Rishbala-ff-Tujha main hai meri jaan,cha-2,pg-10 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

66

Views

8.7k

Users

35

Likes

265

Frequent Posters

Vsoujanya thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#51
😊i think its a very good start! i like it so far, and most importantly its easy to understand your writing which i appreciate! šŸ‘ pm when you update please!
love.piyali thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Finally guyz you are getting the update...all the credit for the DELAY goes to me as me being the lazy bum I didn't edit so shruti had to wait. I'm very sorry guyz. but now don't worry I'm back in action.I've just written and PMd it to shruti. She is just checking. If everything ok then she will be posting it in some time so yayy!!!!!!!!🄳
shrutisweety thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#53
chamkili03, sviren, lipika20, SHINYSHREYA, Nian4life, Anjali.12, Sofia13, Asyalover, Vsoujanya, Divya.n.t, cutestar12, Angel.Khushi, arunsunita_gm, dreamyjennice, vijayarvi, smdosi, Marie_789, Priya46, SAnonymous, rock_ruvi, arul01, crystalalena, Ravz333, colorsluv, deepak148, priya00147, Shravya.M, prava55663, punam2712, kavana_n, --Udhay-



hey frnds thanks for liking and comments,
and a big sry for the late
i my home fuction was their so could not
update, i am sry from now i will contine and update soon,


.Shree. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#54
nice one 😊
please continue soon.
shrutisweety thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#55
hey frnd i am really for the late
due to function i delayed update
now i will be updating soon
u have to bare mešŸ˜†


here is a small recap😊


Recap of chapter 1 :

Sikki challenges RK to bring Madhubala, a village girl to bollywood for RK's movie. To convince Madhubala, RK goes to her village. On the way his car breaks down, while it is being repaired he goes and sits in a garden where he is irritated by a girl and her group of friends. The girl is none other than our very own Madhu but he doesn't know that and they argue.



chapter-2

RK was about to scold Madhu but thankfully Bittuji came and she was saved from him.

"Chief the car is ready. Shall we leave?" asked Bittuji.

"Yes. Lets go. Some people are not worth my time." answered RK angrily while watching Madhu's face and then starts leaving.

Madhu again starts laughing with her friends which can be heard by RK which angers him more.

Bittuji turns back and pleads to Madhu with his eyes to stop. Seeing Bittuji's request she does.

After all this drama RK gets into the car with Bittuji and they drove out of that place.


******

"Chief we can't disclose the fact that we want Madhubala as our herione to her and her family members. Even if we do say, they will not be ready to send Madhubala with us. Only she can convince her family members and she is only not ready to come. So first we have to convince Madhubala. Then the remaining work of convincing will be done by herself. For now we will say them that we have come to see their village." said Bittuji fearfully as he knew that his chief is not in a good mood right now.

"Bittuji do anything. Use any damn tactic in the book and get me this Madhubala in the film." said RK arrogantly.

"Ji chief. As you say." replied the assistant.


******

Meanwhile they reach Madhubala's house.

As soon as RK steps out of the car and looks at the house. He gets astonished. The house was big and beautiful. The gardens, the atmosphere, the cleanliness took RK's breath away. He never thought in his wildest dreams that a small village like this will have such good houses.

They go inside the house. The servants call Shamsher.

He comes out of his room and sits on the Sofa opposite to them and asks the servants to bring Tea, coffee, juice as per their wishes.

"Hello! How can I help you?" asked Shamsher in a polite way.

"Ji we are here to visit this village." replied Bittuji.

"Ok. I understand. We will show you around, but this is Superstar RK right? Why will he come to such a place? And why have you come to our house specifically?" asked Shamsher in a suspicious tone.

"Yes he is Superstar RK. My chief. Actually he heard a lot about this village from his co-workers and friends so decided to visit this place. And we came specifically here because you're the Sarpanch of this village right? So which place is more safe than Sarpanch's house. Do you have any problem?" asked Bittuji apprehensively.

" Aree no problem. You'll can definitely stay here." said Shamsher cheerfully. His doubt all forgotten.

"Ramu come and keep Sir's luggage in the guest rooms." ordered Shamsher.

"Thankyou Mr. Malik." said RK.

" Its ok RK. The pleasure is all mine." said Shamsher smilingly.

They went in their rooms, freshened up and were coming downstairs when RK heard a sound from one of the rooms.

"Bittuji aap jaiye. I'll come down in some time." orders RK.

"Ok chief." said Bittuji and left.

After Bittuji left, RK went in the direction of that sound and entered the room. It was the store room. In the store room there was another small room. He entered in that room ans saw a girl was standing there with her back facing him so he couldn't see her face.

He goes near her and keeps his hands on her shoulder and turns her around. After seeing her face he gets the shock of his life as the girl in none other than Madhu.

"Tum?!!" Both RK and Madhu shout at the same time.

Meanwhile servant sees that store room is opened so he goes and locks it. They both are too busy staring each other angrily that they did not notice all this.

"What are you doing here?" asks Madhu after coming out of the shock angrily as she never expected him to be here.

"Leave about me! What are you doing here? Following me to irritate me more? Or trap a rich guy like me in your web?" asked RK fuming.

"Oye mister! Mind your tongue, you're standing in MY house! You say what are you doing here?" replied Madhu.

"I'm your new guest Ms so mind your tongue. Didn't you learn in school? Guests should be treated as God?" asked RK sarcastically.

"Shut up!" says Madhu and moves to go out of the room. But to her dismay the room was locked and they were trapped in there.

She again tries to open it but all in vain. Even RK tries but of no use.

"All this happened because of you!" accused Madhu.

"Its not because of me. Its because of you. Nor you would have come here and made noise nor I would come here and get locked up." relied RK.

"What the hell...who asked you to come here in the first place? Its not like I had sent you any invitation card to come here so don't blame me you idiot" said Madhu in anger and started banging the door.

Hearing all the noise from the store room the servant opens the door and says, "Madhu beti, what are you doing in store room?"

"Aree Kaka I wanted something so had come here. And someone locked the door." replied Madhu.

"Aree beti maaf karna. I only locked it. I thought its empty." said the servant apologetically.

"Aree koi baat nahi kaka. Its ok." said Madhu smilingly.


RK who was watching all this silently till now asked her finally, "Is this really your house and your name is Madhu?" asked RK cautiously mentally cursing himself for ruining his image and chances.

"Yes this is my house and yes my name is Madhu, Madhubala Shamsher Malik. Why do you have any rpoblem with that also?" asks Madhu sarcastically.

PRECAP :- RK meets Sanjay and tells everything to him.




ok this all for this update
leave ur comments
once again i am sorry for the late 😊

credits to ME and SMDOSI
RavishinRavzy thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome update



🤣
hum tum ek kamre mein band hooo
aur shock lag gayi




pls upadate soon😃
Edited by Ravz333 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#57
its first time i am reading abour rishab amd madhu fictional story, and trust me...its amazing. so sikki challenged rk to bring madhu and launch her as an actress! looking forward to it.😊
-SmexyGhost- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#58
After a long tym finally u updated.
Awesome. Loved it.
Cont soon the next part & thanks fr PMing me.
princesshelen thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Amazing...
At last rk comes to noe madhu name
Waiting fr the next part
prava55663 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#60
great update shruti...

Finally Madhu and Rk ka introduction ho gaya...
waiting for the next part:)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".