Chapter 14 - The Shock
@AroraN
Yay! Good job for being first!!
And ahah no more suspense anymore! Everything's been revealed, minus the twist at the end but that's not the main twist. The main twist is out! :D
Yeah it was sweet of her to bring him cake!
@janvie
Yay good job!!
She's his ex-fiance! But you know that now ahah. You were close! You guessed wife, she was almost his wife!
LOL doppleganger, yeah I don't think I'll be doing that type of thing again because it'll never be the same as Forever Yearning!
I agree that RK is impossible to understand. There's only 13 updates left and he's still difficult to understand. Actually no one will probably understand him until the last update ahah!
I wish I could tell people whether or not Adi's good or bad!
Thanks so much Janvie!
@DonnaHarvey
Oh who am I kidding...
@MYJASSU!
That's better.
LOL your predictions! Girl, what is it with you and plastic surgery!
You were close with the boyfriend thing...and your second prediction just cracked me up. I don't plan on going the Ekta way again! Did that with Forever Yearning, one time's enough ahah.
LOL glad you're having fun!
@didlr
Tanshii! Good idea! Ahah, now the mystery is out and there's no more worries!
Aw thank you so much, you're so sweet! That's really nice to hear!
I feel bad his birthday got spoiled too!
@sai.janu350
Aw really? That's so sweet! Thank you so much!
Yup, RK and Madhu share a past but you know that now already! Ahah I just am super slow at replying back to comments!
@sweetdear
I've taken you to the bottom of the truth now! :D It just took me ten years to reply to comments ahaha, sorry!
Thank you so much, so glad you love it!
And ooh which fight? I think I missed something...
@Athena90
Thank you so much for being honest! I love honest feedback. If someone doesn't like something, I want them to tell me! So thanks!
@RockchickFaiza
Thank you so much! Yup, there's a past connection but now that's already out in the open! I'm so glad you love reading it!! And we all know the job was of a model now ahah.
@Diahh
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you love it!!
Ahaha we all know the story now, I don't have much to say anymore because everything's out in the open already. I just took too long to reply back to comments!
Aw really? Favourite? That's so sweet of you to say! Thank you so much!
@Desire6
Yup! And LOL oops, sorry for adding to the mystery!
But now the mystery is out in the open! You were right with the amnesia part, good job!
Anyways, thank you so much!
@Clara20
Thanks so much!
@-Stephanie-
Thank you so much!
@zara.92
Kidding!
@MYZARU!
His ex-fiance! But you know that already ahaha. I felt bad for him too! Thank you so much Zaru <3.
@Angeena
So glad you loved it, thanks so much! I love suspense ahaha.
@kendra
Ahaha, well now everything's in the open! Ex-fiance!
You were close with your prediction, good job!
I think he was crying because he has Madhu in front of him but he can't have her type thing, I'm not too sure ahah...
LOL he is weird, isn't he!
Sweet Adi...I wish I could tell people if he was good or bad! I guess everyone will have to wait!
@anjaliipkknd
Thanks so much! Suspense is over, ish! And yup he was crying! I felt bad for Madhu too.
@teju_g
Thank you!
@-CuteChic-
LOL his ex-fiance! But you know that already now ahah.
Now only 13 updates remain!
Thank you so much!!
He can be unpredictable at times!
@Blackpoison
Thanks so much!
@Jane523
Yup! The secret's out now!
Their relationship was close, good prediction!
I've answered all your questions in the updates already, I'm just slow at replying to comments ahah.
@1Sumana1
Thank you so much!!
Yup, they're connected from the past but you know that already now ahah.
You're so sweet, thanks!
@SHINYSHREYA
Thanks so much!
@Nian4life
I update at random times now, sometimes before the show and sometimes after!
Awww wow, that's an amazing compliment! More interesting than the show? Thank you so much! You're so sweet!
And ahah we all know what the job was now!
@vid6
I agree! And the new job, well we all know what that was already and we also know why that job was given to her now! Hope most of your questions have been answered!
@punam2712
Yup! I love mystery!
@Hdhd
Thanks so much Zainu! I'm so glad you love the mystery! The new job we all know now was of a model!
@emptyworld
Thank you so much Shahi!
Ex-fiance! But we already know that now ahah. I love suspense! Thank you so much!
RK crying, I don't exactly remember the update, but I think it was because he has Madhu in front of him but can't do anything about it. I'll be typing up RK's POV on things soon after the FF ends!
New job is of a model! But we also know that! And LOL really? That's interesting! I've managed to move a lot of people to Adi's side but now they're suspecting him again, it's funny.
@trishnawaliya
I know! It was all ruined...
Thanks so much!
@aman93
Thanks so much! Model job, but we already know that! Hope most of your questions have been answered by now!
@abika
So glad you did, thank you!
@bhanu_rekhag
Thanks!!
@Kawan
Ex-fiance! But we already know that. Thank you!
@-Nuts-
Thank you!!
@PrincessD
Aww really? That's so sweet of you! I'm glad you like the suspense, though it's all clear now...most of it is at least!
And hmm, let's just say the guy said some nasty thing about Madhu and what he would do and therefore, RK got pissed off!
@nehakariba
Thanks so much! Ahah I love suspense!
@srija273
Thank you so much! Ex-fiance! But that's already out in the open!
@zariya123
I'm so glad you like it, thank you so much!! Madhu's his ex-fiance but we all know that already ahah.
Chapter 15 - The Light Touch
@DonnaHarvey
Jassuuu! Yeah I know eh, I was glad she was going to pull that stupid move too until I realized where it landed her! You were right! She was kind of like bait while they tried to lure in her father!
LOL Ballu/Sultan! Ahaha nice prediction Jassu!
Aw yay, I'm glad I got your attention and I'm sure I've kept it based off of your more recent comments ahah.
@nehakariba
Ahah sorry, suspense and me just get along well. :D
@sweetdear
Ahahah sorry! But yeah, everything's been revealed now!
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked the update!
He was her father but we know that now.
Sorry, I love suspense!
@teju_g
Thanks!
@sai.janu350
Thanks!!! It's been reveled!
@zara.92
Ahaha Zaruuu! Everything's out in the open now! I'm just slow at replying...
Thank you!!
@RockchickFaiza
Thank you so much!
Glad you love the suspense!
Ahaha everyone's doubting Adi, they still are!
@punam2712
Yup!! Exactly!
@kendra
Yup!! We all know what happened when she did that ahah.
LOL ten chapters in one day! My FF would be over in 5 days!
But yeah, we all know what the secret was now! You were right, they were kind of related, ex-fiances.
@Shree.123
Thanks so much!
@AroraN
LOL sorry, I love suspense!
Yup! And everything's out in the open now!
Ahaha we know what RK did with her after she ran!
@1Sumana1
Thank you so much!
That he was her father but we know that now ahah.
And good prediction, that's precisely what they had planned!
@vid6
Thank you! Ahah I love suspense!
Everything's out in the open now!
@bhanu_rekhag
Thank you!!
@Angeena
So glad you loved it, thank you! Yup, you were right! She got caught!
@-CuteChic-
Sorry Shanaya! I love suspense ahaha. But I'm sure most of your questions have been answered by now!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked that gesture. It was sweet, wasn't it!
LOL kidnapping me for the secret! I'm glad the secret's out now and I don't have to worry about being kidnapped by you anymore!
You were right, she does belong to him somehow!
Aw you're not annoying!
@didlr
Thanks Tanshi! Aww you're so sweet! I'm glad you like that!
@Jane523
Thank you!
@Kaya13
LOL!!! That would be so bad! My FF would go nowhere if she thought of them as her brothers!
Thank you so much!!
@Desire6
Yup! He was her father but we already know that now ahah.
And yup! I think Adi's the new Bittuji! He keeps interrupting at the wrong time ahaah!
I hope your questions have been answered! I think they have been!
And thanks so much!
@sonnal_17
Ahah sorry, I'm a sucker for suspense!
Thank you so much!
@Clara20
Thank you!
@SHINYSHREYA
Thanks!
@Monami_50
Thank you!
@samwllms
Yup!! You were right!
@Kawan
Thanks!
@anjaliipkknd
Thank you!! I'm glad you like that! And no worries.
@PrincessD
I hope all your questions have been answered by now!!
@Hdhd
Thanks Zainu!
@emptyworld
Thanks Shahi! I'm glad you like it and the suspense!
Everything's been unfolded now. :D
@revti21
It's alright! I understand!
And we already know what the secret behind the kidnapping was, I'm just slow at replying back to comments ahah.
@trishnawaliya
Well we all know what happened when she ran! :P She did end up back by RK!
@aman93
Thanks!
@DANGGG
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! I haven't been sending out PMs for this FF daily, but I do send them in chunks. This FF does receive daily updates!
Ahaha I think Madhu felt as though she had no where to go but the orphanage where she didn't even like it.
And LOL yes, I guess Madhu likes making friends with her kidnappers!
@srija273
Thank you!!
@..Aliya..
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you find my FF exciting and love it! We already know what they had planned now.
@-Rasmi24-
Thanks so much Rasmi!
@abika
Updated. 10 years ago ahaha sorry, I'm slow at replying to comments!
@smdosi
LOL that is the best comment ever! I'm sorry he creeps you out.
@tamanna10
Thank you!
@zoshad3119
Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it!
@anamika143..
Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you like the suspense! You're so sweet!
And I can't say anything about Adi's character! It'll be revealed in the last update!
Everyone's suspecting him though because he's "too nice"...people call me "too nice" I wonder if people think I'm secretly evil?! LOL.
He is getting more and more mysterious! RK's a hard character to understand.
Ahaha ex-fiance, but we all know that already!
@dreamyjennice
Ahah sorry, I love suspense!
@titll4love
I love mystery!
@nahtani88
Thank you so much!
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