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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mimibm

Our thirst for risque Rishbala moments is insatiable 😳😆...so plzzz...go ahead and blow our minds away... 😛

well, you said it so, I is bringing it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_madhu


No all thanx to u..and yh being jewish xplainable..and em reading too much in btwn huh..
Buh thats true that sum jus get lucky and also its trigger affected so its ol on da situations one lands up in really..my bad i jus read thru mah books to c..affective is both da phrenia n bipolarisms..mood swings n hallucination thou wht u did show was phrenia..buh anyways i jus end up reading too much into things at tyms so wiv ur questn..

Do ur worst deary em open to da most risque u cud be..even erotic horror..thou i dont tink many wud be able to digest that..

Jus update asap..and wiv loadzz rishbala n ur risque factor..thumbs upmfrom me on that..

Till en..tc

no, I don't think you are reading too much, you are reading just the right amount into the plot.
One could argue that this particular episode is more focused on hallucinations than mania (which was subtly expressed with words such as racing thoughts, pacing, outbursts of a string of words that make no sense). But, the positive symptoms of schizophrenia are very similar to that of mania and a diagnosis is not made based on one episode. Some times you get mixed episodes, sometimes exclusive to either mood or hallucinations. As you will see dispersed throughout the chapters, already published and upcoming, this is in fact a mixed episode. I don't have a more descriptive way to show mania because Storm, the main hallucination, comes on way too strong on his own, for other things to get noticed. Subtly is my best option here.

Risque it is. Seen ya'all soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey


I glob ju oh so much. Stalk away, I will bring free drinks from time to time😆
I even put links at the front for your convenience.
Also, I needs to know your name, if that's okay.


"I glob ju"? Hawww...u speak alien? I do too! I take dat dis is a writer's confession of profound love for her reader,oui?
Free drinks? Dats an offer I can't refuse! How abt a Mc Spicy Chicken Burger+ french fries to go wid d drinks? *gets comfortable in her spy tree-house* lol! Kidding.
U want to know my name?Hmmm...here's d deal...y don't u guess it? (Hint: Collection of art ; treasure) dats a majorrr hint!
Don't underestimate d power of google,says d layman! Still if ya don't get it...fikar nawt! Me ijj sitting in dis tree-house only!
Edited by ForbiddenFruit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit


"I glob ju"? Hawww...u speak alien? I do too! I take dat dis is a writer's confession of profound love for her reader,oui?
Free drinks? Dats an offer I can't refuse! How abt a Mc Spicy Chicken Burger+ french fries to go wid d drinks? *gets comfortable in her spy tree-house* lol! Kidding.
U want to know my name?Hmmm...here's d deal...y don't u guess it? (Hint: Collection of art ; treasure) dats a majorrr hint!
Don't underestimate d power of google,says d layman! Still if ya don't get it...fikar nawt! Me ijj sitting in dis tree-house only!

yes, you got me! I come from Mars to destroy all of humanity.

me and macdonalds do not get along. taco bell on the other hand😉😉
Hindi is my third language. so, don't be expecting me to get it right girl but, here it goes: either khazana (urdu) or Nidhi (hindi)
the latter one is more likely

already ms. spy, how did I do?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Agent Jassu! You failed Mission 'What's in a name' quite miserably! Seems like you need to sharpen your investigating skills.
You are not even remotely close! Okay I will tell you my name.
Brace yourself for the moment of revelation!
*background music building up* My name is...SANCHITA!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm em definately not ignoring ur subtle hints, yup i get it was a mixed epi and u defo cudnt hav shown it betta, n as u mentioned storm is strong..wat is da reason behind tis..why storm lyk der must be sum story to that..and i shave a feeling it was brought on by being da underdog always and that sumwhr dis mania was her way to get outta it..buh when it gotntoo strong bak to da drinks we were..thankfully rishbh dis tym aroundhas aa companion n not a preacher(not that its gud to run away or be cowardly buh suntyms liquid courage is needed to forget or take flight whteva..here da mania plus merlot..i wud hav stolen it wivout guilt..any)

And contract marriage - thats grt i mean no betta way to sum up his arrogant ignorant rich brat ways and to explain em cumin to live togetha n get married..ek teer se too many shikars- me likes..
Rk tinking yvette as in da maid yvette..thou shes way to sexy?? I noe he isnt buh em an oppurtunist..
Hmm ahaan..me likey..him tinking it belongs me likey, he tinking she she duznt tink so- me likey..he saying da money getter his face me luvz so rkish..
Stealing glances at her bust- me likey dont beat around da bush or give reasons..hes a man n she has a perfect set..not tht even jf she didnt he wudnt luk buh whteva..
Her episode very well.written so is his damaged goods tirade..
I liked it that u dint give un necessary explaination to his behaviour..our world has billions of ppl..too many possibilities..too much xplaination or forethot on da actions..deal breaker..more passion n impulse..let nature take its course n let things fall in olace by emselvz..

And madhu's birth n lvettes death and a spl purgatory gud un..
And u noe sumtyms in da show its too much ya knw..one moment shes a lioness at heart n den next shes a fragile doll..manya tyms out'f world intellectvn den downryt gibberish..emmglad u got her a proper character and added quirks.. so ol of da drama wudnt feel odd..buh again it may be unintentional huh..jus making da story interesting..

Anyways eagerly waiting for ur upcuming parts..em xpecting an update tomrw..sunday specials sweetie..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ 4bidden fruit
Being neighbourly em just a few trees away..
It wud be a pleasure to spy togetha thou em more into hounding..
Edited by cute_madhu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit

Agent Jassu! You failed Mission 'What's in a name' quite miserably!


you said it not moi so, I will repeat your words for good measure. what's in a name girl?

Seems like you need to sharpen your investigating skills.
You are not even remotely close! Okay I will tell you my name.
Brace yourself for the moment of revelation!
*background music building up* My name is...SANCHITA!

Palm to face. I was wondering why you called yourself sanchu. guess I can't put two and two together. so much for the degree in progress. I will never get into CIA now😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

@ 4bidden fruit
Being neighbourly em just a few trees away..
It wud be a pleasure to spy togetha thou em more into hounding..

elm guise. I suck like LEGIT suck at text lingo.
I have been looking at your other comment for the nth time and I still don't understand what you are saying. plain english for my old soul please? pretty please?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haha ha..umm well it a summation of all you wrote and that i liked..u suck at text lingo and i write university exams in it..
We'll have to find a bridge huh..
Well der is just one thing that u shud have undrrstood and that is that i expect my sunday specials - anodr bongbala update..
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Pretty please..

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