OS: Stay - Madhu & Sultan Note Pg 10 Mar 30 - Page 6

Originally posted by: harshdb

u remember me... 😲 i thought u might have forgotten me . yup.. its been very long time... i m good. how are you? how is your job and the trainee? is she still looking at the phone or picking up? 🤣

of course i remember my loyal readers...its you guys that i miss the most...thats why im so happy that Sultan/Madhu inspire me so much that i want to write again...after Geet ended i was bummed because i lost my inspiration...but now...im back!! 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Ahaaan...😉 you choose desi songs though..but this one is apt here in this story!!!

I missed your previous posts and stories...so couldn't comment that time..but when i get opportunity..i should do it. cannot miss this chance!! 😊

Its been very very long time reading your posts!!! Thanks again for the STORY!!

Cant wait for the next part na the SONG you selected for it!!! 😳

ya...usually its desi songs and im a sucker for the sad, sappy Desi songs..w.hich is why im usually killing off one character...but when i heard this song...i immediately pictured sultan and Madhu...😳...thanks for the wonderful comment and im working on next installment as we speak 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: |Persephone|

Jaz! This is absolutely amazing! OMG! So, Sultan is like my guilty pleasure these days and the way you have managed to capture the tumultuous relationship (that I hope Sultan and Madhu will have) is beyond amazing! Kudos girl! And definitely looking forward to the sequel and hopefully many more to come!

right!? he's my guilty pleasure too!! he he...i watch the shows after i get home from work...and Madhubala is the last one i watch...especially since we've had a lot of Sultan lately!! its ah-mazing!! he he...i have a total weak spot for those bad boys that are really good at heart 😆...next part hopefully will be finished by the beginning of the week...im excited to share it too! 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

ya...usually its desi songs and im a sucker for the sad, sappy Desi songs..w.hich is why im usually killing off one character...but when i heard this song...i immediately pictured sultan and Madhu...😳...thanks for the wonderful comment and im working on next installment as we speak 😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: havokhotline

UNRESD:

*Takes two steps back*

LADY.

*dramatic pause*

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY SULBALA OBSESSED LIFE?! he he...i can as soon as i could! it takes a bit of time to get the creative juices flowing after such a long hiatus away from writing...😳

This was the most descriptively amazing oneshot I've read on this couple! :O i have a thing for details...i want the readers to picture what im picturing as i write...and im glad it came out that way this time 😊

I felt like I was doing a tango inside Sultan's head! Him and his warring emotions when it comes to Madhu. he's a conflicted soul...you'll see more of that in the next installment of this saga...and hopefully more to come 😉

And I love how there's barely any conversation in this. :O I mean, there are no dialogues yet the message of the Oneshot is so profound. aww...shucks...thanks! 😳...dialogue is great..but not always needed in stories...especially this time because it was all about Sultan's inner turmoil 😃

Your writing is flawless, needless to say. :D This just made my day :) thanks! glad you could enjoy it after exams! how did they go btw? 😃

Thank you so much for writing this! ;D aww..you're too sweet!! ☺️

Originally posted by: egle

I can see Sultan being a good friend and confidante to Madhu in this OS. I dont quite get the romance angle just yet. But the possibility of companionship built on trust really shone through here... and that excites me :) I hope you do continue!

Really well written! 👍🏼

you're right...the romance isnt there just yet...he cant go from nothing to madly-in-love in seconds or days...gotta build on the companionship emotions more...but in the long run i can see Sultan and Madhu as a couple...😳...working on next part...hope to have it up soon

JAZ