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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Please read completely...😃...
I tried my best to portray it...
Please let me know is it approved by you guys?


Part-2


RK was getting impatient as his dear wife was still not responding him...
"Bittuji..."-he screamed...
Bittu:"ji chief...is anything needed?"
RK: "How can you allow her to go her maternal house?you should inform me"
Bittu:"i am not the authorized person to give my opinion to her,she is your wife"

RK:"How many times i told you don't talk like this to me,
this fever is not getting down...can you prepare hot soup for her"

Bittu:"sorry chief,i think bhabhi ji will like that hot soup if you yourself will prepare for her "
RK:"me?RK? how can you think like this?"

Bittu:"haa,chief...she will recover soon"
and he left from that room.


RK thought for a while...
Suddenly he felt madhu was taking breath harsh...

RK:"madhu,tum theek to ho?"
madhu:"RK...where is ma?"

RK:"i ask you question first...give me answer,then only..."
RK murmured:"no..i am getting rude again,it can affect her badly"


then he politely hold her face with his hands...
"biwi..you are in your room..now how do you feel?
How are you feeling now?
are you hungry?
you are not taking food from morning...
you are supposed to tell me that you are going to meet your ma..
i am..."

madhu  with confused look
:"RK,i forgot all your questions...
firse bologi
(can you repeat it all?)"[with puppy face]

RK smiling:"biwi...take rest..i am just coming"
and his biwi could say anything,he just rushed out from room and went to kitchen to prepare soup...

with the help of books of soup recipe he was able to cook it..
after sometime he returned room with soup in his hand...

seeing madhu near the cupboard
"biwi...what are you doing here?i told you to take rest"

madhu:"oh RK...i am better now...look the room is not clean,i have to fix it now"
RK taking clothes from her hands
:"no madhu...just take rest"
and he gave soup...
and commanded:"finish it now"
madhu:"but RK."
but he forcefully gave her the soup...
"biwi...how is this?"
madhu:"okay.."
RK:"sirf okay?"
madhu:"matlab..."
RK:"nothing...madhu take rest...so jao"
madhu:"what happened RK?it's nothing..i am completely fine"

RK:"but you are not completely cured...fever is still present...
you know biwi..i only can torture you..no one else no one including fever is allowed to torture you..got it?"

"now go to bed and sleep"

next morning..RK was the first one to wake up..and usual his glance was searching for madhu...
again she was not in bed...
he just jerked up from bed and screamed at the top of his voice...

"biwi,biwiii"
Deepali:"what happened RK?"
RK:"Are you my biwi?
why do you again peep in my room..i told you..."
Deepali:"RK...i can take care of my dewar too..it's my haqq"

RK:"but i myself can take care of me.."
and ran to search madhu...
He heard soft music from roof...
he ran upstairs to view it...

and he saw the most wonderful angelic scene infront of him...


It's madhu who singing "padheshan" and dancing like baby...

he was mesmerized by her beauty..
She was damn adorable...
RK:"madhu...what are you doing?"
Madhu:"kuch nehi(smiling)"


RK:"again smiling?fever babaji temporary has left you that does not mean you can dance here in dawn...you are crazy "
Madhu:"all times sleeping..i can't take it more"

RK:"don't behave like baby...in this time...it's not good to feel this cold air"
and he took her in arms and went room..


He placed her in bed..and ordered
"Biwi..just just rest"

"If i find you outside this bed,you know what can i do?"-RK


How's it??
thank you everyone for giving your opinion for 1st part..
so please don't forget to comment for 2nd part also...
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Edited by arpita20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Amazing continuation :) ... Loved the way he got her soup and yes the last line is the best ' if I find u outside this bed u know wt I can do ' haha awesome !!! Update sooon :)Edited by zara.92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: zara.92

Amazing continuation :) ... Loved the way he got her soup and yes the last line is the best ' if I find u outside this bed u know wt I can do ' haha awesome !!! Update sooon :)



thank u dear😳
Posted: 11 years ago
#44
loved it yaar. plz update soon and plz pm me. i'm fan lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Loved ir yaar
Tooo goood update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Amazing continuation :)
and r yu going to continue this os more or this is the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
👏awesome plz continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Aww !! RK made soup fr his Biwii & Its Dipz Haq 2 take care of his devar ?? 🤢 Disgusting.
Any way Loved ur update.Cont soon & thanks fr PMing me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Amazing continuation :)

and r yu going to continue this os more or this is the end




trhank you..
this is the END dear😊
Do you have some idea.?
then please share...how should i continue this...
actually this is one shot..
so if i have to continue it,i have to change it into SS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Amazing part continue soon...loved it...:-):-):-)