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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Its an awesuw and lovely os.

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Sophronia

@Sophronia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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:( im last boohoo loool

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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

aaawww so sweet sultan you devil 😳😳😳 brought madhu a gift ❤️ loved it dear keep it up waiting for more and thankz for the pm😃😃😃

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow this is awsome u described madhu and sultans relation very well that is pure and magical

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WL.PM

@WL.PM

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: saudade
This is amazing. You should write more fanfics. 👏❤️

Thank you! I write a lot on Maan-Geet, but I should venture more into the land of Sultan-Madhubala 😆

Originally posted by: Merry_Shwit
aww this is soo AMAzinnggg!!! You write so beautifully
please keep writing more 😳

Thank you! 😊 I definitely will!

Originally posted by: Drashti-MyIdol
lovely

Thanks!

Originally posted by: -Siaa-
Beautiful!
Reading this I can definitely ascertain that beauty lies in these very words. Subtle yet heart-touching!
Sultan's increasing liking for her, the way he's attuned to her each breath, the desire to be as free as his son is with her, need I say why I love Sultan a bit more than everyone else :D
To be true, I definitely would love to see this pair!

I think we all fell a bit for this romantic Sultan 😳 I agree, they are sizzling with an intense chemistry and I hope we see a lot more of them!

Originally posted by: Aneri401
awesome dear...do keep writing :D the os was really sweet :D

Thank you!

Originally posted by: havokhotline
This might not be much but I just wanted to say that I adore your writing.

You should go professional! Your writing is just so moving. It makes me feel so involved and everything.

Sultan is so sublime in this. :) I just love how he knows he's falling for her.

Could you do something on Madhu's POV sometime? Only if you can. :)

I loved it! Please write more and more on Sultan-Madhubala. :D

Thank you very much! That's an amazing compliment, I'm really flattered 😳

I definitely will write from Madhu's POV, a few ideas are swirling around in my mind, just need to piece them together 😊

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Should I ask you separately for PMs now? I hate you and this is my res.

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Aww!
AWW!
AWWHHH!
Okay ask me to shut up now😆
But really, it was so simple, so sweet, and very much like the characters of the show. While Monsoon rains was fast forward into the future, this one showed the near future😆 and me lubed it. 😳
Perfume bottles are beautiful aren't they? Even Whiskey bottles are for that matter🤣
Anyway you better buy some nice perfume bottle for me, my b'day is around the corner too😆

Sorry babes but at least you lobed it 😉

Monsoon Rains was like 4-5 months ahead of this one 😆 I should edit that and include a part where they have a perfume bottle at the side of the table and he's witness to their consummation 🤣

hawww Sultan doesn't like alcohol, he's a shareef bacha 🤣

I'll send a specialised perfume bottle for you, don't worry. it'll be made with my own fair hands

(note, may include 'unusual' choice of chemicals) pahahahaha 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: magicaleyes
beautiful😳😳

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: sandiab
Breath takingly beautiful u have a gift. Each emotion, each expression was beautifully described wish we get so,ething like this in the show.

Thank you so much! I hope so too, keep the fingers, eyes and toes crossed

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Loved it!!!!

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: rusha4003
Awww.. that was amazingly heartwarming ... and adorable ...

Loved how Sultan is becoming aware of MB ... Sighhh ...

Could you write a part 2 ? ... Maybe about MB's reactions on the gift and her thoughts and feelings about S ?

Would love to read more from you ...

PS: what do I call you ? ... Am Usha ! 😊

Thanks Usha! Sultan falling in love = we all faint from such adorableness 😆

I could do a sequel to this, with Madhu's thoughts and feelings - leave it to me 😉

I'm Fozia, but you can alter or abbreviate that to whatever you feel comfortable with (keep it nice though) 😆

Originally posted by: -Shruti.M-
awesome!!!!!!!!

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: -Narnia-
nice

Thank you!

Originally posted by: .Angel
wow nice one and I now want SulBala jodi more than ever now.

let Sultan's wife alive or dead come I will still ask for SulBala jodi.

Join the club 😆 even if they don't end up together, a few months of them falling in love would soothe my soul 😳

Originally posted by: DevilClan
Its an awesuw and lovely os.

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: L0V3
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:( im last boohoo loool

You're fashionably late 😎

Originally posted by: tamzin43
aaawww so sweet sultan you devil 😳😳😳 brought madhu a gift ❤️loved it dear keep it up waiting for more and thankz for the pm😃😃😃

Thank you! and you're most welcome 😊

Originally posted by: mariescott14
*sighs* so dreamy
loved it

If only something like this happened in the show... perhaps he wouldn't be as romantic though 😆

Originally posted by: krock
wow this is awsome u described madhu and sultans relation very well that is pure and magical

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: mehwish134
lovely

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Deemagkibatti
This is one of the most brilliant pieces of writing...I am simply floored by your subtle brilliance. Simply amazing. You are superb writer and scene creator. Hats off to you. Absolutely lovely piece of writing. After a long time, I was forced to reread something. Please PM me whenever you write anything. Take care. - Lata

Lata, this comment has left me speechless. I can't thank you enough, I am genuinely flattered and I hope my future work doesn't let you down. I most definitely will PM you when I post something next time, thank you so much once again and I really appreciate it 😊

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ornella_mg

@ornella_mg

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Loved it! Pls do keep writing more.

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627976

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Omg this is a MASTERPIECE. Period!

I have no words to say how much i enjoyed this OS or to describe this beautifully...

U have a talent that WOLRD needs to look up to...

Maybe u can try professional writing...

But ofcourse do more on SulBala...

I love this beauty work and YOU...❤️