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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

😭😭😭
missing ur update... having given the habit of back to back updates... u have gone silent😭😭😭

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tibs09

@tibs09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

i read first 4 chapters and intend to read rest tomorrow..you write with a flair that is absolutely amazing ..and a prose that is lyrical and yet not overwhelming ...

the feelings are set so right ...

amazing...

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Just finished reading the last 2 .. Loved them.. Waiting for you to update :D

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

phew...finished reading ur updates...must say u r a brilliant writer...u made Rishabh more desirable...his passion,his anger...u portrayed him perfectly...lets see how the story goes from here...plzz update soon❤️

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Brew up a conversation on the thread, a comment on the story that fares more than a few words. Not flattery.

And then you will know what it can do to an author's motivations...

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Thank you Jiya...

May I just say the reason I started writing this story is gone...I won't explain beyond this.

But, Thank you in helping me out with the situation. Your suggestions were really something that can be put to work. (On that note, I don't have writers block. I'm writing. But, I'm just not posting it here 😛)

By the way, on which episode did Rishabh take his clothes off? 😆

Again, Thank you for bringing up that question. I really was hoping someone would raise it on the thread. And now I will wait and see if the readers have other takes on it.

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Jiya9

Does a writer ever need a reason to write 😉
He is staring at the Madhu's blood on his hand and slowing taking his shirt off 😳
And this is the exact reason why I suggested you need to watch Madhubala religiously 😆

You sound just like some I know...

Ah! I see...I will try , but I can tell you I'm not going to be ogling at the screen unless he a does towel dance like Ranbir.. 😆 Or takes off his shirt fully like Hrithik does...

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Precap song...Weird choice for a Mehendi, but trust me it will fit in.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glbT1-lu5Uw[/YOUTUBE]

"Hayee...Madhubala," he drawled in a wistful tone and let out a sigh, tantamount to saying she was forbidden to all from then on.

"On that note, you have to give me this last dance," he said and throwing the mike down onto the cushions, he pulled her to her feet.

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Jiya9
That is a weird song selection, and seriously no one is Bacha in that song, unless you are referring to naseeruddin shah...😆

ps.. I need to become Groupbie tonight 😉

You can spam away... I don't mind the thread being on the first page while you are at that...😛

I wish there was a video with just the song without the scenes and hopefully the writing can take care of superimposing the story's scene into your head than the one in the video.

Let's see.

Naseeruddin Shah has indeed started his second childhood.

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Jiya9
Spam? Really? 😒

my playlist... surely not mehendi songs
Tune Jo Na Kaha...New York & Mora Piya... Raajneeti

Yappi Groupbie 😆 (no more 10 comments per 24 hours restriction)

CONGRATS Jiya😃
but u were just a post away😊...as for me i am 835 short😭