Happily ever after in Manali FF -update page 20 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Tina-Saigal2002

Jaannaa Wat hilarious dialouges... First Pri being so concerned about Damini over a small kitchen accident... makes my heart go HUMmmmmmm..... on top of that the hilarious dialouges you gave to Pri like -"You have lost half a bottle of blood... I was ROFL after reading this Pri surely knows how to exaggerate and then Sam and Varun's convo while murdering the vegetables for Salad... i.e., Sam was ready to kill the doctor while Avni's labour Pains but whose gonna calm down Pri during Damini's Labour and God save the Doctor hope they live to see the baby...🤣... its romantic and at the same time very very hilarious... Excellent piece of writing yaar.. wonderful

Originally posted by: diya86

Love this part, Jhan!! Wish you were a cv babe, we'd get to see all these awesome cute scenes then...Thanks Diya 😃 I am flattered that you think this is good enough to show on screen ☺️

@ Goldie's recipe for halwa - Dear lord!!! What is Rosh thinking?That girl 🤣

@ Pri freaking out - Too good!!! Damz feeling faint and Pri carrying her was so awesome! Loved how he scolded her and bandaged her finger. LMAO imagining Damz sitting on the sofa with a humungous bandage on her slender finger! Awww...

@ Damz losing half a bottle of blood - Pri!! *shakes her head* So you have a nautanki streak too!! Love it...

@ Sameer and Varun's convo abt Damz in labour - 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

May the poor doctors live to see the baby, indeed! Failing which, may their souls rest in peace...

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

hai jhaaaaaaanu !! atlast cmpleted reading all da parts ....its simply SUPERB !! FANTABULOUS !! ⭐️
Thanks Niki 😳

esp luvd da last part.. awwww pri is sooooooooo ovr possesive n cncncrnd 4 his damz dalng.......... awwww.. nazar na lage kisi ki !! 😍

n OMG sacch hai yaar.. Woh docs tho gaye !! pri dalu unka butha bana dega !! 🤢 😆
Those docs do not know what they signed up for 🤣
luv niki..🤗

Originally posted by: rankanrock

Hey Jhan.. first of all a huge apology.... like a HUGE one..... four parts..... ugh... i am terrible.... thanks for being so understanding.. that was really very sweet of you....no apologies necessary we understand each other na 😉

anyway back to your FF... first of all i have a complaint to make.. why are you not updating the other one...??? i want to read what happens next in it as well...... I guess now that I updated this one people will complain about the other one 🤣

Part 1:

Must say i loved it alot.......! prida happy..?? why is that so hard to digest for me.... thanks alot CVs..... honestly speaking this whole FF is hard to digest for me... everything is toooo perfect.... which is good of course... im just not used to it.....😆😆😆 anyway loved this part.. prithvi is sooo caring yar.. love the fact that he watches her like a hawk...that is sooo endearing ....😃 like the fact that wakes her up in the morning with kisses and a cup of tea... okay so i dont like it scratch that.. i love it...... loved the fact that he didnt even like it that she got up and went to sit on the swing..... so cuteeeeeeeee..!! thanks for giving us this Jhan.. you are a gem...... optimism oozes from you FFs.... its nice to read.... great job....👏

Originally posted by: rankanrock

okay so im going to make it up to you by posting 4 seperate comments....😃😃

Aww you are a doll 🤗

Part 2: really nice part again.. you have described the essence of family life really nicely... its heartening to see the whole lot so loving and nice towards each other... all in all one big happy family..... so the girls are cooking.... liked the fight between varni about malai kofta... that was quite cute... good to see prithvi intervening....😆😆😆 haha and then she realized she has to get ready.. so typical of rosh.. reminded me of what she used to be like in the beginning of the seriel.......

lol the two mothers crying.... liked the way pri was so concerned for both of them

overall another great part..... good job girl...👏

Originally posted by: rankanrock

Hey Jhan... back....great....so now you are addicted to my FF 😉....just kidding 🤗

Part 3: okay so it is still un nerving.. im really sorry... your FF is excellent.. im just getting used to the idea of it... please dont kill me... anyway nice to see that sam is good pa..... honestly is this the same guy.. and omg rosh was adding salt instead of sugar.. would have made one helluva halwa......😆😆😆 and that too from goldies recipe.... cherry on the top...😆😆😆 good update.... nice to see again... all of them happy and content.... no fighting nothing...😊 keep up the good work...!

Love,
Maham

Originally posted by: rankanrock

Part 4: awesoooooomeeeee update.....! finally some good prida scenes.. yes i admit im biased...😳😳😳 acutally you have no idea how much....😆 anyway loved prithvis concern for damini.............. so sweet.... we have seen a ton of damini taking care of prithvi's wounds scenarios.. nice to see the other way around.... loved the way he dressed her wound.... so tenderly..... love this guy......... it truly showed how mch he caes for her....

loved this update...! you are doing an excellent job...! update soon.... and update your other FF as well... sorry i havent been able to reply to your posts.... have been really busy....

Love,
Maham

P.S sorry for such lousy comments... i couldnt think of what to say...

Originally posted by: jakhushi

Jhanvi,

It was adorable. Awwwww.......loved, juts loved Pri's over the top concern, the fussing, the screaming at everyone - it was sooowww CUTE. Thanks. Glad you liked it. 😳

Awwww...again. Just loved this part - Pri being openly lovey dovey with his wife - infront of his family. Always thought he was a teeny weeny prude infront of his younger brothers...but this was lovely. Thanks

Please please please updaete real real soooon. Please girl. Coming up in 5 mins 😉

- Khushi.