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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Awesome update june.There is another hidden tale in this story of RishBala.Rishabh is a man wid plan.Temptations always make u weak & no matter how much u try ur heart desire thm.Madhu is tempted 2 Rishabh & Rishabh enjoys whn he brings out a woman in Madhu.

Rishabh stole a kiss coz he evn stole Madhu's heart while Binoy gave this kiss coz he offered his heart 2 Madhu

The intimacy RishBala shared & the way Rishabh entered in last scene was fab😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Apologies for the delayed comment on part 9 - a wonderful update which gave us more insight into the true nature of Binoy & Madhu's 'relationship', if it can be defined as so from her side...

And this update, what more can be said apart from the fact that they're already in too deep - I feel as if Rishabh is consciously aware of this, whereas for Madhu it's more sub conscious...

The quote from Christabel LaMotte that you posted in the PDS thread I believe once again comes to mind regarding Rishabh and his Madhubala.

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Interesting story so far. I am really enjoying the characters and their complexities. Just a quick read so far so a short comment for now, more later.

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ansah

@SahSah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

finally caught up with it ... man I was sure missing something ...

You are wow n the way this story is going it's superb ... beautifully written

Loving it ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Is it just me being unfair to ask for a tad bit more bustle in this thread? I normally like to post precaps and have the people discuss and comment, but the thread has been a lot inactive than I would like...😕 despite the number of likes. Where am I going wrong?

Anyways...Precap Pics...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

And a very unusual song choice for Mehendi

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_b7IYCnhpI[/YOUTUBE]

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richa13

@richa13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

no dear your storty is wonderful..i dono why u got very less comments / like ..i think many members dono about this thread you hve to keep spamming your thread and keep this thread on first page always..anyways today am gng to suggest my friends to read this story..srsly its amazing !

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: richa13
.anyways today am gng to suggest my friends to read this story..

I like to call this Pay it Forward, the IF way...Thank you :)

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Saams

@Saams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Okay,so that was part of plan,claiming himself her best friend.I believe he wanted access to be near Madhu and stop Binoy from suspecting anything.
Haha..I liked that he is still climbing up tree to get to her. If they are this aware of each other,I think she should rethink her decision.hmmm

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

I will show light, only to shut the blinds out and drown her in her own personal hell.

I will give a taste of water, only to trasfuse in it with the venom of my blood.

I will pour love into her heart, only to slice open the other that had filled hers with hope.

I will not walk over her; Tsk...Tsk...Tsk...No!

I will wade into the gaping hole of her soul, surrounding myself with her cries as my victory horns; taking her tears for souvenirs, I will walk out the other way and leave her carcass for the living dead to later pick on.

For, I'm Rishabh Kundra and as Shakespeare writes, my revenge knows no bounds.

🤗

H this is really good, I'm shocked with myself I thought I won't like it