Sultan&Madhubala: The Perfume - Page 3

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

wowww...

Seeing as I'm editting everything today it's time for your OS now😎 woaahh it's been like 3 weeks:O sorry sorry I'll give you barfi from the local mithai dukaan to make up for it! Promise🤣 ahshagq I loved the way it's been written, it just flows so smoothly as you read it, I know you don't write laal Tamatar stuff cause you blush like a laal duppata🤣 but your description and everything is AHGAAHSBAMQHSB❤️ 'he allowed himself to welcome the distraction of darkness' I love this line cause it clearly shows his feelings aaah i am totally going to use this line if I ever write something😛 don't worry I'll give credit(mainly cause of the axe you carry😭🤣)
Haaayee he smiled at aryan I can just picture him smiling right now☺️☺️
LOL heheheh he was jelly of him cause he could just easily say HB but our babes is all shy shy to say it😉 aahhh she left her bag making it even more easier for sultan to just gift the prez without saying anything:P totally loved the ending, she sprayed it and that's all that was needed to show their love❤️ PURE BEAUTY THIS OS WAS! you have to write more kotti, I need more of them in my life it's so boring without seeing them onscreen:( but reading your Os's will help me visualise them in my head
LOVE YOUUU(even tho I don't say it that much but just thought I'd show you some love today🤣) mwaah baB3z xoxoxo

Aahh I pressed enter, I quoted your OS so I could read it again & just posted my comment aswell🤣 pssht ohh well I still commented:P

I'm gonna edit my comment tomorrow foz (pls dont kill me for having taken so long :() but LMFAO twips ur axe line had me cracking up 🤣 I actually forgot about foz and her axe till now! 🤣
And lmaooo blush like a laal dupatta 🤣 agahaha foz and her love for dupattas and valleys coming in my mind now 🤣
And yeah that's all I have to say...toodles (that sounds so weird coming from me🤣) xoxoxo

Oh this was just wonderful! Short, beautiful and so sweet!