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todayzstar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing dear..:)

good to see you here😊

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mbala12

@mbala12

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hey dear if u start any ff on rishabala please do pm me..i love ur writings

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

😭😭

IT IS SO SAD PALIN

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj
hey palin,
u here??? don't think me as mad..
i asked this question from shika also when she wrote her first os on this thread...😆

it was painfull😭
but aajkal serial or bhi jyada painful ho rakha hai..
tu yaha bhi koi FF start kar rahi hai kya???

nahi yaar abhi aisa toh koi irada nahi...😊

I am planning to write a comic piece here...😛😆but before that GF pe bahut sara pending work hai...uff this busy life...🤣

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: TheBrat
Bloody hell. Reserved
Should I tell you specifically that I want PMs for all the couples and non couples you'd ever write? Oh yeah am pissed off.
Ps: I hate you.

I hate you too...😊

ps-please consult first law of love dynamics for the above statement of mine...😉😆

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: palindrome

nahi yaar abhi aisa toh koi irada nahi...😊
I am planning to write a comic piece here...😛😆but before that GF pe bahut sara pending work hai...uff this busy life...🤣

🤣 🤣mine too..mere paas bhi bohot sare pending stories hain padne k liye 🤣

time hi nai mil raha hai ...main kya karu double ufff ufff😆

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

will read n comment later janeman😉

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Welcome to MB forum, Palin

Awesome OS

Oh...you are very generous to RK and gave him a simple death, after whatever he did with madhu...

Glad that he realised his mistake and how love is imp in life

now he is missing his mother & madhu

Very beautifully written, as always

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Welcome to MB forum, Palin

Awesome OS

Oh...you are very generous to RK and gave him a simple death, after whatever he did with madhu...

Glad that he realised his mistake and how love is imp in life

now he is missing his mother & madhu

Very beautifully written, as always

Madhuri..in this os,i tried to find {actually make} a reason behind Rk's sudden change of behaviour..Remeber he was admitted to hospital after his fight with madhu's biological father..According to this os,doctor told him about his incurable disease that day thats why he did all this "acting" with madhu.. just to save her from the "pain of her husband's death"...

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

ohhh myyy goshhh 😲 😲 😲

now m serious wat r u woman😆...when u gav d gist dat his luv n all was drama, i was so angry😡...bt now here, there's was another drama. .bada gadbad ghotala hai bhai drama k andar drama 😆

omg poor him he's dying alone ...n his luvd ones hates him 😒...ye tune kya kar diya re

jst perrrfffeeecccttt...liked it⭐️ ..n luvd d title 👏