤢 So I ship RK/Surbhi in this story! 😊




thank u so much for liking SURBHI & RK pair 😃
Edited by sai.janu350 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

NICE START

WILL SURBHI REUNITE MADHU AND RK



😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdear

Nice..continue soon😛



thanks 😃

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