SS:Bongbala (Ch8 THE END pg 38) - Page 14

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Oh my count me in..
Have cum accross such proof written fictn afta a long while..kudos..
Keep posting..

*wl give an edit latr*

Love it loadz..muaahz..tc


- Ur's Ever Madhu

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

oh hai, new reader!

good to have you in the land of *cough* decent writing *cough*, if I may so myself.

I am not perfect but, I try real hard

yes, you guessed it, I feel like bragging today😆

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Sorry for spamming buh amazing title btw..

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Most definately deserving too..
A writer who takes care of subtelities, maintaining rhythm n not including unnecessary mundanities..oh puhleez u r a keeper hon..
why thank you.
Lyk i'l jus point out dat u had wriiten abt her affliction to drinking and rishbh noticing it too..

she's got quite the collection. plus, jewish. come on

by da end of second chapter having confirmed that u dont ill use words i knew it must have meant sumthing and wiv da entry of storm in da third..i had prepared myself for pshycotic behaviour..

tbh, it was unconscious but, I will happily take the credit😆

and schizoaffective is a good choice phrenic wud have been a bit worser and not so subdued..

no a big NO schizoaffective is just as debilitating, if not more, that schizophrenia. then again, all SMI is a spectrum and some people get lucky (less episodes), others don't.
Anyways i gotta sleep thou em not goin to be doing that soon buh once i start reviewing..hai tauba..
Its 4:30 morn..em gonna have a episode mahself if i dont get sum shut eye..
sweet dreams :)
Will be back..until later..

Originally posted by: ranitha

Reserving comments till the next chapteeer

Originally posted by: ranitha

OK fine I wont be mean. RK 's reaction was brilliant. That's probably exactly the way the RK you have shown us would think. Yup RK was great through the entire chapter. Especially this part
Rishabh sat across the room, pizza still in lap, dumbfounded. What was happening? Surely, there was a logical explanation to his wife going from shy to strange to assaulting to bonkers in a matter of minutes. Right, she need medical attention. Or, maybe a witch doctor? No, definitely a real doctor. She sounded manic--
True Jassu ishtyle!

elm ooh okay, I didn't see that one coming.

I need a (metaphorical) drink to swallow that

Madhu , poor darling I felt for her.

No Named Earworm and Nice Ghosty? Names for evil imaginary people? Jassu , tell the truth. Have you binged on coffee?

the (very) few people I have met who experiences prolonged hallucinations had strange sounding names for these voices, I was just going with the flow

on that note *withdrawal symptoms alert*

I haven't had timmies' coffee or nothin' for a solid month. I is going crazy here. screw you herbal tea! you can never be anything more than a poor person's coffee
All comments apart, I LOVE HOW THIS STORY IS GOING

thank you