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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

The thought that had immediately struck as soon as I was finished reading is too pretentious to be put up here.

But that does not take away from the fact that this piece is a jewel among all your works.

Edited by jazzerette - 12 years ago

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Sadnya

@sadumaneet

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful I just love the way u wrote madhu's feelings it was just bang on. Keep writing will loveto read ur further work.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sadumaneet
Beautiful I just love the way u wrote madhu's feelings it was just bang on. Keep writing will loveto read ur further work.

Thank you. My writing would be directly proportional to how much I would be moved by the episode so I hope more shall come from me :)
Once again thank you!

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Shikzzz 🤗 U have no idea how many Bangs were there in this 🤣

I was bang bang after each dialogue madhu said.

😡

The disgust u portrayed was something which i really wanted to see in her, and the way she replied back about no t beeing able to hate🤢

i deamnd one more

Edited by Loquacious_Aash - 12 years ago

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

@.Maggie.: Nyc OS!!!!😊

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful n awesome OS...

I soo wish ...had it happened in show it would b easy to digest coz then it would've shown RK's love but ...chal leave it..but loved ur OS

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
beautiful n awesome OS...

I soo wish ...had it happened in show it would b easy to digest coz then it would've shown RK's love but ...chal leave it..but loved ur OS

Thank you. I wrote in Madhu's POV because I can understand her. I wish to see a day where we would be blessed with a clear perspective of RK's behavior and actions.