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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeba21

pls zara don't say so, u r not here to pleaseeveryone, u thought about it.

its ur FF, u r the writer, so don't think what all the people will think and will not accept it, its true and it happens.

don't think we couldn't connect it, we live in this world and are aware about such things.

it would be hard for u for writing such thing, we can understand, but u did awesome job, u really wrote it well by portraying every emotion.

just feel happy that u had courage to write it.



Thanku so much adeeba ! Yea it took me a lot of time to find the correct vocab so tht it doesn't sound vulgar and cheap . It had to be painful !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sad but a insight to abuse happens behind the close doors!!😳😲..It was a very bold step Zara to write about abuse like this..Beautifully written without losing the pain,agony & fear ..Continue soon..Can't wait to see Madhu's reaction.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali.12

Very sad but a insight to abuse happens behind the close doors!!😳😲..It was a very bold step Zara to write about abuse like this..Beautifully written without losing the pain,agony & fear ..Continue soon..Can't wait to see Madhu's reaction.😊



Thankyou sooo much dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zara.92

I'm really sorry if I failed to impress some of u ! I've grown up reading lot of sidney sheldon , mills and boons and many many dark novels !! Even befre starting the FF I had this concept in mind. I would still apologize if some of u couldn't connect wid it 😔

No need to apologize...it was great seriously:)
loved the concept...
Continue writing brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zara.92

I'm really sorry if I failed to impress some of u ! I've grown up reading lot of sidney sheldon , mills and boons and many many dark novels !! Even befre starting the FF I had this concept in mind. I would still apologize if some of u couldn't connect wid it 😔

dnt b sory zara u really tried to highlight a sensitve issue...though painfull... Bt likd it.,.. Do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sad 😭 poor Rishabh assaulted in disgraceful way 😒
Finally at least he shared it with Madhu who can help him now ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 it was so painful past. Hope Madhu loves and care him to extend that he forgets his pain. Nice update.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: emptyworld


😭it was so painful past. Hope Madhu loves and care him to extend that he forgets his pain. Nice update.🤗



Thanku :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
POOR RISHU
HE LOST HIS CHILDHOOD TO THAT BITCH TO BE LEFT WITH A LIFETIME OF NIGHTMARES
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such an heart wrenching part😭..No doubt why he has so many nightmares..
How can a woman be so cruel to a kid!😡
Feeling bad for rk..but i am sure madhu will make him fine😳
I have a doubt..will tamanna come back in future?
Waiting for next part..

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