New SS :- Rays of Hope Part 8 on PG.61 8th Aug 13

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Syed695
Nicely Written,.,! liked the start specially describing Madhu's pain...M waiting for todays epi...*fngers crossed*:) Thnks for the PM~!

Thankyou for liking it.😊
I'm also waiting for today's epi...Lets see what happens.!!! *fingers crossed as well.* 😊

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: malini1996
DO CONTINUE AND PM ME

Hey Thanks for liking it Malini. 😊
I am from mobile So it is difficult for me to sent out pms.(I have said it to those too whom I have send pms).
So pls bookmark this thread for future updates. 😊

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@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

GREAT UPDATE DEAR...WAITING FOR NXT PRT UPDATE SOON...
ALSO THNXXX FOR PM DEAR...

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Interesting...please pm me whenever you update it..

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: zoshad3119
GREAT UPDATE DEAR...WAITING FOR NXT PRT UPDATE SOON...
ALSO THNXXX FOR PM DEAR...

Thanks,I'm glad you liked it. 😊
I will try to update soon. 😃

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Part 2

After his fight with Madhu,RK didn't have his breakfast and instantly went out for his
shooting.He was giving his scenes but was not able to remember his lines.His whole mind was completely diverted bcoz of whatever Madhu said to him.He just can't get her words out his mind.He cut of his scenes,postponed them,and went to the lake where he used to go for refreshing his past memories,memories with his father,the place
where he have promised to complete the seven pheres with madhu but ditched her,and hurted her badly.
He was thinking to himself,
"Is she correct?Am I such a stone-hearted person that Papa would have been ashamed of me?Am I that bad?,I guess its all my mistake.I shouldn't have said all that to Madhu.I have already taken my revenge from her and settled the scores and then today again I insulted her,And even called her desperate,How can I say that to her,I never mean to disrespect her or her charachter that way even if its for revenge.That's why I didn't crossed the line with her that night.!!!"She was right Papa would have been ashamed of me,"I wont let that happen.Their son knows very well not to disrespect any girl.I will apologise to her,for whatever I said to her in the morning.!!!
And with that RK took his phone out from his pocket and called Madhu.
Madhu picked up the call,
Madhu:Hello!
RK:Madhu woh mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni thi about the morning incident.
Madhu:Look RK,I don't want to talk about anything right now.I will get late for the interview...!!!
RK:Listen to me once,Its really important I promise I wont waste your time.
Madhu:"Shoot"
RK: "Madhu whatever I said to you in the morning,I was just trying to tease you,But I have never intended to
disrespect you in anyway.I shouldn't have used words such as desperate.I know you never was.It was me who was
wrong,who wanted revenge.But I have never crossed any limits with you Madhu.I can never do that.Coz I know the
values that my father taught me.I will never let him feel ashame coz of me.I know today whatever I said,whatever I
did was wrong.I have gone a way too far.So I have called to,Wait"Madhu are you there,are you listening???"
Madhu:"Yes RK,So Continue,You have called me for?"
RK:"I have called to say,to say,S,S,So,Sor..he was unable to complete.
Madhu:"For what RK,S,So, what RK?Have you called to waste my time??I'm cutting the call."Madhu said teasingly with
a huge wide grin on her face.
RK:"No,Wait.I have called to Say Sorry.He pause for a second and then continues" I'M SORRY MADHU."He said in a
Serious and Genuine tone.
Madhu:Its Okay RK,I guess I have also been very stuborn just for pressing a shirt.This was tend to happen If two
stuborn people have a fight.But Get One thing Straight RK,I can forgive you for this,But can never forgive you for the
hurt and pain you have given to me.For playing with my emotions,I can never forgive you for that RK.NEVER."
RK:Biwi I'm not even asking forgiveness for that,And I'm sure I NEVER WILL in future too.!!!Anyways Its good that
you have forgiven me for the morning wala incident."
Madhu:"Okay Whatever RK,I think you are done with your talks now,So Bye"
RK:"Wait Biwi!"He said quickly.
Madhu:"What RK...???"
RK:"All the best for Biwi.for your interview"He said with a huge smirk.
Madhu:"Umm,Thankyou RK"Madhu said taken aback and then finally RK cuts the call. Scroll down.[See Below]

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Guys I will make Rohan's entry in next part.Actually this update was going to be more long and Rohan was supposed to enter in this part only.But due to lack of time and some"GADBADI"while updating Part 2 (B) in which Rohan was supposed to enter got deleted completely while typing. [|Yes there was supposed to bePart 2(A) and Part 2 (B)]

I will possibly update today at night(Between 3 to 6am).I am really sorry to those who was just waiting for Rohan's entry. Well koi na guys coz I will really try to update today night only.So wait till tommorow morning(Hopefully). 😊
And I really hope you guys enjoy this update.Coz I was actually feeling sick stillupdated this. 😭
In this update,I have made RK realize his fault to say madhu all those bakwas he said to her at Part 1 as Many ppl didn't liked such a evil and ruthless RK,So in this update,he is a bit softer. 😉

Pls leave your comment guys and pls tell me you like it or not. 😊 😉

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago