Rishabala OS- The War! Part 2-Pg 11

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Hey MBians🤗 I am back with another OS. I know this is totally out of sync with the current track, but since I cant see Rishabala without each other, I thought of penning something different. I know its very clinched, but still Madhubala being a filmy show, I decided to go this way!

❤️Hope you all like it❤️

Rishabala OS- The War!

As soon as he started to celebrate his little win over me, what an irony, a self confessed superstar, behind a normal girl. According to him I had failed, but according to me I had won, because I wanted him to relish the win of a small battle before he truly was going to lose in the war that lay ahead of us. I was thankful to my brother that he had introduced me to a producer, who wanted to cast new comers in his film. I had auditioned and been successfully been selected to play the female lead. I was ecstatic. I always was scared of this big, bad world, but then I had to break him. Break his every habit, his every fiber, his ego and above all his heart. He played and so will I now play. Its popularly said, everything's fair in love and war. I loved him and got hurt, now I will start a war and make him love me and break his heart. Tit for tat! An eye for an eye!

I started to shoot for my film and along came, another new comer, Nikhil Malohotra. And after initial hesitation, we hit off like a pair of mad friends. The media claimed that we were a couple. And sure he was in love with me, but I wasn't. I had lost all heart to love anyone and trust anyone. Everytime I tried to move on and love Nikhil back after he confessed, I would remember the hurt and would run away. But he always understood me and made me free of my insecurities. He made sure I was happy, made sure I was living. And after a period, our debut film was a hit. We were the most celebrated cine couple. And I made sure that RK attends the film's premier. And that very day, our film's release, in front of all our fans, he proposed.

Nikhil: "Will you marry me Madhu?"

I nodded, tears clouding my vision, I ran in his arms. Feeling the warmth of his arms and his love, we stayed like that. Together listening to our hearts beating in rhythm with each other.

"Nahin Madhu..." said RK as his hefty body hit the ground. He looked pale and out of health.

"Someone call the ambulance" I barked at the crown gathered and Nikhil, I rushed RK to the hospital. And that's when I got the worst news of my life.

Nikhil tried to support me, but my instincts as his love rose, and my heart took over my mind and I walked towards the Siddhivinayak Temple, praying for his life. As I walked barefoot, I remembered only the doctor's words,

"Inke paas bahut kam din bache hai. Woh aapse bahut pyaar karte hai Madhubala."

That one sentence instilled my faith back in God and most off all Love!

So I hope I have lived upto the standards of Rishabala fans.😃

And so if you want me to continue, do let me know!😳

Love,

Mayu

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Nandini_goyal thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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looking forward the read 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice take. Please continue. I love to read than write.

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very nice OS...!!are you going to continue...??

please do...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rserved!! :D
Okayyy.. sabse phele..something in this OS reminded me of someone so yeah that adds bonus points to it 😳 but then the OS is sooo well written and you know what? I hate you for the fact you write such small ones.. But really it was beautiful..and ti be honest at the end I felt bad, bad for Nikhil.. Reason1 IDK why per I love the name Nikhil 😆 Reason2 I imagined him as some cute boy and a cute boy not getting his love </3 Reason3 Madhu accepted his love and then RK's interference Reason4 His love seemed genuine... So ab.. I dont know if am happy that RK and Madhu united 😆 PER haan amazingly written ☺️
Edited by --Pooja- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited 😳 and sorry for such a...err... Lame comment 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww mayu you're back with an OS.Love your writings.Again this one was awesome.continue it dear.
Edited by Hdhd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Mayu
Please continue this
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its awesome, loved it, btw when u write more let me know😊, well done and keep it up
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good job i love it please continue😉

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