One Shot - Illusion - Page 2

Originally posted by: philantus

loved da OS dear...u portrayed madhu's feelings so well...hats off 😊😊

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it😊

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Nice OS.

Thank you :)

enti ee comments?? manam ikada telugu matladithe chalaaa safe 😉😆

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Shikzzz 🤗 U have no idea how many Bangs were there in this 🤣

I was bang bang after each dialogue madhu said.

😡

The disgust u portrayed was something which i really wanted to see in her, and the way she replied back about no t beeing able to hate🤢

i deamnd one more

😆I knew you would like it my missus NPM 🤗
I get it is not her nature to hate and all but everything has a goddamn limit even tolerance has. My tolerance got over and hence this OS, I am waiting for the day when her tolerance finishes😆
Glad you liked it Ashu🤗

"I cannot hate you, not because of the supposed love you think I have for you. It is because I was not bought up like this. I am born to a mother, who had taught me not to hate a man who wanted me to die even as a child, I was born to a mother who had instilled such morals in me but today the inability of hating you is making me hate myself."

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

"I cannot hate you, not because of the supposed love you think I have for you. It is because I was not bought up like this. I am born to a mother, who had taught me not to hate a man who wanted me to die even as a child, I was born to a mother who had instilled such morals in me but today the inability of hating you is making me hate myself."

@bold...this line stole my heart, Shikzz🤗. its awesome. the self talk ...i love these self talks a lot..which makes us realize..in which state we are in. self questioning, self comparison..everything.

who said a story can look good only when complicated words are used?...it will look more lovely only when everyone understand the writer's perspective and depth of the emotions which can be sensed.

"A story is a letter that the author writes to himself, to tell himself things that he would be unable to discover otherwise." 😳

First of all a big hug to you Kittu🤗
Second of all... I love self talk too😆 That reminds me I do self taking when I am pissed. Maybe that's beside the point.😆

Thank you for your support Kittu. Frankly the only reason I have written this story is to let out the thoughts hammering inside my head, for my own sanity.

"A story is a letter that the author writes to himself, to tell himself things that he would be unable to discover otherwise."

Wow! Can't agree more to the brilliance of these two lines.🤗

Awesome Maggie...Madhu should be feeling all this but the hero centric CVs never give her anything proper to say and even if she say she herself forgets it a minute later...Love u for this display of Madhu's POV...Thanks😛

Originally posted by: jazzerette

The thought that had immediately struck as soon as I was finished reading is too pretentious to be put up here.

But that does not take away from the fact that this piece is a jewel among all your works.

I would like to know that thought in personal😆
Hope we have a nice long debate cum discussion about it😆

Me ___ you btw. Go figure what comes in the blank.🤗

Originally posted by: siyana

Nice os

Thank you :)