FF-Seduced in the Dark#2(ch-23/pg127)*14thMarch*

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didlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

kkk it was completely different than what i was expecting...so brilliantly written to potrey the entire thing n rk'semmotions...loved it zara...seriously thiswas amazing...totally unexpected.

Plz plz plz update the nxt part soonreally wnt to knw madhu's expressions,feelings n comments abtthis incident.

Thanks fr pm:)

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Pritt B

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Ohmygod...child sexual abuse? I almost couldn't even finish reading it, but I did...and I never thought that I'd feel so bad for a character who doesn't exist in real. But the disgusting thing is that this does happen in real. And that really bothers me. How can people be so...monstrous?

Nevertheless, you did an amazing job writing this considering how hard it must've been for you...

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Sid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

It was just shocking.. Sexual abuse?? :o
Kay i had expected somethng real dark bt dis turned out to be shocking! I am nt able to believe dat dis is just a story.. It felt too much realistic.. You wrote it so well! How can dat cheapster lady do dat wid a l'il kid.. M feelng really bad for RK!
Grt job! Thanks for the pm :)

Edited by shanaya123 - 12 years ago

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kendra

@kendra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

amazing zara!! u beautifully portrayed rk's emotions

i never expected this!!

child sexual abuse is something that many children undergo in our country . and sometimes they r not even mature enough to understand what's going on.

i am feeling very bad for rk. he lost his only friend due to that bl**dy b***h !!

thanks for highlighting such a sensitive topic.

people need to be aware of this. and shame on those who do such things to innocent children.

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revti21

@revti21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Oh my goodness...nw dat was the first thin i ever had read in any rishbala ff...nw i want to know madhu's reactin.bt i knw she s goin to comfort him...pls. update soon...

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

OH MY GOD I AM JUST FEEL...CANT EXPLAINN! BUT U JUST DID AWSOME WRK.I HOPE MADDHU COMFORTS RK,.PKS UPDATE SOON

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

I'm really sorry if I failed to impress some of u ! I've grown up reading lot of sidney sheldon , mills and boons and many many dark novels !! Even befre starting the FF I had this concept in mind. I would still apologize if some of u couldn't connect wid it 😔

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kendra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: zara.92
I'm really sorry if I failed to impress some of u ! I've grown up reading lot of sidney sheldon , mills and boons and many many dark novels !! Even befre starting the FF I had this concept in mind. I would still apologize if some of u couldn't connect wid it 😔

i don't think u did anything wrong zara.

instead u highlighted a major evil of our society!!

i liked this part.

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Adeeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

pls zara don't say so, u r not here to please everyone, u thought about it.

its ur FF, u r the writer, so don't think what all the people will think and will not accept it, its true and it happens.

don't think we couldn't connect it, we live in this world and are aware about such things.

it would be hard for u for writing such thing, we can understand, but u did awesome job, u really wrote it well by portraying every emotion.

just feel happy that u had courage to write it.

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: kendra

i don't think u did anything wrong zara.
instead u highlighted a major evil of our society!!
i liked this part.

Thanku so much I'm gladd u liked it . People cn digest when child abuse happens on a girl but they don't knw guys experience it double the amount of girls !!