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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: smdosi
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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hey yar add me in ur buddy list nd do pm me ven u update ur wrk

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 1

Madhu's POV:

I just stared at him while crying silently, "How could someone give you so much pain? I still can't believe that, RK - The Superstar has this face even, the face which is hidden from the world, the face which shows vulnerability, sadness, pain, desire for love...all this while I hated you thinking that you didn't have a heart but you did have one...the only difference was that it was shut because it was marred too many times to be opened again. Opening it would also open old wounds...but I still have to pen it RK...to give Ma her son back...you've to open it again..let it heal and then you will be happy once again.." thought Madhubala.
"I don't even want my enemy to be in my condition than why do you think that I will want you to be in that condition?" he said in anger and irritation.
"But RK isn't that what you wanted. Me being in pain, me hurt,just like a lifeless corpse..with no living spirit left...didn't you promise me, that you will torture me to that extent that I will even despise living? Didn't you promise to end my fighting back spirit? Didn't you promise me hell? Then why the sudden change of mind?" I replied. Though I knew I had hurt him but still I had to do this. To make him understand his real self I had to make him even understand his another avatar i.e. The Superstart RK. He is gentle at heart but he is not ready to accept that fact. I have to make him aware tha he cares though he is RK.
"Don't you get it woman? You're my freaking wife...though I hate you and you hate me and I willing do things that irritate you but you're not my enemy and I said you before and I'm saying you now even my enemy doesn't deserve pain like me than why would I want you to have it. Yes I hate you. There is no doubt about that. The only thing is that I don't want another RK to be born. There can be only one RK. You can try as much as you want but you can't be me." he replied hurt yet in anger trying to hide his hurt behind his arrogant words but failed miserably.
After seeing him so vulnerable I could only think about Ma. I vowed silently to heal him and return Ma's Rishu back to her. Though Ma hates me but she will understand me later on. Better late then never.
"Get in car. We are going home. And yeah no need to pity the Superstar RK. He doesn't need your pity" he ordered and sat in the car.
"RK listen to me.." I tried talking to him.
"Get in the car Biwi because I'm moving from here. If you wish to be the dinner of wild animals then bye!" saying that he started the engine. I could do nothing than sigh and silently sit in the car.
We drove out of that place and were back home.

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RK's POV:

As soon as we reached home. I went in my room and tried to shut myself up. I didn't know why I opened up in front of her. She was my enemy then why did I say everything to her? I didn't know. I thought she was messing with my brains so decided to sleep and call it a day. Tomorrow I was thinking of leaving early so as to avoid her questions. I know she would ask as to why I hid from her that her Mallik attacked me. But even I didn't know. I just knew that she couldn't be me. She can't bear the same pain as me.
I didn't know when sleep overtook me with these thoughts in mind.

Next day I got up early to leave before Biwi again starts her questioning session. I was ready to leave and even Biwi was doing her work. But as usual she started questioning me of where I'm going. And I being me, did answer her back arrogantly and suddenly during our conversation we heard my Sasuma's voice.
We ran down to see Sasuma being insulted by Dipali and the woman who gave me birth. And Sasuma was silently taking in all the insults, even Madhu was crying. Suddenly I see the woman who gave me birth giving Sasuma 40lakhs rupees in exchange of taking Madhu back home i.e. her chawl. I didn't know why but I had to stop her that time. And I did. Time for action!

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"Cut it!...Cut it! Waah what a shot given by the woman who gave me birth and my Bhabhiji...you know Mrs Senior Bhatia now you look like you got genes from the boy whom you gave birth. Such a great actor potraying my mother but same can't be said about your acting bhabhijee...By the way, coming to the point I'm telling you for the last time if you one more time hurt my Biwi or her family members you will find yourselves out of this house. And by hurt I mean both physical and mental and even verbal abuse bhabhijee! So you better take care or get ready to pack your bags." I said angrily.
From the looks of it I could tell that my Biwi was mentally thanking me for saving her mother's pride and her. But I just arrogantly shrugged it off saying it was for revenge even though it wasn't I myself didn't know the reason.
After all this drama I asked Sasuma to spend time with her daughter and I left from there. I could no longer stay with Biwi's thoughts in that house. I had to leave to clear my mind.

A/N : Please ignore the errors as it is not proof read. Sorry for the inconvenience. Enjoy and please do leave your comments.

Edited by smdosi - 12 years ago

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RavishinRavzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

lovely sharu👍🏼

Madhu confronting RK,so that she could bring out the Rishu from him.

Though some parts match to that of the original show,it has its own aroma,which will be leading to the main parts.

It clearly shows that though RK thinks her to be his enemy,he wishes that she shouldn't suffer what he doesn't wishes even the worst of his enemies should.

The self-thoughts which weren't portrayed on the show,were perfectly presented here,giving foundation to the future parts.

Edited by Ravz333 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

r nyc start dear, loved it. Though i think it was same as the episode and u should had add a little bit new, but still gud start and i was trying to send u pm for update, but it failed. sorry for that yaar

Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago

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Piyali

@love.piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Ravz333
lovely sharu👍🏼
Madhu confronting RK,so that she could bring out the Rishu from him.

Though some parts match to that of the original show,it has its own aroma,which will be leading to the main parts.

It clearly shows that though RK thinks her to be his enemy,he wishes that she shouldn't suffer what he doesn't wishes even the worst of his enemies should.

The self-thoughts which weren't portrayed on the show,were perfectly presented here,giving foundation to the future parts.

Thanks so much yaara...
You're the only one who understands me..😃

Edited by smdosi - 12 years ago

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Piyali

@love.piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: deepak148
r nyc start dear, loved it. Though i think it was same as the episode and u should had add a little bit new, but still gud start and i was trying to send u pm for update, but it failed. sorry for that yaar

Thankyou dear...its ok...will wait for your next pm..And yeah I had to start with scenes which were there in the show...and you will find many similarities in this as the show but the only difference will be that here we will be giving the POVs of both Madhu n RK...we will show their view and thought process...and this will further lead up the story in future updates..