OS: Stay - Madhu & Sultan Note Pg 10 Mar 30

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ornella_mg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Beautiful os. Loved it very much. Pls do keep writing.

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Hi Jaz ... am fine with both Eng & Hin...

but as you're writing the story in Eng ... I'd prefer the dialogs to be in Eng too ...😊

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Aaah I just loved this:D was written so beautifully I didn't want it to finish<3 do write more on sulbala pls cause I really love the way you write:) xo

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-
Ooohhh awsome piece of work.. <3 :D

thanks! glad you enjoyed it! 😳

Originally posted by: ornella_mg
Beautiful os. Loved it very much. Pls do keep writing.

thats very sweet...next part to this story should be up soon 😃

Originally posted by: -MzIndependant-
Aaah I just loved this:D was written so beautifully I didn't want it to finish<3 do write more on sulbala pls cause I really love the way you write:) xo

this is one of my shorter stories...the next one is significantly longer so it will last longer 😆

Originally posted by: DeadDevil
so when r u updting next?

hopefully this week...im almost done with the story...once i post it...you'll see why its taking so long...and i have this thing that until im relatively happy with the way it has turned out...i wont post it...so...fingers crossed...im about 75% done 😳

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 12 years ago

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

MY vote for HinGlish😆 i'm ok with both languages

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Sophronia

@Sophronia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

this was incredible!!!!!!! wow you write so so so well!! 😃

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Ziva01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Fabulous OS Jaz 👏👏 ...awaiting for ur next one

Edited by -Priya01 - 12 years ago

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

i voted for ENglish as i find it takes time to read Hinglish 😳
may be you cud consider hindi dialogues ( as sommetimes the expressions come stronger in that particular language) and give a translation of the same for the same for lazy people like me?😳

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Lyla Khan

@Echoesofpassion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

lol you're so right about the way he apologized!😆 gash I just LOVE him😳 and don't worry about the Sulbala fans, they are increasing day by day😆👍🏼😎

"Sultan was at war - at war with himself. His mind scolded him for having such thoughts about Madhubala"-that's about to happen soon in the show😉 <3 THUD*

And OMG LOVE the ending! uff you got me hooked onto an FF even though I don't read!🤣

Which is probably why you don't see me commenting on OS or FFs that much😆 :$

loved it though!! of course cuz of it was on Sulbala but also cuz of your beautiful writing <3

took me into my imaginary world of these 2!

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: L0V3
this was incredible!!!!!!! wow you write so so so well!! 😃

thanks yaar...i appreciate the comment 😳

Originally posted by: -Priya01
Fabulous OS Jaz 👏👏 ...awaiting for ur next one

thanks! next one is up! 😳

Originally posted by: bangalores
i voted for ENglish as i find it takes time to read Hinglish 😳
may be you cud consider hindi dialogues ( as sommetimes the expressions come stronger in that particular language) and give a translation of the same for the same for lazy people like me?😳

tauba...tu naa...mujhe aur kaam deh rahi hai...sharam kaar...kuch toh sharam kar! ha ha...missed you yaar!
JAZ