OS: Stay - Madhu & Sultan Note Pg 10 Mar 30 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Cassie..

I agree absolutely @purple Jaz.

Will be back to read.

aana...bhul maat jana 😳...cant wait to see your comment 😳

Originally posted by: Azmatazz

Wow!! Jaz amazing OS. Love reading your piece of work. Its always a pleasure 😊

Aww...thanks hun! it means so much that you enjoyed it and loved it! 😃

Originally posted by: darindigi

awesome 1...

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

You have your own way with the words..and the songs u choose...😳 they depict many emotions!!!

loved it to the core!!! 😊

the song choose me actually...lol...randomly came across it as i was driving...its odd because usually im listening to the music on my phone which is 99% desi music 😆...thanks for reading and the comment 😃

Originally posted by: s-o-m-m-i-e

wow!!that was amazing...

thank you!! 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: punam2712

LOVELY OS

FINALLY YOU GAVE A HINT OF SULTANS' CHANGING FEELINGS FOR HER

HER DAILY FIGHT TO JUST EXIST SHOWED HOW MUCH SHE IS UNDER STRESS AND THAT SULTAN KNOWS IT

AND NOW EVEN HE WANTS HER TO STAY

i figured since CV's arent moving along the track i'd do it myself and show Sultans feelings first 😆...CV's ka bhi bharosa nahin...pata nahin kaal koi chauta ladka aajayeh 😕...lol...j/k...and i love your phrase "daily fight to exist"...i might use it for the next part 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

thanks!! how've you been yaar? long time...😳

u remember me... 😲 i thought u might have forgotten me . yup.. its been very long time... i m good. how are you? how is your job and the trainee? is she still looking at the phone or picking up? 🤣

Ahaaan...😉 you choose desi songs though..but this one is apt here in this story!!!

Lovely os. Simple n beautiful.

Jaz! This is absolutely amazing! OMG! So, Sultan is like my guilty pleasure these days and the way you have managed to capture the tumultuous relationship (that I hope Sultan and Madhu will have) is beyond amazing! Kudos girl! And definitely looking forward to the sequel and hopefully many more to come!

Unresd my comment on Page 1!

Originally posted by: jnawaz

😲...omg...OMG...😲...its been ages!! i cant even clearly remember when was the last time we interacted...but so glad to have found you here!! and yes...looks like we still like the same pairs...as they say...great minds think alike 😉...

JAZ

i know😆 i am so waiting to see more from you

I can see Sultan being a good friend and confidante to Madhu in this OS. I dont quite get the romance angle just yet. But the possibility of companionship built on trust really shone through here... and that excites me :) I hope you do continue!

Really well written! 👍🏼

Amazing OS ..Beautiful One
Loved it very Much
Thank u for Sharing