OS: Dangerous Feeling( from Episode: 13/7)

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Hey,

this is my first OS in this Forum. I wanted to write from from the last Episode (13th July) when he came to her house to apolozise.

Please tell me what you think about it... Thanks :)

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Dangerous Feeling

He had something powerful about himself. She did know it from the first moment she saw him on the Piano. His straight, proud posture, his eyes where did shine danger and playfulness and his mouth where gave the reporter a cheeky smile. He looked perfect for her and for a moment she believed that he was the one she dreamed about the Night days ago. They looked alike.


But then she rejected this thought. Never would she worship and dance with someone where dont cares about other life. She called herself back in reality and figth for justice.
He did not deserve it other even when he was a star. Who gave him the right to decide the law? Who gave him the right to laugh about it?
Yes, he had laugh and was amused when she told him who she was but she had managed it to make him restless, she saw it for a moment but then again he covered it up with a playful smile and asked her about a movie with him.

He was dangerous and right now she felt it again here on the door of her home. Here he was standing and wanted to apologize and give her sister a change to stand on the stage but something told her that it was not right.


Someone like him would never apolozise or did the Prison change him? Did the Prison teach him a lesson?
No never, Maduhabala thought. It was inpossible and she was sure that the Future would prove it her. For some reason she could read it in his eyes.

His eyes where looked right now in her eyes and caught them, he didnt let go of her. His brown eyes pierced her eyes as he wanted to read her, he searched for something she could never show him. It was her fear. She felt for a moment like a prisoner and felt her body trembling. And then she could read his eyes, he did let her see it. It was pure Madness. Only Madness.Something in her shattered of a moment but then she could free herself from his view and tried to calm her heart.

And suddenly she realised that soon she would see again a side of him she never expected, soon he would let her body tembling again because if she wanted or not, their paths did already cross and she would be the one who would follow him now. If she wanted it or not but what other change would she have? She needed to project her sister because Trishna saw only the beautuiful side about him and he played with her. Madhubala felt it but she did not know why. Only time would tell her and she was afraid...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS! Do write more! 👍🏼
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Very nice OS! You are a great writer...pls write more on RiMa :)
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wow awesome OS
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WOW! Simply amazing 👏
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superb os...do write more on Rima..
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@All: Thanks for your Comment, i am really Happy =)
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awesome...keep up the good work

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