New SS :- Rays of Hope Part 8 on PG.61 8th Aug 13

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Guys I have this idea of an SS in my mind which will start after RK ditch Madhu.It will involve a new charachter entry
which I have always wanted to see in mb.This charachter details,I am giving here.
Rohan Mittal :- A top succesful producer of south-film industry.He have also directed two movies in Bollywood last year which turned out to be Super-hit blockbuster of the years.And ONE is even a part of 100 crore camps.
Rohan is mb's childhood best friend.He belongs to a middle-class family.But due to his hard-work and talents,he
acheived this huge success.He and mb havent met from last 7 years.As he have gone to Chennai to first try his luck
from there.He wanted to meet her last year also as he was in mumbai,but couldn't as he was very busy with his films.

Now before you guys think that he is the new hero opposite Madhu,Let me clear it out,He is the bestest friend of mb and
can do anything for her happiness.He loves her alot(as a friend) and respects her.Same goes for madhu.After her family,If she trusts and loves(as a friend)someone alot then thats Rohan.
Rohan will bring back the RAYS OF HOPE back in madhu's life.Imagine KARAN WAHI as ROHAN.

Madhu was totally devastated after whatever RK did to her.He promised her a life full of happiness.But now is making her suffer loneliness and pain alone.He took her to the place,near the lake where he have promised her of completing her 7 pheras.Their he have made all the arrangements for their marriage.And at the point,When they awere about to take the 5th phera and madhu start coming in front,RK stopped the ritual saying that he dont love her.He never loved her.All this was his REVENGE for the four slaps.He again left the marriage with 4 pheras making her feel vulnerable at her condition."4 pheres twice for 4 slaps is what he have done to take REVENGE.He left her shattered,heart-broken and have made her believe that there is nothing like LOVE and TRUST that exists in this world. 🥱Scroll down.[See below]
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Madhu would be living in RK mansion only as RK wont let her go due to that 40 lakhs wala contract.She can't tell to her family or anyone coz she dont want to hurt them and also coz no one is going to trust her.
If she tries to go alone to some different place(to leave everything and go to live her life alone) then RK have warned her that he will do a case against her family on that 40 lakh rupees and will destroy her family.So Madhu only have one option to repay the money to RK and until and unless she does that she have to live with RK.They both will act as the normal husband-wife,the normal RK-Madhu.But whenever they are alone RK wont leave any chance to humiliate her,insult and hurt her.Madhu. will also fights him back as the SHERNI he used to called her.Just that this time RK is not by her side.


P.S. So guys this is the main base of the story.Tell me if you guys like it.
This is my first attempt to write a story,So pls dont bash me if you dont like it. 😆
I will try to post the first part soon.

P.P.S. Guys I am through cell-phone and it is very diffic
ult for me to send pms.So please bookmark this thread for future updates.


Index
Part 1: On PG.4 and PG.5
Part 2: On PG.10
Part3: On PG.12
Part 4: On PG.20
Part 5: On PG.25 andPG.26
Part 6: PG.34
Part 7: PG.42.
Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
DesiiiiGirllll thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I actually wntd sch a plot of story! Luv it! Plz add me in yr pm list!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aniiee

I actually wntd sch a plot of story! Luv it! Plz add me in yr pm list!😊


Hey Thanks alot for liking it aniiee. 😊 I would try to post the first part soon within 1 or 2 days. 😊
I am through mobile so it would be difficult for me to pm.So pls bookmark this thread for future updates. 😳 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bashing se itna darr 😲..😆
Interesting Concept.
Cont soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: colorsluv

<font color="#FF0000">Bashing se itna darr😲..😆
Interesting Concept.
Cont soon..!!
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Its not due to darr I have habit of writing lectures at-times. 😆
Thanks for liking it. 😊
I will try to update in 1 or 2 days. 😳
arpita20 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I also wanted to read such SS...
thnx for the pm
tinkerred10 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like ur story.please add me in ur pm list:-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpita20

I also wanted to read such SS...
thnx for the pm
My pleasure


I'm glad you liked the concept Arpita.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Janvie... Hugs for writing this. I actually wanted to read something like that.
Rohan... Janvie.. I love this name... N frankly speakin, I can just imagine one person... Varun Dhawan... The SOTY effect..
Anyway.. waiting for the update. N please pm me

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