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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys m smrithi here and just want to write a random idea which popped up in my head dunno if itz gud or bad but u guyz can tell plz😭😭😭 comment on it if u find it worthy😊

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CHAP2-3
CHAP3-5
CHAP 4A-7
CHAP 4B-9
CHAP 5-12
promo pg 14
CHAP 6-16
CHAP7-20
CHAP8-24
CHAP9-26
CHAP10-28
Chap11-31
Chap12-33
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heey smrithi welcome to the forum dear,,,,,,
don't have any second thoughts wen u have idea just write in down dear...
so me will be waiting for ur idea
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The scene background is like ven Deepali poisons everyone including RK against Madhu...
The police are here to arrest her and all of them are looking at her in disgust ...
NOW AS THE POLICE ARE TO HANDCUFF HER...

"HOLD ON INSPECTOR" boomed a voice from the entrance...The inspector looked up to see an old man walking in with a walking stick.Deepali was irritated."Oh god now what " she thought.
Old man-"Iam sure she did not try to kill Rk and so better don't arrest her."
Police-"May i know why she would not do it?"
Another voice-"that is because she's here to protect RK and not harm him."
The person at the entrance moved forward to show his identity and as he did all were shocked beyond words ...he looked like this:


SO SHLD I CONTINUE???????? PLZ DO COMMENT ...FASTER U COMMENT ,FASTER THE UPDATE...

Edited by smrithi1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to mb forum dear..:)
nice start

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Posted: 12 years ago
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FOR PM'S ADD rasal1234 in ur buddy list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1st , Welcome 2 MB forum dear. Start is interesting.I m w8ing fr next .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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double act ...maza ayega... count me in dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IS ANYONE THERE WAITING FOR A SECOND PART?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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M WAITING DEAR UD SOON DEAR...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear.very nice start.

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