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didlr

@didlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

great update

humourous as well as mysterious

Tooo gud

update asap:)

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Zariya

@zariya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

there is some relation btw madhu n rk's mom

thats y he hates her

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Bella023

@Bella023

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Amazing story line 😊 love the dark hot RK

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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

this was an amazing update. pritt...really loved it

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: abika
intresting
con soon
thanks for pm

Thank you!

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU
loved all parts

RK is a mystery as usual

So glad you loved them, thank you!!

Originally posted by: Alice18
wow !!! Wonderful updates ...👏 Bt Me late

Chapter2 : Rocking ...Rk Action move his dialouges OMG !!! Precisely saying d way u wrote ...it was Magnificent 👏...N felt Bad for MB

Chapter 3 : ...Awesome ...Upadte 😉 n this Guy Adi ...🤔 Hmm ...He is Good n Funny loving Guy 😊He made Madhu Blush Aww ..Awesome🤔 Bt Good update pritti !! 👏

Chapter4 : Wow!!! Damn intersting ... Finally d Dark love stories ...Began😉 Awesome update ❤️

Chapter 5 : OMG ... Amazing Update !! loved it ❤️ n Waiting For More rishbala Moments 😳 Bt One ques Dancing In My Mind y Rk kidnapped Madhu ?? 🤔 Bt Pritti truly ..U potrayed Rk character In such a Rocking Way loving it Ahann ..😉

N Sorry for commenting late Really Me not regular in visting Froum so thts y Apology pritti 😳 ...

Aw thank you so much! So glad you like it!!!

Yup he made her blush! 😛

Lots more RishBala moments are yet to come! And the reason for the kidnapping won't be revealed for a while!

Yayyy so glad you like the way I portrayed RK! :D

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
awesome part..

Thank you!

Originally posted by: kavana_n
Nice 😊

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: seetu1
nice update.

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Marie_789
Nice update.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: bhumi1492
It's really a Owesum update
Everything you write is perfect
Thanks for such a nice update

Aw thanks so much!

Originally posted by: adeeba21
nice update.

yes she was hallucinating but i think it was because of fear.

madhu is getting little depended on Aditya.

madhu and RK 's face off!!! what to say about it.

i m liking this FF so much!! i always like dark FFs.

Thank you!! :D

Actually she wasn't hallucinating! 😆

She is getting dependent :O

Aww so glad you like it!!

Originally posted by: arya.nair
Awesome update Pritt 👏
Anyway what was Rk doing in Madhus room in the middle of the night?? she wasn't hallucinating right??By the way, was she wandering aroung Rk's room in that towel or in that summer dress 😆. Keep updating.

Thank you so much! And ahah he enjoys messing with her! Nope she wasn't hallucinating :P

And yup, in the towel! 😆

Originally posted by: SweetGirl_99
Nice...awsome:)))👏

Thanks! :D

Originally posted by: bhumi1492
Great 🥳

Thank you!!

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: kendra
me first!! 😲...lol , i thought it would be zara or iidona or deepak !!😉😆
okay let me dance first !!
okay coming to the update...
it was awesome pritt!! just like you!!
i am both happy and sad for adi.
what's so special about rk's mother??🤔
and why does he keeps pulling o pushing madhu??😕😉
thanks pritt for daily update

and yes, me first😉😆

Yayy Kriti's first! 😆

Aww thank you so much!! <3

And everything will be revealed a while from now! :D

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Awesome Update Pritt.👏

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: zara.92
This RK is scaring me nw !!

Plz update sooon !

Aww Zaru! I'm sorry he's scaring you 😆

Originally posted by: Angeena
You were right! Didn't like RK's behaviour today but he has his reason's I'm sure .. So I'll be patiently waiting for that.

Yeah me either! 😛 But of course, he does have his reasons! :D

Originally posted by: iiDona
meh, that is how I feel about RK now. Nothing is surprising anymore. I hope Adi does not turn into an angry young man. Imagine this tingling sensation telling you the super nice are worse than the super bad. That is how I feel about his character.

Aaha Jassu <3 Don't worry, I won't destroy Adi for any one!

Originally posted by: srija273
Awesome upadates

Thank you!

Originally posted by: tamanna10
Awesome update dear.
Felling bad for aditya.
Want to read more of this update.
So pls next update must me long.

Thanks so much! I feel bad for him too :(

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Pritt B

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
i think rk is mental case firstly kidnapped orphan gal without reason and now manhandle her no no everyone...

LOL I think he is! Wait, he actually has a reason though 😆

Originally posted by: Clara20
awesome update pritto...
nw i think adi wl b angry on madhu?
wht ever bt i think he did intentionly coz he knw that his bro dnt like this...
and nw think that madhu hav to do all work as maid is fired...ab RK usi se kam karwayega..

Thank you so much! And maybe! :O

And you guessed right! If you read the next update, you'll know what I mean :P

Originally posted by: Hdhd
Awesome updates.

Thanks Zainuu!

Originally posted by: Desire6
Waitn 4next update.. Too many qs.. Y rk behavn lk dis.. Nd wat so special abt ma.. Poor Aditya nd neha.. Continue soon..oh dis mystry s killn me

😛 Next update is up! :D And everything will be revealed eventually! :D

Originally posted by: mevanp
read all the chapters together and it's realy interesting😊
continue soon

Yay thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sweetdear
Lovely update...it's so intriguing..why the hell RK is doing what he is doing..this is killing me😳 Pritt...pls help karo

Thanks so much!! And ahah that'll be revealed a while from now! :D

Originally posted by: PrincessD
like u said RK's behaviour was OTT today, but am sure there is something associated with his mom and madhu thats making him do all this, taking a really interesting turn now. wanna c more of RK-madhu together😊

Yup, it was! :S

And yeah maybe!! There will be plenty of more RK-Madhu together scenes coming up :)

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Awsm update.RK getting more complicated day by day.For some unknown reason...i do not like that Aditya guy

Thank you so much! :D And ahaha I understand!

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: didlr
whats up with rk????
anyways i enjoyed the update:)
I'm still clueless abt adi so wnt comment abt him yet
Eagerly waiting fr nxt update:)
Ur too gud pritt:)

😆 RK's crazy! :D

But yay, so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much! 😳

Originally posted by: zariya123
rk is rude
n adi is sweety but y they had kidnapped her?????////

He is! :S And ahah I'll reveal that a while from now!

Originally posted by: shanaya123
OMG.. This agressive RK is scary.. But obviously i love him in any way!
Update soon..!!

😛 He is!! But yay, so glad you love him!

Originally posted by: Shree.123
beautiful Update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ..Aliya..
Good one..
Hmm..I wonder why he was so angry that madhu wore his ma's clothes
Adi is sooo sweet I like him a lot ⭐️he's like madhu's best friend 😃
Waiting for the next part

Thanks so much! That'll be out in the open soon! And yay so glad you like Adi!

Originally posted by: janvie
Awesome Update di!! 👏 Its Really Intriguing. 👏 👏
Adi is too sweet. 😊 And You Brought him back.Yay. 😳 😆 I wonder Why He gave only those clothes to Madhu? 😕 What the hell is wrong with RK?Why was He behaving like a maniac? 😲Okay I know something related to his mom.But He was Actually ready to pierce Madhu's clothes and I was just 😲
This RK is really appearing as a Psycho to me right now and Ya He is actually Scary. 😲 😲 😆
But in all this clothes mess,I didn't got few things.Why did Madhu said she don't have clothes.Didn't Adi gave her the bag of clothes.And Though not night-dress but there are other dresses na?Then When RK said her to change,Why couldn't she changed in those clothes.And What was the need to ask dress from Neha when already dresses are in that bag?Umm di...Sorry but I didn't got this or Did I missed something?
And Poor Adi Got Slapped. 😭 He will be angry from Madhu now It seems.Hmm,Poor Madhu,Her only close true friend as She is considering him is going to be angry.Though I don't think that would last long.And Above of that,Neha
fired,Now Madhu'll be the only female in house now. 😆
Pls Continue Soon Pritt di!! 😳 This Suspense is really killing me now...I can't wait to know what'll happen next. 😊 😳

Yayy thank you so much! So glad you find it intriguing!

He gave those clothes because it was too late to go buy other clothes for Madhu 😆! And ooh, good question, I wonder why she said that...🤣 I guess I messed up when writing that ahah!

And he asked Neha because he plans on giving Madhu a new job! :O

I know, poor Adi/Madhu D:

Originally posted by: tharuTWA
nice update
looking foward to see wt happens next😊

Thank you so much!

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
This rk is crazy and scary

He is, isn't he! :S

Originally posted by: aman93
so whos in madhu's room..

It was RK 😆

Originally posted by: aman93
oh... this is smthng intrstng. ... hope ol dis unfold soon

Yay glad you find it interesting, thanks!

Originally posted by: vaani21
I have read all the updates.It is very Interesting.
I am curious about Rk, cos i like Rk😃!!!!

Thank you so much!! :D

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
Finally I have caught up to your new FF - well almost, chapter 6 pending!

Brilliant buildup! I am very curious to know what the heck is going on? why the kidnapping and who are these brothers??

You have kept the suspense up very nicely, revealing only tidbits and adding more fuel to the fire!

The attraction is already there though between Madhu & RK and I can't wait to see what other fights they get into. Though it seems 'this' RK is not one you would want to mess with.

Looking forward to this journey!

Yayy glad you caught up! Thanks so much! And that'll be revealed a while from now :P

I agree this RK doesn't seem like one you'd want to mess with but Madhu won't give up 😆

Originally posted by: Yukthi.
this guy is seriously creeping me out!
pritt..you did something today that i never thought anyone cud make me do : HATE MY RK! 😲 😲 😲
well..he's not the same rk that i love anyway..so it doesnt matter! 😆
well..i thought for a moment that he wud seriously rip off her clothes in front of everyone! 😲
i had to stop midway and read a few other posts in the forum to calm down 😆
i really feel that rk will be the gud guy and adi the diabolic one..and this is just a pretense..i hope so😕

nice update pritt..
waiting for your next update! 😃

LOL sorry he's creeping you out! 😆

AW NO! I made you hate him!? 🤣 Wow, I've got skill I guess LOL

Ahaha wow I'm amazed it had that effect on you, thank you!

Originally posted by: deepak148
y i am feeling rk is not vilian but this adi. He will take revenge of slap from both i am sure nyc update

Ahaha maybe he will! Maybe Adi is secretly the next RK in the making! :O

Originally posted by: Pujark3
hye nice update pritt di, bt i dnt like tht adi.. hayee my rk kisiko nahi chodata...right kameena afalatun... update soon waiting

Thank you so much :D Ahaha I understand why you don't like him 😛

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: Kawan
Nyc update...
But rk iz very rude..

Thank you! And he is 😛

Originally posted by: abika
wow its becoming very intresting con soon

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: aksuji
ah now this RK is turning really scary...
and on top of that u r not breaking suspense...
nice update pritt...plz continue soon

LOL he is isn't he! And i like suspense :D.

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: adeeba21
Aditya is like always happy type guy. madhu is really getting close to him.

RK really possessive for his mother, he slapped Adi and also fired Neha.

now madhu will work as caretaker??

this RK is really a mystery but biggest question is the reason why he kidnapped madhu, a orphan.

awesome update Pritt.