RishBala OS : Aisi Deewangi - Page 3

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

AHw! First of all thanx for the PM! I indeed am in love with your work.

OMG! This is definitely my favourite of your works. And that means a lot since all your works are simply perfect. But the matureness in their love and thosse moments, like RK looking at Madhu while she is dancing and how he realized he is in love. It was cheesy with so well executed that it doesn't feel cheesy... Do you understand me? You write everything so beautifully, I don't know how to explain. I just love those things. It made my heart flutter while reading. Feels so cute. And the confession was so passionate*blushes* awesome work! I do had a K-K-Kiran moment somewhere in the confession, but I had the idea you kinda wanted to go there, yet not making him some scary stalker. And you did so. Uff! The situeations were so real. the Affair, RK's insecurity at the end -I loved that part-, and the hug part, it wasn't some random hug, you really thought about it in the very beginning that the hug had a story behind it. You already told about Trishna in the bginning and in the end about their break up. I just found that beautifully done. you thought about everything Love your work!

p.s. I love long long OSs, especially if they are this good!

Originally posted by: CHAKKU_DAAYAN

Amazing OS. Loved it. Write on one jealous RK also :-)