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Posted: 12 years ago
A unique plot. An amazing start! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Please PM me if you do! =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooops! Just saw there are more than 2 chapters. *happily off to read*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Oh my goodness !

Now that makes sense 😆
About dropping hints 🤣
So RK and Rishabh are different !
So one is a good guy and one is bad !
I hope it is like that 😆
That is a load of my mind !
I didn't want to hate RK !
But i can hate Rishabh 😆
Your twists are mind blowing !
we needs to get this girl checked out 😆cause she ain't lettin go of the Rishabh mania. The dude raped a girl & beats the crap out of her everyday (well not punches but pushes & claws). you get the point. as far as good vs bad. i am not very fond of that theme for more reasons than one. If I were you, I won't count on fight sequences etc.
Waiting to see how the story proceeds !
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

A unique plot. An amazing start! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Please PM me if you do! =)

Thank you. will do.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

Ooops! Just saw there are more than 2 chapters. *happily off to read*

let me know what you think. this story makes me want to hear what people have to say about the setting and the plot and the characters and the dialogues, it screams a second look because the only way haq is taken is with a fight.
that didn't make sense at all. did it?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow this is some awesome story you came up with.. but the last part made my brain spin. I am a sucker for happy endings.. but yeah this is an awesome story none the less. We'll get a happy ending right? This man abuses the girl like no tomorrow =/

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Holy potatoes I thought he died! BUT HE's ALIVE!

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HOLY...cucumbers...! =O THAT WAS NOT RK? *faint*

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All right! Those were my reactions after reading each chapter! lol I don't know from where to start, But I could say one thing. Each chapter brought some new surprise! I love surprises! Oh man and never did I expect that kind of twists... I'm still trying to calm myself.

So this Rishabh... he abuses and subjugates her. Aww and he took her by force. Poor thing! He treats her like his slave.

I get it RK is playing the knight in shining armours in this story, correct? Funny, how all this time I was imagining RK as Rishabh. Can't imagine what you have in store for us... but I'm sure you'd give Madhu a happy ending, right? Aw and is she going to end up a Moti Begum? Hope not! 😕 He's an old man! 😭 Poor Madhu!

This is definitely quite different to what I usually read, but has a mind-blowing plot. So, yes looking forward to read the next chapter! Fantastic work you've done there!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

Wow this is some awesome story you came up with.. but the last part made my brain spin. I am a sucker for happy endings.. but yeah this is an awesome story none the less. We'll get a happy ending right? This man abuses the girl like no tomorrow =/

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Holy potatoes I thought he died! BUT HE's ALIVE!

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HOLY...cucumbers...! =O THAT WAS NOT RK? *faint*

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🤣 I just love your reactions. Happy ending, I am not sure that word means. Didn't see it in the dictionary. then again, I dont know what a tragic ending means either

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

All right! Those were my reactions after reading each chapter! lol I don't know from where to start, But I could say one thing. Each chapter brought some new surprise! I love surprises! Oh man and never did I expect that kind of twists... I'm still trying to calm myself.

So this Rishabh... he abuses and subjugates her. Aww and he took her by force. Poor thing! He treats her like his slave.

because that is what he thinks she is. That is how you treat your women anyway, his words.

I get it RK is playing the knight in shining armours in this story, correct?

no girl. there is no knight in my story. but there sure is someone just dont know who this RK is.

Funny, how all this time I was imagining RK as Rishabh. Can't imagine what you have in store for us... but I'm sure you'd give Madhu a happy ending, right? Aw and is she going to end up a Moti Begum? Hope not! 😕 He's an old man! 😭 Poor Madhu!

I dont know what I happy ending is and if I were you, I would not get my hopes up about the conventional fairytale.

This is definitely quite different to what I usually read, but has a mind-blowing plot. So, yes looking forward to read the next chapter! Fantastic work you've done there!

thank you very much and sorry for being a clueless, less than helpful writer when it comes to answering questions. I lose my train of thought every few minutes😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

🤣 I just love your reactions. Happy ending, I am not sure that word means. Didn't see it in the dictionary. then again, I dont know what a tragic ending means either

*laughs nervously* I have no choice here, but wait for you to update! (@_@)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

*laughs nervously* I have no choice here, but wait for you to update! (@_@)

I like to be in control most of the time😆😈

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