SS: One step from Hell! Vendatta - Part 20 Oct 1st - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb!!! loved this part 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
very interesting 😃👏 hats off to your writing skills

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element


Did you all catch the update "And the case rests", Part 5...

I had the book publisher and my manager go over the details with my mother's other best friend - also Dilip uncle's sister, Aparna kapoor - who was the main authority in making the decisions on what got included and what would be left out. I did not dare to enter my mother's world, raw and exposed as they were. Her demons were around me too and I didn't have to read them to realize them in the vivid imagery with which my mother adorned them on paper.

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As I rested my case, I reclined back, folding my feet to my side, "This piece was easy fodder for the rumor mill. It could be anyone in the industry who is targeting RK and made up that story about the chap's name being Kundra. Have you considered that?" I folded the book and placed it on the side table, "Moreover, there could be many Kundra's in Shimla. Everything, is circumstantial at best and if you want me to call Rishabh..."

Shit!

"RK," I amended quickly, "and tell him that the 'Kundra' allusion was the press' own making, I will be happy to do that..."


Thanks for pointing that out 😊 Though she never intended...but just as Ninand said Madhu's ignorance and inattention to this details has shattered RK's world... and as I said its too late now...any amount explanations is not going to mend things...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand

oh.. So he does not really believe in her innocence does he, i mean , even after she tried explaining herself. Well, truth be told, such mistakes or careless inattention to detail can really shake foundations, and when its concerning one's own parentage..😕 hmm.


But to feel the need to avenge himself, that must mean there's more to the story, more to the dynamics in his family, more to his heartbreak . An intuitive suspicion almost, arising from strained relationship maybe with his parents(?).

(lol.. you should put that note about your having added stuff to c.10, above c.11, not after it... would help in understanding what her naana is going on about;) )


Perhaps, he does not believe her, because there is more to the story...(Whether its his story or not, we will just wait for 2 more updates)

I did put the note upfront for a while, before I moved it to the bottom of the update...😊

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
loved it
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ninnallone nindipokalaa...Oh! Andala Rakshasi Nijamloki raa

Don't be in the shadows of my past alone, Oh! Sweet devil, walk into my light


(Edited out the rest of my ramblings...)

Note: Yeah! in a maudlin state of mind, today and of course, much is lost in translation. The first line is from this song as it reminds me of a happy time in Rishabh's life.
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ws awsum! Thnx 4d pm...i loved it! Gr8 update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful song!!!!!!


Love the emotions conveyed in each of the lines. They might be cliched but nevertheless always apt & able to convey the intended feelings.


It's so much so Rishabh ... just fits in for him. Apt way of looking at him to get a clue of his persona. Everything is giving meaning & reasoning to all of the madness & insanity that comes with him as a package.


So childlike demands of wanting all of her... yet matured need to just engulf all of her within him with every good & bad aspects. His uninhibited desires... & unconditional way of wanting complete submission. Honestly it just encompasses all of him
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

His uninhibited desires... & unconditional way of wanting complete submission. Honestly it just encompasses all of him


Oh! lord...how true?
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Posted: 12 years ago



Yes, truly indeed it is!!!!!


You know what I've started liking this character of Rishabh all the more. Each time, after each part ...his character starts becoming all the more intense, passionate & irresistible ...


Hayee ... please continue soon, the wait is very tortorous ... As you've had me completely hooked onto this SS.
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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