GUZARISH-- final part in 35 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update, full of suspense and drama :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
pls thoda jaldi update karna this tym!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updt
nxt pt ke liye wait nahi hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago

Guzaarish part -12

The sound of the phone brought Madhu back to Earth; she opened her eyes to find Rk looking much more dazed than her. Half of her clothes were loose and her neck had the marks of their passionate encounter...Madhu picked up the phone and walked into the balcony,

Rk watched her dazed form and knew it was the time for the truth...His Madhu had to know how much she meant to him. Madhu gulped in fresh air to calm herself, her heart still lost in Rk's passion...She placed her hand over her heart to calm it and even as she closed her eyes...Rk's face flashed in front of her face...and in that second Madhu knew she had fallen in love with him... but she knew that they could never have a happy ending...

Madhu came to the room and sat on the bed fumbling with the phone. Rk sat beside her, touching her mildly...

M-"Rk, What happened some time ago was"

Rk-"The right thing to happen according to me Madhu..."

Madhu looked at him blankly...Rk went on his knees before her and held her palm softly and spoke after taking a deep breath..-"Madhu I don't have any regrets for getting that close. For I wanted to claim what belongs to me...

Madhu looked at him super shocked..

Rk-"Madhu I am completely bestowed with you. Your, attitude,beauty,simplicity your everything...I want to see the Nigeria falls holding the hands of our daughters and you, walk through the empty streets in night sharing one Ice cream be with you, through out every speed breaker, every U-turn, every weather,year,second and moment ..."

Madhu could feel her eyes going watery, as her mind went to Yuvraj's face and a similar confession...Madhu pushed Rk away and ran out of the room...

Yuvraj was working on the laptop, when he got up suddenly feeling uneasy...something was wrong...when the door burst open and a crying Madhu ran in and hugged him as if her life depended on it...

Ud just hugged her back and let her allow the tears flow...After a few minutes Madhu came to her sense and wiped the tears and looked at Raj, who handed her a glass of water..

Madhu sat and looked at him wanting to say something when

Ud-"Rk proposed to you right?"

Madhu nodded..

Ud-"What did you tell him?"

Madhu -"What do you want me to tell?"

Ud-"An Yes"

Madhu looked at him shocked...her eyes questioning "Did you ever Love Me",She cleared her throat and spoke -"I am going to tell about US to him"

Ud-"There is no Us Madhu, There will never be an US"

Madhu felt it was all done and began to walk away with the pain in her heart which was growing...

As soon as she left, The glass piece from Ud's hands fell with a small click and covered by blood..He looked at his laptop which had Madhu's image as the screen saver and mutered -"I am sorry Madhu...I really wish I can stop loving you...but I can't..."

Unknown to both of them Rk stood watching all these and a strange feeling crept in called FEAR...

PROMO

There was a gunshot and Rk fell down blanking out...

Doc-"I am sorry..."

Madhu fell down on her knees lifeless...Malik caught her,limp form..

5 year leap...



The nxt part will probably be the last part of this story...Not very sure but max only 2 parts left...

By the way who should Madhu go with?

Ud ya Rk?

No bias please...tell me on what basis you want...meaning if Rk - why?Ud is the ideal dream guy any girl can get... So y not him?

Do tell me soon...

Edited by smritiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rk.. please!! Both with n without being biased, answer is the same.. RK!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... omg u r going to end dis after 2 chapters...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story 😊 thanks for pm...i want rk please only rk 😳 please update the next part very soon & pm me 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
obviously rk y always he shd suffer bcoz of everyone
plss show its rk only
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story...pls pm me for next update...
I want ud as for this to story to be with madhu...

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