SS: One step from Hell! Vendatta - Part 20 Oct 1st

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mandymore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Bittooji is tortured well by rishabh,,,wht plans hes makng 2 ruin her wedding

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Basilisk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Awesome post!

Loved how you incorporated the ideas from inception into this update :-)

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ninand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

I had often wished to read an ff where 'revenge' would be truly explored and explained H. I read all parts and can say this will be an interesting ride.

their equation is unclear as yet for it seems that even back n the past she had a clear idea that he was forbidden to her.. but then again, her attraction to him despite that makes me wonder if she really holds him responsible for any part of what prompted her to take revenge..

I think I can grasp Rishabh better than Madhubala, although its too early for me to understand even him.

If there was anything that could spell precisely out what 'revenge' means, it would chapter 8, where hes read out immaculate details of her life with such clinical precision. man, that tells one just how exposed the avenger wants his victim to be, to himself. pinned down in a petridish and under cold hard light.

the undercurrent of pain though, that Rishabh seems to reeling from, gave the chapter a haunting shadow you cannot walk away from. its Rishabh I'd say who's pulling me into the story. He seems to be more vibrant and dynamic but that could just be cause of the nature of the first few chapters. Madhu is already weighed down by something and she seems to be more in control..

and wow, I would love to know how publishing of a single book can push one to such emotional extremes..I mean even if their parents did have a sordid past, why should they take it out on one another?

continue soon H..

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Awesome update june.I love the way u show insanity & obsession of RK 4 Madhubala.He love chanting this name day & night & LOL poor Bittu ji was roasted by RK.RK is revenge freak now.He will surely burn Madhubala in his passion & lets c how RK will break Bala's marraige?😳

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

awesome one ...loved it dear...
continue soon...

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sanjh89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

search...
for me and for her...

why is she Madhubala...

now begins the real story...

camera action...

love

SANJH

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RaDMG25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Wow gr8 update...RK in his drunken state is like a child wanting to be entertained until they move onto something more exciting...poor bittuji the toy of RK...

So RK is planning to attend the wedding to break it up...nice...

Loved the last sentence...why is she madhubala... 😊

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

wow...that was an intense read...

so RK on the vendatta to destroy Madhubala...but in this game of revenge, as we approach hell...who is the hunter and who hunted is yet to be ascertained...

awesome but then what is expected from a writer on whose thread I wonder if even my comments hold any light...