The Beast Palace :The 'Tik-Tok-On-The-Clock' Pair

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SIMI

@SiMi615

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

TheBlackJaguar AREY-VA! 👏 Very well written! You are a very articulate writer! I loved it! Yes, Madhu and RK are getting very cozy indeed! I feel that they are finally feeling some spark for each other whenever they touch or look at each other. I hope that Madhu breaks RK's stubbornness and falls head over heels for her! ❤️

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itsRitzi

@itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

LOVED the title both cople playing tik tok clock game lol!!

waise i really felt the kid like cry wen rishuwas seeing the locket yes mere anken naam ho gaayi thi tab !!! the acting and flow of tears was so very natural !!!

its gonna be grt ride bittuji hain rishab k sahar the way he carried him upstairs lol madhu ko dhakka de bhaga diya

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kar1538

@kar1538

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Beautiful...Beautiful...Beautiful and Beautiful

No comments other than that otherwise I will spoil what you wrote with my disastrous writing.

Edited by kar1538 - 13 years ago

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Rohit Monga

@TheGreenArrow

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Awesom analysis. Its always pleasure reading it, Epi more interesting ho jata hai...

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Manonidz

@Manonidz

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Hi Poco,

Well after reading all the comments, there is hardly anything left to say but two moments took the cake yesterday for me. First was where Maddy with tears in her eyes was directing Rishab to apologies again and again as if she so wanted him to actually feel how it hurts to bend without no fault of urs. I felt Rishab and Maddy somewhere are kids with broken heart...the way Rishab was crying seeing those pics, it took me to the scene just before the marriage when Maddy was asking Rishab to lend her 2 hours to see her almost dead father ...😕Phew ...Another scene was Rishbala fall ...The way Maddy held Rishab's shirt near his heart, it was so touching as if she has somewhat touched his wounds(actually she has not only touched but tear apart his wounds but surely for a better future) and the moment Rishab felt that, he simply pushed her away.

Rest, I would say Rishab's only problem is that he has locked his fond memories for too long. Living with the memories of dead ones is perhaps the worst thing one can do to himself...Rishab just need to release those memories and live his life in present ...How Maddy is going to help Rishab release his father's pain would be worth seeing ...

In the hindsight, I feel Maddy would have to do something really big to etch her real image of an honest and committed woman in Rishab's mind as after this fiasco, Rishab would treat her as like any other enemy or somewhat worst than that ...

Edited by Manonids - 13 years ago

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Shruti, Shru, shutu, frooti, DiDa

@HopelessLove

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: TheBlackJaguar

Thank you.😆...Awww... don't worry. Maddy will put a bandaid on your Rishu and give him a never ending embrace , and he will stop hurting.

EEE!! Thankk youuu!! That day I 'll be happy dancing.. hehehehhe...

Seeing his internal pain only these lines come to mind which I had read in this book "If you could see me now" by Cecelia Ahern

When you drop a glass or a plate to the ground it makes a loud crashing

sound. When a window shatters, a table leg breaks, or a picture falls off the

wall, it makes a noise. But as for your heart, when that breaks, it's completely

silent. You would think as it's so important it would make the loudest

noise in the whole world or even have some sort of ceremonious sound

like the gong of a cymbal or the ringing of a bell. But it's silent and you almost

wish there was a noise to distract you from the pain.

If there is a noise, it's internal. It screams and no one can hear it but

you. It screams so loudly your ears ring and your head aches. It thrashes

around in your chest like a great white caught in the sea, it roars like a

mother bear whose cub has been taken. That's what it looks like and that's

what it sounds like, a thrashing, panicking, trapped, great big beast, roaring

like a prisoner to its own emotions. But that's the thing about love; no one is

untouchable. It's as wild as that, as raw as an open flesh wound exposed to

salty sea water, but when it actually breaks, it's silent, you're just screaming

on the inside and no one can hear it.

These lines perfectly tell us what actually a person thinks when he is going through these emotions... I guess somewhere Rishu must be going through this and we could see all that ... 😭

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ankita mishra

@ankita24

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

awesome post...beautiful analysis...😊

i too want rishbah to fall fr madhu first...

RK really looked like a child wen he ws seeing those pics..ws in so much pain...m really touched ..

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

pocu tum kitna likhti ho... lolz...well written

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Renu13

@Renu13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

awesome analysis Poco👍🏼

emotional part where RK was remebering his golden days with his father...loved strong bonding between him & his father

eyelock of Rishbala was so cute

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

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