ch59-60 pg137, Updt,a road to salvation Mar 27 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nehakariba

awesome
waiting for dinner

HI Neha
Thanks to you for you kind words
will be updating either today or tommorrow and will be udating good 4 chapters dinner included hope you will like it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: love.abhay

very nice..u have presented a totally different madhu..waiting 4 next part..

Thankyou
I am glad you liked it. Hope you will enjoy the forthcomming chapters as much as I enjoyed writing it.
will be updating today ot latest tommorrow.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

it's really nice story nd todayz update was also awesome...
thnxx for d pm dear nd buddy me nxt time also do pm me...

Thankyou
It makes me happy to see that you guys liked it.
will will PM you again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: colorsluv

OMG !! Its indeed an awesome update. So different. I loved it.
Cont soon & thanks fr PMing me.

awww Thankyou for your kind words ..will be updating either today or tommorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
discipline is gud, but who will like his children to call sir. The man put him in jail without knowing d truth, so how he can deserves respect from his child
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Originally posted by: Licyabhingya

awesome ff... very different... plz pm when u update

Hi
Thanks for commenting..will PM you surely😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Madhubala... Ahaan!!! I'm loving this new avtaar of hers.

Thanks for the PM

even I am loving this new avataar of her's braty and brawly...thanks for your comment
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[QUOTE=ehmmbhvirman]Ad me to yr pm list[/QUOTEAdded😊]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sure will do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok Guys I will be updatin 4 chapters together I Know humongous update But I hope you guys will like it. Chapter six is here and more to come in later posts
Chapter 6

"Now it is the time to put that genius of a plan to action Madhu" She spoke to herself while diving back to her home

"So action number 1 call Trishna"

"Madam Number bata dein" said the constable driving with her in the jeep said to Madhu

"Number!! Kiska Number Chetan" replied Madhu

"Trishna ji ka aapne hi to kaha call karne ke liye" replied Chetan

She hit her head again and replied " Is this your first day with me"

"No Madam"

" Then abhi tak samajh nahi aaya kab tum logon se baat karti hoon kab khud se

Dabba band dhakkan jam ho kya"

"Ji madam" "Saari Madam"'.

"theek hai theek hai. What didu?For how long I have been trying to reach you.?" Where are you??

"We are in Prithvi theatre we had the rehearsal today I had told you" Replied Trishna

"Ok I will be there in about 45 mins to 1hr and then you are coming with me." Said Madhu

"Kahan"

"White house mein!!! aaj raat American president ne rangmanch ki mahan adakara Trishna Mallik ko unki janmdin ki khushi mein invitation bheja hai saath mein bechari choti behan bhi jayegi aangrakshak ban kar. Aree we will go out to celebrate shopping vopping , dinner shiner aur kahan soniyo"

"Ho gayi kahatam bakwaas, will wait for you" Trishna disconnected the call and went back to her rehearsal . Trishna Shamsher Mallik is a leading actress for Bhartiya Rangmanch and is also known for her commendable work in many issue oriented movies or parallel cinema as they say. She had her own niche and was proud of what she was doing. Her only dream was to have one dinner with RK and to be able to work with RK in one movie. She sang "bas itna saa khwaab hai" every time she told Madhu about her dream and that was pretty much every day.

Both the sisters shared a special bond and loved each other a lot. There were remarkable differences between them, while Madhu was an Idealist Trishna was a realist. While Madhu was an altruist Trishna was an opportunist. Still Trishna was a believer of live and let live, a confident and a fun loving woman.

"Didu aaj 1/4 sapna to aaj tumhara main poora kar hi loongi Dinner na sahi but meeting to RK se ho hi jayegi and this is my gift." Madhubala spoke to herself again.

"Chetan pata kiya aaj RK ki shoot kitne baje khatam ho rah ihai aur kab ghar pahuncheinge RK"

"Haan Madam RK sahib 8 baje ke as paas pahucheinge ghar"

"Pakka hai kitni reliable information hai yeh" said Madhu again

"Madam Unke PA Bittuji se pata kiya hai"

"Tab to theek hi hoga"

"Chalo plan in action." She said to herself "Prithvi theatre chalo" she got lost in her thoughts again. Her thoughts were interrupted when Chetan said again,

"Madam ghar aagaya"

Madhubala absent mindedly stepped out and then realized she was at her home. She immediately turned arround looking too cross and asked Chetan

"Yeh Prithvi Theatre hai"

"madam prithvi theatre jana tha"

"Nahi mere sasuraal" said Madhu again.

"saari madam, par hum samjhe the ki aap apne apse baat kar rahi hain"

"She was irritated beyond words. She asked Chetan to get out of the jeep."

She went in the driver's seat and drove off to Prithvi Theatre without Chetan. Poor soul could do nothing about it and was now doomed to seek his own way at night back home and that was 30 km from madhu's home.

She drove at a speed totally uncalled for and reach Prithvi Theatre in record time.

"As usual Bhartiya police never on time always comes when all the drama ends" said Trishna

"Thankyou for the compliment. Any ways a huge happy birthday sissy dear" and Madhu hugged her sis tight.

"Ok OK this is the second time in a day you are doing it. That means you are not here with my gift" said Trishna

Sissy darling I will give you the gift of your life" said Madhu

"And what might that be" said trishna

"Tusi bas dekhte jao. Hey lets go shopping I have an hour before I take you to your gift meanwhile I would want to indulge you little. Apni aukat ke hisab se ofcourse"

"teri aukat to fashion street tak hi hai." And both of them started laughing. "Lets go for a coffee atleast that ways I would be able to spend some time with you." Trishna said again.

They went to caf coffee day to get some refreshment instead of shopping.

Arround 7:15 Madhu said to Trishna " present time sissy lets go"

Do lIke or comment or criticise it if and when you have time to spare. IT means a lot to me.

Edited by mytinypaintings - 12 years ago

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