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Posted: 12 years ago
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Was feeling bored today so wrote this
I know it's not good coz it's not my normal writing style and I have never written anything for Rishbala before I have only done for Sinal & ArShi
Have taken spoilers but made it a happy ending by mixing scenes
So here goes

Madhu was flickering her hazel eyes here and there sprinkled with tears, the road was pitch dark other than for the small light decorations done in a nearby Mandir getting ready for Diwali. She was stranded in the road with her driver since the car broke down on her way to RK's farmhouse. It was Bittuji who brought the news that RK was at the farmhouse and has asked her to join him there the next day when she was worried for his whereabouts for the whole of evening.

Driver : Madam maine Bittuji ko phone kardiya hai, woh kuch inthesaam karenge, thab thak mai machanic doond ke latha hun

Madhu: ji...
The driver walked off leaving a scary Madhu stranded all alone on the road.
There was light suddenly and a screech coupled with a car honk to which Madhu turned with the utmost fear.
She looked at the sight before her and her fear vanished immediately seeing RK's SUV right in front of her.

Madhu: RK... thum... yahan...

RK: Kyun... thum koi booth ko expect kar rahi thi kya... waise bhi mai bhi kuch kam nahi hun

Madhu: Nahi... woh... mai...

RK: Biwi... thumhare record 'woh-mai' hi kyu atak jatha hai?
saying this he started to move towards the car to inspect it. He touched the engine not knowing it's still scorching hot and screeched with pain withdrawing a burnt hand. Madhu jumped forward with concern and took his hand in hers for which he didn't object, she saw the burn mark and tore her dupatta immediately and bandaged his palm. She was in tears seeing him in pain and RK who noticed this couldn't help but stare at her, they share a long eyelock which was only disturbed by the bells from that nearby Mandir.

RK stepped back and started walking towards the Mandir, Madhu followed him. He started pacing in the Mandir which confused Madhu so much. He stopped and turned away from her,

RK: Mai is baar nahi harunga...

Madhu: Ji ?...

RK: haan maine kaha na mai is baar pyar me bilkul nahi harunga... samji thum...
saying this he turns and grabs her by the shoulders hurting her to the extent she tears and the added confusion brings more tears to Madhu's eyes... Seeing madhu's confused face RK becomes more restless and drags her towards the SUV and pushes her in, he gets in drives really fast.

Madhu remains silent confused and tearing. The SUV stops suddenly with a screech and RK gets down and pulls Madhu out too. He drags her inside the farm house, he leaves her hand finally and prepares making fire for the night. Madhu bends to help him,

Madhu: RK... thum tik ho ?... Thum kuch kehe rahethe... shayad pyar ke baare me ?...

RK walks away from her utterly disturbed and then turns back to her

RK: I LOVE YOU... I Love You Madhu... I love you...

Madhu is shocked and tears of happiness flows but still she cannot believe what she heard and her expressions clearly indicates this which RK doesn't miss to notice.

RK: Suna nahi diya ?... phir se bolu ?... han mai thume chahtha hun Madhu... thum hi meri sindigi... thum hi meri dhadkan... thum hi meri ishq... aur... thum hi meri junoon

Madhu: RK... thum... mujse...

RK: Haan... aur mai yeh baar baar nahi bolne wala, kyun ki mera record tho tik tak chaltha hai...
saying this he comes closer to Madhu with a smirk on his face... but Madhu steps back and makes a sad face which puts RK on alert.

Madhu: Lekinn RK... main kisi aur se pyar karthi hun...
She looks at him innocently and his expressions changes from confusion to anger and from anger to jealousy within seconds. Madhu speaks up before he explodes further,

Madhu : mai tho apni pathi se pyar karthi hun... Unki naam tho Rishab hai...jisne muje ithna khayal rakka... jisse meri saasu ma pyar se Rishu kahake bulathi hai... jisse mai bhi Rishu bulana chahthi hun...

Madhu could clearly see RK's famous smirk forming on his handsome face which lit her up inside and brought warmth within. RK moves closer to her

RK: Ahaan... aur ?
Madhu lowered her eyes unable to take the intensity in the pair which was looking directly at her with love, passion, desire and what not

Don't throw chappals at me for wasting your time
couldn't resist to bore you guys since I'm bored to death at home today
pls leave your comments

Lots of love
Yusi

Edit
A Big Thank you to all those lovely people who have commented and left their view 🤗. I seriously didn't expect so many comments. This shows how sweet all our readers are 😳. Thank you guys so much it is so encouraging 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😉 Very nice
such a tease you are ended there 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow gtreat.thanx god there is no misunderstanding.keep up da great job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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perfect answer for madhu she loves rishab
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WOW!! Nice OS😃 Positive & happy one..Loved it..RK & Madhu totally rocked staying in their character's..Do write more..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my God! this is beautiful OS. i loved it. thanks for the OS. Keep writing. Plz PM me. add me to u r buddy list😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

😉 Very nice

such a tease you are ended there 😆


Yep I wanted to let the rest be the reader's imagination
I only wanted to induce a little bit positivity in to the forum 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali.12

WOW!! Nice OS😃 Positive & happy one..Loved it..RK & Madhu totally rocked staying in their character's..Do write more..😛


I love the way RK and Madhu are in the show
There characters simply rock so I had make sure that I kept the same trend 😉
thanks for noticing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely OS
best answer
She love Her pati Rishab (Rishu)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why chappals??? u deserve flowers dear!!! Awesome OS...👏

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