Its all about being loved! A rishabala FF (p1 pg3) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: colorsluv

Nice start.Do continue.


thanx dear. willl try to update soon. :)


thanx

Originally posted by: Marie_789

Wow it is really nice start. Pl continue.

PM me when you update.


thanx dear will try to update soon :)

add ...Rose... in your buddylist for pms :)


sure

Originally posted by: PerfecT..GaL

Wow awesme start..plz add me to ur pm list


thanx

sure dear.

add ...Rose... in your buddylist for pms :)

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

continue dear and update soon. Nice start add me to your pm list


sure :)

add ...Rose... in your buddylist for pms :)

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

Superb part ⭐️

Loved it ❤️
Do cont soon


thanx. :) sure dear. will try to update soon


thanx :)

Originally posted by: ashred12

interesting...pls continue with an index...


thanx :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
K y u discontinued all ur kriyansh ss or ff...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
P A R T 1


*Dehradun*


A guy sat on the chair drinking his coffee and reading the newspaper. Soon a lady came down preparing the table for breakfast. Both gave eachother a slight smile and continued with their works.

"so ... " the lady started with the conversation.

"no need" he winked at her. "I decided to ask her out..." the guy announced.

"great then..." the lady said making her comfortable on her chair.

"when can I expect you to show her up over here?" she asked wanting to meet her would be sister in law.

"uh? soon ofcourse!"

"oh really? and when will this soon come?"

"tomorrow I guess?"

The lady let out a slight chuckle.

"dont fool me" she said midst her laughter.

"you know, you look nice laughing" he gave her a compliment

"no i never knew" she again chuckled.

"kay fine im leaving bye..." the guy said getting up from his seat and proceeding towards the door.

"wait...!!!!" the lady said

"Dr. Armaan Malik how many times do I have to tell you to wear it properly?" She said to her bro like friend and adjusted his collar.

"woops... phir reh gaya... bye...!!!" He finally bid her bye as he left the place.

"madhu aunty?" said a little boy peeping from the main door.

"heyii baby boy..." said madhu gathering the boy in her arms.

"Im not a baby boy..." the boy pouted "... can I get a shuttle cock of mine from the terrace?" he asked as sweetly as he could.

"itna upar pheka?" madhu said not believing her ears.

"mumma ne phaika!" the boy exclaimed "... can I get it pls...???" he said with a puppy face.

"sure" she said as the boy smiled wide. "... I will just get it. kaka give this lil champ something to have!" she said to an elderly person and went up to take "shuttle cock" from the terrace.

***

*Mumbai*

"BITTUJI...!!!!" shouted RK as bittuji ran into his room.

"yes chief?" he asked a little scared.

"did you found something?" he asked angrily.

"ya chief main bas..." he was speaking wwhen RK intrupted.

"yes or no?" RK asked needing a straight forward answer!

"yes chief!" bittuji asnwered.

"I guess you were supposed to tell me this thing!"

"sorry chief. chief wo bhaabiji dehradun mein hain. apne kisi dost Armaan Mallik ke saath rehti hain and luckily next scene dehradun mein hi shoot hona hai...!!!" asnwered bittuji clearing all the doubts of RK

"great then...!!!" RK said taking a break. "...when are we gonna leave?" there was lot of sweetness in his voice this time but he recovered soon.

"tomorrow only chief..." answered bittuji and left RK's room as he asked him to.

That whole night RK wasnt able to sleep... all time thinking of HER !!!





So how was it?
Hope to be nice. *finger crossed*
Pms will be sent later :)
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Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

K y u discontinued all ur kriyansh ss or ff...???


better nt to ask

i was even gonna leave IF

kuch logon ki wajah se ruki hui hun bas
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue soon and add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
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konsy🤗
really niuce start...
first chapter was very well done...
madhu in dehradun...n rk in mumbai...
finally rk realised his feelings and started searching for madhu...
wow now he knows that madhu is in dehradun...n he is going der...
waiting for their meeting...
loved madhu and karan's bond...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--

...
konsy🤗 cupcake 🤗
really niuce start... awiie thanku 😳
first chapter was very well done... thanx again 😃
madhu in dehradun...n rk in mumbai... hmm
finally rk realised his feelings and started searching for madhu... yup
wow now he knows that madhu is in dehradun...n he is going der... yes yes! 😆
waiting for their meeting... next update MAX!
loved madhu and karan's bond... karan. he's my fav actor AFTER vivian 😛 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
hey nice start. plz add me to your pm list and update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
@ cupcake - luved ur dp 😛

mennu vi chahiye rishabala ka *pout*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

alle baba re
inne sare thanku😳..
kaha rakhu...
vapas le le😆...

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