DIL-RB FF-UPDATED PT 02,NOTE PG 14,19 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
sounds intstng..
geetanjali mallik ..so maan is also there ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Wow... I'm enjoying this concept.

Thanks for the PM. Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
interesting...

DO continue...

Plzz pm me when you update next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
lovely & new concept.
loved the prologue & also the characters especially madhu's twin sister.
waiting 4 next update. update soon & PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awesome start dear
when will u update ? cant wait to read !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear
wonderful concept..
continue soon !!
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Drashti Dhami & Vivian Dsena as Madhubala & RK


PART 01






Sun dawned on the city of Mumbai with the sounds of chirping birds where a devotional songs started to sing in every market place where people worshipped that their day will be good without any troubles and sorrows.Meanwhile an elderly woman called ammaji,mother of Shamsher Malik and Raj Malik was shouting from the nearby mansion,"Arrey beta Raj'.utho subah ho gayi hai'..!"The man called Raj was sleeping soundly covering the blanket full when he heard the woman's voice then he kept the pillow on his head and covered it tightly to his ears and slept.Meanwhile a woman was doing aarti beside the woman who was shouting and glared at her when she shouted from the foot of the stairs as if she was disturbing her pooja.The elderly woman composed herself and stuffed the paan to her mouth and went and stood beside the woman who was doing aarti to idol of Godess Durga.

















The woman who was doing pooja was none other than Padmini Malik'now 9 months pregnant'with big baby bump'..and was standing with her husband Shamsher Malik holding the aarti.The elderly woman once again called her son Raj for Shamsher Malik nodded dismissively while Padmini gave prasad to him.He pressed it to his both eyes and ate it and spoke,"Maa'.chillaana band keejiye koi faida nahin uski uthne ka samay toh 8 baje hai jab unki naak ko khaane ki khushboo aayegi tab'.jaayiye jaakar apna kaam keejiye'.waise bhi aap bahut saare tine waste kar chuki hai'.!"The elderly woman pouted seeing towards the stairs waiting for her son's glimpse but he dint came and she walked past Shamsher Malik towards the kitchen.Padmini kept the pooja's plate back on the god's place and once again folded hands and asked something in her mind bowing her head and spoke to Shmasher Malik who was abt to walk towards his laptop which was placed on the hall,"Suniye'..!"














Shamsher turned towards her and gave a questioning look.Padmini slowly walked towards him holding her baby bump while Shamsher held her hand and kept his hand around her waist and asked,"Haanji kahiye'.!"Padmini spoke,"Woh'.woh aaj humein ganeshji ke darshan karne ki ichcha ho rahi hai'aap mujhe wahan lekar jaayege????"Shamsher refused first due to her health but Padmini's mood swings and stubborn nature made him to agree to her wish.At 8am near breakfast table Raj came smelling the delicious dishes for which Shamsher taunted Raj that he's good for nothing.Padmini tried to calm Shamsher but he was so angry seeing the daily routine of Raj.Raj was angry on Shamsher and vowed in his mind to destroy him and his family.
















At 10 am both Shamsher and Padmini went towards the lalbagh where the huge Ganesha is worshipped.Shamsher and Padmini visited the lalbagh temple and sat back in the car to travel back home.But on the way they got lost due to storm which started accidentally and they got lost in the forests.On that time Padmini got labour pain and she couldnt resist the pain while Shamsher saw a group of the devotees who were going to Shirdi.Shamsher got help from one of the devotees called Savitha who was about to visit the Shirdi.She helped Padmini delivering the two girl twins who were so cute and healthy.Padmini delivered the twins and fainted due to exhaustion and on the time only Savitha was mesmerised by the twins.Savitha dint had any heirs and she was so tired of calling herself as sterile woman(Baanj)that she took one of the twin child and gave it to her husband and told him to take away far away from the family.Her husband did the same thing and when Shamsher Malik came back then he came to know that Padmini had delivered the one baby girl.Padmini dint know abt her delivering the twins as she was unconscious due to exhaustion and fatigue so she loved her baby girl and gave lots of money to Savitha for helping her.

















Savitha took the money and went from there while Shamsher and Padmini came back holding the baby girl.First ammaji refused the baby to accept as she was girl and tried to brainwash Shamsher.But Shamsher knew the world so he dint came in the charm of his step mother but for Raj'..he hated the child as it was a girl.Seeing this condition Shamsher wrote a will on her name and transferred all his money to his daughter Madhubala Malik.He even wrote the will that one who marries her daughter has the every right on her property not to anyone and even wrote that if something happens in the course of her growing as if she was murdered or get natural death'.or accidental death then all the money and property will be trasnferred to an Dharamveer orphanage which was his father's.Raj came to know about the will and he planned to murder Shamsher Malik and Padmini both.But unfortunately Padmini survived in that conspired accident and she was confined to the 4 walls of Malik mansion having the tag that she's a mental patient.














After the accident of Shamsher Malik,Raj married Aishwarya who was the perfect match to him,cunning,cruel and moreover very greedy of the money.Madhu grew under her Chachaji Raj and Chachiji Aishwarya'.who was so innocent,cute and childish girl.Meanwhile her another twin who was named as kavyanjali grew normally in the care of Savitha Bhonsle urf aayi.



After 23 years'''''''''''''''>




In Prithvi Fitness centre''a boy of aged 21 exercising the treadmill faster and was remembering something as his mind vision is giving flashes of it.He was sweating badly and his body was aching due to exercise and his fitness expert was trying to calm his anger while a short man entered the room and spoke,"Uska pata chal gaya hai'..!"The man turned to short man revealing his face who had small eyes with small white nose with pink lips'..his name was RK urf Rishab Kundra and his nose flared with excitement but it turned to anger when the short man spoke disappointedly,"Lekin chief..uske paas bhi jaana naamumkin hai'..!"RK spoke with attitude,"Namumkin ka shabd RK ke dictionary mein nahin hai bittuji'.!"The short man who was called as Bittuji spoke still trying to explain the situation,"Ji chief..aapke liye toh kuch bhi namumkin nahin lekin situation ko samajhne ki koshish keejiye'.ab uski shaadi ho rahi hai kiseeke saath'..!"














This revelation made RK shocked and stood rooted to the spot frozen.He couldnt believe himself that she was about to be married and he couldnt do anything.He closed his eyes once again and a girl came into his mind vision.That girl had angelic face with almond eyes with long white nose and lush pink lips.She was the angel descended from heaven and her face made his strength to double up and spoke to Bittuji confidently,"Mein aaj raat jaa raha hoon uske ghar'.!"Bittuji was shocked and spoke,"Is tarah..chief aap bhool rahe hai aap Raj Malik ke saamne khade hai ek wrong move aur aapki poori carrier bikhar jaayegi'us ladki ko chodkar aap apne carier par kyun nahin concentrate karte'.!"Bittuji was about to speak further when RK held his hand to stop him.Bittuji fell silent and RK spoke stubbornly,"Mein aaj raat uske ghar jaa raha hoon..aur yahi final hai'.!"RK stormed out of the fitness centre while Bittuji sighed seeing his over possessive boss.




Do please like it and comment'my fingers are crossed'..



Note-Well guys i have tried to give justice to every characters'and please let me know abt the characterisation'is it correct or not becoz the serial is ongoing and more characters have to be revealed.Main part is i have to change the Madhu's twin sister's name as Kavyanjali from Geetanjali as it wont suit the characterisation and moreover if i bring the name Geet then i have to bring the character Maan too'.and i dont want the clash of the fans here.So her name is changed from Geetanjali to Kavyanjali.


Prologue-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3336558/dil-rb-ff-updated-pt-02-note-pg-14-19



Next Part 02-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3336558/dil-rb-ff-updated-pt-02-note-pg-14-19





Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update dear..
intstng..cant wait to read more..
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