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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for liking my poem yesterday here is today's! Enjoy ;))


Tic Toc Tic Toc, Mahdu fell neatly into the trap
Mukund ka prem ka kissa kar diya wrap ;)

RK is the creator and destroyer so Notty
Playing Zeus with Madhu's life he is looking a hotty ;))

Roma and Trishna are heading for a Fall
they have succumbed to RK's beck and call

Mother India and sab bande ka Maalik are all tense
the plot is plain to see how can they be so dense?

Trishan's face of horror is not likely to become Bootiful
However much plaster Madhu spreads and does the dutifool ;)

Mukund will have to wait a long time to get hooked
Cos RK has Madhu already booked ;))

DOP can you please focus a little more on their faces
We know our DD n VD can be super acting Aces!

All we need now is Ballu to turn up and do his fatherly Duty
TRP's will zoom and the audience in your hands be putty ;)

Jane ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love your poems😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb 👏

Love all your poems 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nicely said loved it...lol too right madhu is already booked 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys I am happy that u liked it ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jane.. so happy to see u here 🤗

M tanu (Kajol Dewani from FB) 😳

U rock yaar.. lovely work 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing poem dear👏
⭐️ 5 Stars from me
Edited by BlueFantasy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing poem...👍🏼waiting for more poems...keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb Poem👏
Good Job👏

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