FF: #Falling Defence [Prologue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys my exams are finally over and I promise this FF will get regular updates this one is the closest to my heart and It is a very emotional one too , I'm absolutely loving the way Mb and Rk's relation is shaping up . If I haven't bored you enough I'll proceed . prologue :)

PROLOGUE

I am shuddering , shivering as I entered the room which said ICU I couldn't bring myself to face her . Why ? Why did ? Why did she love me so much ? Why . I didn't deserve it I was totally incapable of her love . Why did She love me unconditionally . I remember throwing her out of the house even though I had brought her in . She was shattered I saw but I had to do it for my sister . She just looked back at me that day without saying a word and that look of hers had killed me . I was a monster I killed her I killed my Madhu and yet today she was ready to give up her life for me . I saw her face it was pale . The doctors had operated and she had a tons of horrible looking machines attached onto her . All those vile instruments on her inflicted pain on me . why did she do it for me I'm a bloody monster I looked at myself I couldn't see her like this every nerve in my body exploded with pain . I walked up to her she was there with an oxygen mask on her face , beneath I could see her face pale she was breathing .I just got lost in thoughts the way she had put herself in front of me I couldn't .. Madhu tears swelled up in my I just couldn't see her like this she was my *Hosla* my strength . I held her hand it felt lifeless, I remembered the first time she had confided in me and had placed her hand on mine she didn't deserve this .. Just didn't.




Please do give me your opinions and thanks for reading 😊
NIDHI :)
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TheAphrodite thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aneri401

nice start...do pm me


Thank you so much and I sure will :)
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Thank you :)
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awesome...plz continue soon n pm me !
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Originally posted by: sush12_DD

awesome...plz continue soon n pm me !

Thank you and I sure will :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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v nice and interesting prologue.do pm me plz whenever u update
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Originally posted by: vmpy

v nice and interesting prologue.do pm me plz whenever u update


Thank you n I sure will :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just too good.. do continue soon and add me to the pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahaan..interestin...plz pm me weneva u updt this SS...I wud luv to read further...😊
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interesting prologue
do continue fast 😊

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