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Dimple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Mayu first of all sorry for this late reply.

Coming to the OS. Oh what can I saw, It was just mindblowing. Beautifully written. Each word I could easy connect with. The story you showed was amazing!!

Keep it up

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.Shree.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

superb ending 👏

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nesrina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -Mayu-
Common Guys, Is the next part BAD?😭😭

goog job i like it 👏

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-MansiKohli-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awwie it was so touching :( RK's part had me in tears :( beautifully penned down mayu!!!*tight hug* NIKHIL!!!I feel so bad for him =( poor boy. </3

thanks for the pm mayyuuu!!!!!!<3 hehe.

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: .sio.angel.
am i the first to comment?
if yes then...
yayy...yipiee...
ok getting normal...
that was an aweome continuation of the first part mayu...i was indeed imagining how abrupt the first one ended...but then thought...maybe that was it...but im glad u ended on a good note...
yeah the idea seemed too filmy...rk cannot eb a father...ehem ehem...and then madhu accepting him even after that...well i hope in serial they wont show that rk cannot be a father types story...dont mind hun?😆 the concept was unique and presented really well...so hats of to u for that...👍🏼

Siooo Meri Jaan🤗

Yes, you are first this time. PartyYippeee🥳

Thanks so much Baccha🤗Well I guess I ended the first part very abrubtly and then I had to continue very well. I am glad you loved it<3

Well as I said that the show is only filmy and then I had to make it filmy, you know how RK goes all bad and Madhu accepting him

Love,

Mayu

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Really good story and I liked how Nikhil walked away...Yes Rishbala always together...thank u dear for such a nice OS.

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.
Very touching part 😭
Your writing brought tears in my eyes 👏 👏 👏 👏 beautifully scripted loved it ❤️

Thanks so much Priya🤗

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: dilnasheen
Happies endings...yippie..!!

Nikhil...poor guy..It's okay buddy, you too willl find someone..!!!😉

Awesome part dear..!!!👏

Thanks so much Dil🤗

Nikhil will surely find someone else😳

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: madhurk
superb dear

Thanks so much🤗

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: punam2712
I THOUGHT IT WAS THE END
BUT THANKS FOR THE LOVELY PART
SO IT WAS ALL A PLAN TO DRIVE HER AWAY
AM GLAD THEY ARE TOGETHER AGAIN

Thanks so much🤗

Love,

Mayu

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