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Originally posted by: ..Enigma..

Superb update jasleen...i realy lykd d twist...poor madhu...

Originally posted by: iiDona

Originally posted by: luvera

Urrmmm... the new guy could be just as ruthless, but in a manipulative devious way... Sometimes a man who depends on instincts (Rishab) is better that one who depends on his brains (RK)... But she will have a better chance to rise from the ashes in a city than in a village... What happens in a village stays within the walls of the village... Not so much in a city though... Also here the new guy has an image to maintain... She could learn new tricks and learn how to change situations for her better...

Originally posted by: queenie11

I sincerely hope that what's coming isn't painful for Madhu

hope so as well

Great update, I look forward to reading more - your writing is incredible as always. I love how you interweave and play with the dialogues it's simply brilliant

this was very realistically put...any women when battered in a way Madhu is, shies away from strangers and is scared to seek help. The whole world appears just one and the same...Madhu is showing signs of a classic Victim...but on second thoughts she has just met RK, who is he? and why does he want to help me? what would he want in return? to seek help RK is not the person...but then it is INDIA help from any quarters MAY not be clear of under running motives...and you have shown her to be smart and intelligent and well read ...that is why she believes she is rather safe here than any where else...oh I so feel for this Madhu. Knowingly, unknowingly you were able to sketch a women really trapped under indian circumstances. God forbid but had I been in Madhu's place RK would have been the last person I would have sought help from. I dont feel like she should be with RK yet...but then may be he is her only chance at a better life...I am going round and round and round and round...please do point me to the correct direction Jasleen before I am lost...lol👏👏👏👏