OS:I can take care of my biwi part 2 updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first OS in Madhubala forum...
hope you all like it...
This is just a random OS based on their love track...



OS:I can take care of my biwi

This is just a usual morning...

RK 's first glance searched his biwi's face,it's his first task after getting up in the morning..
Though he pretended the fact that he cared Madhu a lot...šŸ˜‰
But there was no sign of madhu there.
He just woke up from recliner..."May be she is in washroom"
He thought himself...

But he could not resist himself to know where she was actually..
"Biwi..Biwiw..kaha ho?"-he roared...

NO RESPONSE...
"what happened to my sherni's voice??Suddenly she becomes so calm..."
again he screamed for getting single response...

Dipali was passing by there...
She peeped in RK's room
"What happened to you RK?why are you screaming at top of your voice ?BIWI bhag gayi kya tumhari?"
RK:"Deepali...
that's none of your business...Don't you have any sense?
In early morning,why are you peeping in my room?Don't you know to peep in at this time and also for newly married couple,it's a crimešŸ˜•"

Deepali:"RK..Don;t lie to me..i am well known about the fact that she is your wife of 4-pheras...And also"
RK:"Deepali..i don't have energy to talk at you now..please we will continue soon,but please give me a break"
and he continued calling madhu...

Bittuji was in hall...
"chief..actually..bhabhiji is going to her maika..."
RK astonished at madhu's sudden decision..
"why?any problem???is everything okay bittuji?she can tell me"

bittuji:"ohh,i don't know...she did not give me any reason,just tell me to let you know when you will ask for her"
RK thought :"biwi ki itni courage!!!😔mujhe bina bataye chali gayi"
and called her cell.
But no response...

He was now full on anger dialled land number of his sasural...
:"sasuma...namaste...madhu ko phone dijiye..."
ma:"ohh..RK..madhu is not well.having fever how can she come here to meet me?i just don't understand how can madhu be so careless?
anmd you RK,how can you let her go lonely?"
RK:"what???fever?"
ma:"yes..and"
but the conversation was ended as RK already hang down the phone and ran quickly to see his careless biwi...

RK came with doctor to check madhu properly...
He prescribed some normal medicines..
"doctor..did you check my wife properly?"
doctor:"it's nothing to fear RK.just normal viral fever,may be she is enjoying this monsoon😃"

RK:"it's not a joke doctor...if my wife is not getting well within tomorrow..then you will forget to crack jokes😔"
doctor:"no RK,she must be well "

and he escaped from that place...

Sasuma:"RK...don't feel bad.she is here with her mother.she will get well soon"
RK seeing madhu unconscious felt emotional...
His full concentration was in Madhu...
Understanding RK's emotion...
again she told holding his shoulder:"madhu will be fine soon RK"
RK:i know..she have to..and i will take her with me..."
sasuma:"But RK...she can't take any journey now"
RK:"it's not journey,my home is not so far from here..
and i can't do any work without seeing her infront of me..."
sasuma:"but she is still unconscious"
RK:"my car is luxurious sasuma..don't worry,your daughter will be safe"

and he took her in his arms..


Radhaji was shocking to see madhu unconscious...
and of course misses junior bhatiya felt jealous seeing madhu in RK's arms😲..
radhaji:"what happened to madhu?"
RK:"that's none of your business.."
Deepali:"so...bechari "
RK:"Please shut up your little mouth..."
and instructed servants for giving hot milk and others...

He lay her properly in bed...
She is still unconscious and her body was super heated..
"biwi..please open your eyes...?"
and holding her cheek...
servants came with required things...
"you can leave"-roared wildly...

Radha came..
"Rishu..."
"leave...just leave us"-RK
Deepali :"RK..why are you become so tempted..just fever..just chill.."
RK:"chill?you want to chill..Go and eat chilly...don't disturb me and my biwi"

Deepali left with anger.
Precap:
Madhu's fever was getting down..
Now what will RK do to cure his biwi???


How's this?
Do you like this concept..
then don't be silent...just show your reponses by giving your valuable opinions😳..
Please let me know will i continue???

If,you want to get pm..please let me inform😊
Silent readers,pleaseee
give your ideas šŸ˜›


link of part 2:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70768233

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...Seema... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one do continue.loved to see rk as a caring husband.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it šŸ‘šŸ¼
Nicely written 😊
Awaiting the next ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vmpy

nice one do continue.loved to see rk as a caring husband.





thank u for commenting first😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start. You are a gud writer and make itss. Add me to ur pm list and update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2 good nd that chilly joke🤣.update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice1.. continue alredy assumed somany things in my mind bt eager ti know wt next acording 2 u..

i m having exams n i jst opend if.. ahhh v refreshing my mind after these many days..


Edited by mauaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like it, I'm waiting for a continuation :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice yaar...please continue soon and also pm me...vil be waitin 4ur pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luved it waitin for next part pm me...

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