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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
hmm..nice plot..just read it whole..
jealousy..lol
amazing continue it
best of luck for exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
awsome update...
thanks..u took out time for update even in exams
update as u get time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Wowww 👏 👏 👏 👏 I love it dear 😳 😳 Thanks for updating and plz update soon waiting eagerly for ur next update Dont forget to pm me 😊 😊

All the very Best for ur xams I knw u will Rockkk 😉 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

okay guys...thank u so much for ur response...

PART 7:

madhu: u see i am not jealous...if u can leave i may go and check on karan

rk: whats with u and karan...😡

madhu: seems i am not affected u r jealous

rk: whatever ...i too have to check on my sweet(stressed the word)

frnd...⭐️

madhu being irritated with rk calling her sweet as she is the only one who can call him sweet... started searching for karan and both again bumped

madhu: for gods sake show you romantic skills in your flims not here...

rk: so u agree i am soo romantic...ahaan

dipali: NEHA!!!!!!!and KARAN!!!!!! what the f**k is happening here

and at that time only both neha and karan came into the world and all this while madhu was seeing this in awwweee...

karan: ar..e you...o..k?

neha: yes.. i am ..and thank..s..😳

all this while madhu evil mind had stated working and some where she was happy seeing neha with karan..😃

all the five had entered the party all had a great welcome

dipali: wow seems intresting the chawl girl had come with another plan...nice madhubala😡

madhu: you...

rk: sorry bhabi but i have only right of calling her madhubala ...so will u plz excuse us...u can enjoy the party👏

and so rk dragged madhu to a corner...

madhu: what the hell are u doing...let go of my hand..

rk: just stop shouting like a manic...i ju..st need ur help...

madhu : wow the great superstar needs help from a chawl girl... i am suprised

rk: its just i think neha and karan look good...what do u think

madhu: (exited) : i too thought the same rk...u and me think alike isnt...(and she realised what she told and she just stammeres) i mean...to sa.y

rk: yes i agree with u ...people in love think the same...😳😉

madhu (understanding what he said trieds to change the topic): whatever, we can make a deal for playing cupid for them ...what do u say....

rk: whooa seriously u are becoming like me ...i agree wid it

the mission starts..rk thought to himself for himself and her friend...

here karan and neha were witnessing this scene ...and said at the same time: i want ur help..

karan : yes of course ..anything for u( he said it absentmindely)😉

neha: (blushed) what..!!😳

karan: no ..i mean..can we be friends!!!!!😊

neha : yes of course... friends and they both shook their hands...

rk was talking and flirting with some random girls and signing the autographs seeing this madhu got irritated

madhu: girls will u please excuse us both... and took rk aside...

madhu: will you plz tell me what u were doing there...😡

rk: what !!!! they are my lovely fans and i also have to spend some time with them isnt it...

madhu: that should be in limits...u were openly flirting wid them...how idiotic it is and she turned to see karan

rk thought to himself plan is working out she is opening up to me...that is nice ...i will soon make u mine...😃😉

thats it guys...tell ur opinions and dont forget to press like button...

bye see u soon..





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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Nice update.I hope Dips Madhu aur RK ke beech mein kabab mein haddi na bane.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@malini1996: Nyc OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Lovly update 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏
Waiting for next part but i know it will take some time as ur xams r gng on 😊 😊

All the best 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys sorry for the late update...

part 8:

as madhu turned irritated she forund karan standing beside her...

karan: so u r here...i was searching for u 😊

madhu: i know by having a company of neha u would surely forget ur friend...😉

karan:(blushed): no its not like that..😳

madhu: did i see u blushing!!!!????😲

and karan noticed that rk was behind madhu drinking and wairter was passing by a tray full of drinks and he thought this to be a coorect time..⭐️

and he slightly pushed madhu making her falling behind rk's lap and with the force rk pushed the waiter making him poutr all the drinks onto them...

rk being mesmerised by the beauty sitting on his lap forgot what just happened there...and the sound of karan clearing the throat made them come back to earth...

karan: sorry...😃

madhu: ur so dead when u come home..😡

by the way u can wash ur clothes and dry them in the storeroom..said karan

neha: what the hell happened😲...and rk u smell bad

rk: its not my fault ...it is ur date fault

suddenly neha mouth formed a "o" 😲 shaped

neha: no he is not my date!!!😳! he is just my...

madhu: my what neha...😉😃

neha : i think u should go or else u r dress will be a waste..

and after the duo had gone neha and karan hi5ed each other

karan: and actually i am your what neha...😉😛

neha : i thin..k we ha..ve a work to do...😳.

as the our rishibala had done washing they had gone to dry their dresses at the store room...and karan and neha lockes the room from outside

neha: i dont think locking the door will do😕

karan: i have an idea😃...come wid me and wid that he dragged neha to the power room

neha: what are we doing here...❓

karan: u know madhu is afraid of darkness ...

neha : and maybe that would help..

and in that process neha tripped making karan pushing and making him sticking to the walls and neha hands was either side of him blocking him😉...and they had a cute eyelock..😛

being embrassed neha said: i..am...sorry😳

karan: its okay..an the found the switch to the power room and they offed it...

as madhu and rk had finished drying the dress madhu got up to open the door but it was stuck...(that what she thought) and called rk for help ...as he came the lights had gone...and only a light from the moon outside was there ...

rk realised the fear of madhu towards darkness and suddenly hugged her🤗

rk: madhu dont fear...i am with u 😳

madhu: get off ur hands off me 😡

rk: but madhu i was just trying to...😕

madhu: trying to what.. and rk took a step towards her

madhu: dont u dare come near me...😡

rk: madhu i know what i did was a big mistake ...and ..i regret it..plz dont hate me like this😭😔

madhu: waah i should appreciate ur acting skills have been improved👏..go fool ur fans not me..

rk got furious and held her by shoulders and said when i faked my love for u u believed me and now i am loving u truly u cant belive me...and yes i faked the love unknown that i had fallen already when i saw u for the first time..

madhu:(screamed) then why the hell did u fake ur love for me😡...why did u broke me ...and why did u played wid my feelings..😡

rk: madhu i am sorry..and i can do anything for that

madhu : then leave me and go far away from me...

rk with atitude said that " that is soo difficut biwi..i cant even distance from u even for a second... understand"❤️

madhu : i hate u ..i hate u😡 ..i hate u and dont u dare call be biwi

rk: so sad.. but i love u ...and listen i will call..

madhu : no i cant listen to u...

rk: then what would u want to make u listen to me😡

madhu: oh really!! then break the door...then maybe i can consider listening to u

rk: ahaan soo my sherini is back and with that rk went and broke the door with all his might..." so now will u"

madhu: soory i cant waste my time on a man like u..and with that she ran away..

rk: u will regret it biwi...i will soon make u mine...and not to forget by completing the full 7 pheres..😉😃

karan and neha was waiting eagerly and as they saw madhu coming towards them thay noticed that her eyes were red and puffy😭 and they understood the reason..

and rk came behind her

madhu: karan i think we can leave i am having a severe headache..

rk: are u sure biw..i mean miss madhubala..❤️

madhu : karan i am waiting near the car come soon and with she left..

here karan winked at neha and gave rk his card inviting them for lunch tommorrow...and he asked them to come for sure...

karan: bye rk...see u both tommorrow...

and as karan was leaving neha called from back making karan look at her and she ran towards him and asked hand at first he hesitated seeing that neha pulled out his hand and wrote a number..

karan: what is this...

neha: mental hospital number!!!🤣...budhu its my number ...we have to discuss our plans isnt it thats why

karan:(pouting) what only for discussing the plans...

neha:(smirking) maybe some friendly talk too..and what else do u want to talk

karan: oka..y then my may i go ...

neha: madhu is waiting..just go and good night sweet dreams..

karan: good night to u too and he thought only with u the dream become sweet ...❤️

and with that rk ,neha madhu and karan drove to their respective houses..

PRECAP:

rk and neha at madhus house...and more romance to come

guys i think this will be a long update...plz bear wid me for some more days.. and dont forget to hit like and to drop ur comments


Edited by malini1996 - 12 years ago
My_VivJaan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
GREAT WORK DEAR NICE PART...UPDATE NXT PART SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
awesome update and thanx for the pm
update soon :-):-):-):-):-)

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