Rishabala OS- The War! Part 2-Pg 11

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QuintessentialI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Very touching part 😭

Your writing brought tears in my eyes 👏 👏 👏 👏 beautifully scripted loved it ❤️

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Siona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: -Mayu-
Common Guys, Is the next part BAD?😭😭

is this ur signature style to type this after ur done with ur os?😆😆😆

i see it everywhere mayu darling...😳

cummon yaar...have faith in ur readers including me...we will defo like it...it depends on when we open our pm box and see ur pm...😳

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Happies endings...yippie..!!

Nikhil...poor guy..It's okay buddy, you too willl find someone..!!!😉

Awesome part dear..!!!👏

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

I THOUGHT IT WAS THE END

BUT THANKS FOR THE LOVELY PART

SO IT WAS ALL A PLAN TO DRIVE HER AWAY

AM GLAD THEY ARE TOGETHER AGAIN

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Tanmaya1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Mayu, Thank You for writing Part 2 of Rishabala OS The War

It is Awesome 👏 👏

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Simple-Girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Awesome OS..very touchy 😊

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.Umsasl.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Rishabala OS The War
It is Awesome..brought tears in my eyes beautifully scripted loved it..❤️

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Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Nice update likd it very much

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Arpita Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

emotional update. thanks for the pm

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supercool3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Another beautiful OS Mayu!

When I read the first part ... I was like, I thought you said you can't see Rishbala separated .. so what is this Nikhil guy doing here 😲

Then I kept reading, and what nicely crafted story yaar ! Love it <3

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