Happily ever after in Manali FF -update page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone

I decided to venture into writing another FF. The first part was written a while ago and posted in the PriDa thread. I have decided to continue it.


Thanks Carie for suggesting the name 🤗🤗🤗🤗

This happens after all the misunderstandings have been cleared up and all 3 couples and Ila are in Manali with Suman (veggie). Yes Ila is still alive in my story. 😃

PART -1

The weather in Manali was just beginning to turn a little chilly. Damini was finally secure in Prithvi's love for her and there were no secrets between them. He was working on trying to be more romantic for her and he had woken her this morning with kisses and a cup of tea that he had prepared himself. She liked to think that whatever they had been through had made their love stronger. They were closer than ever. Their offices were next to each other and he stopped by several times a day on one pretext or the other. She would sometimes pretend to be angry with him but she loved it and he knew that. Gone were the days when he would disappear without telling her - now he kept her updated on his whereabouts. He called her even if he was running 10 minutes late because he knew she would worry.

He would usually wake up early and go work out, but he had gotten into the habit of being around when she woke up because it made her happy. She had finally learned to make aloo parathas just the way he liked it from her mother-in-law. Maaji was such a darling - always willing to help. She had cared for Avni like her own daughter during her pregnancy. Avni had just had a baby 3 months back and everyone was very excited with the new baby girl whom they had named Khushi. Avni would enjoy the break from having to care for the baby by herself- though maaji helped as much as she could, maaji was still recovering and Avni tried to get her to rest as much as possible. Avni was still the same person she was caring and considerate and Damini was thankful that the bitter experiences has not changed her as a person.

Roshni and Varun - those two were getting married soon. They had started dating in earnest soon after the misunderstandings were cleared up. They had decided to take it slow. Damini understood Roshni's reluctance. With both her and Avni - there was so much they did not know about their husbands when they married them - things that they found out later and hurt them deeply - though things turned out fine in the end. Rosh was being smart about it and everyone supported her including Mama (Ila). Maaji was the only one who wanted to see them married sooner, but Prithvi had convinced her that it was good to wait.

She had to pinch herself to make sure she was not dreaming sometimes. She always hated the thought of getting married because she would lose her sisters and her mom. Here things had worked out so well that her sisters would always be with her and so would her mom. Prithvi cared for Mama like his own mother and so did Sameer and Varun. Instead of losing her family, she had gained a whole new one or added members to her existing one - depending on how you looked at it. How did she get so lucky? Now all of them had 2 mothers. Even though they still called him Jeej, both Avni and Rosh looked up to Prithvi as their big brother. She liked her brothers-in-law as well. She had always liked Varun but had learned to like Sameer as well once she realized that he repented his misguided actions caused due to his love for his mother. Maaji had also apologized on his behalf and he had more than made up for his actions. Sameer (though she still called him Jai sometimes) had been a very good husband to Avni and a great father to Khushi, never letting either of them out of his sight. Sameer's now worked in the PR department of Gujral industries and had finally found his calling.

This trip to Manali was long time coming . First they could not make it because Avni's baby was due and then it was winter so the weather was too cold. Now that winter was almost gone - it was the perfect time to visit. She loved seeing the house in which Prithvi grew up . It was so peaceful here. She never wanted to leave. Mama was doing much better now that everything was settled. Her surgery had gone well and the doctors expected her to live for a long time. Her mother and mother-in-law got along well and were always discussing their children and their lives. They had plans to extended the Manali home and add a few more rooms. She smiled when she remembered the reason for that discussion.

They almost had not made it to Manali this time either as a family. She touched her stomach lovingly. Prithvi had turned paranoid with the news of the impending arrival. He was afraid something would happen to her. She had to get four different doctors to assure Prithvi that everything would be fine before he had agreed to take this trip. She still remembered his expression when she told him she was pregnant - he was surprised and scared at the same time. Everyone was hoping for a boy this time but both of them only wanted a healthy baby. Prithvi had taken to watching her like a hawk at all times - she found it incredibly cute. He waited on her hand and foot and honestly it was starting to get a little annoying. But she was enjoying it nevertheless.

Damini's reverie was interrupted by someone calling her name. She saw Prithvi coming towards her

Prithvi: There you are. I have been looking all over for you.

Damini: Why? Is everything OK?

Prithvi: (coming and sitting down next to Damini on the swing). Everything is not OK. I left you taking a nap in the room and you were not there anymore.

Damini: Prithvi I wanted to sit on the swing.

Prithvi: OK OK but you could have left a note. He gives her a mischevious smile and winks at her.

Damini: Oh my. Now you are giving me lessons in romance?

Prithvi (hugging Damini): Meri itni jurrat (how can I be so brave?)

Damini: Wahi toh (Exactly).

Prithvi: No nausea any more?

Damini: No . I am fine. I feel refreshed after the nap.

Prithvi: Are you sure you are up to a party this evening

Damini: Yes. I want to meet all your friends and neighbors. I want to meet these people who you grew up with.

Prithvi: They have all been dying to meet you too. Maa is the talk of the town. She shows up with not one but two bahus, one prospective bahu and one granddaughter. People are dying to meet you. They are doubly interested to meet you once they learned that the 3 bahus are sisters.

Damini: Why should that make a difference?

Prithvi: This is a small town Damini and this is exciting news for them. People here are very friendly but they tend to be a little nosy. They don't respect your privacy and will ask you questions that you consider rude. I just wanted to warn you about that. If someone asks you something you don't want to answer just smile and tell them to ask me.

Damini: What? I can handle this.

Prithvi: Damini....

Damini: OK. As you say hubby dearest. Mere pyaare patidev.

Prithvi: Come on. As I was looking for you Avni asked me to remind you about lunch.

Damini: Hey bhagwan I forgot. The 3 of us were going to get together and make lunch.

Prithvi: Need some help.

Damini: No we will manage.

Prithvi: Damini I do not want you to tire yourself out.

Damini: No Prithvi, we are just making simple food - it is tradition that the daughter-in-law prepares food for the family.

Prithvi: Since when did you start following traditions

Damini: It will make maaji happy. She has us do grihapraveh when we got here. I never got to do it because we ended up staying with Mama. Don't get me wrong- I love you for that.

Prithvi: Yup I am a confirmed ghar jamai and a joru ka ghulam. Prithvi laughs.

Damini watches him because she loves hearing him laugh. He laughed a lot more and was much more relaxed now that all that nastiness was behind them.

Damini: and I love you even more because you just don't care about what the world says. Ok now let me go. I have to go help Avni.

Prithvi: OK but don't tire yourself out. If you need help, ask and I will be there.

Damini (thinking to herself) - I know you will stand outside the kitchen the whole time.

Prithvi kisses Damini on the forehead and they walk back inside the house.


(to be continued)


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part -2

Prithvi and Damini walked into the house to see that everybody was gathered around the dining table discussing the menu. Rosh wanted to try something more complicated while Varun was trying to convince her that Dal chawal and sabzi would be fine. Sameer and Avni were busy with the baby. The 2 mothers were sitting down discussing the arrangements for this evening. Prithvi and Damini smiled at each other taking in the domestic scene in front of them.

Roshni: Jeej good thing you are here. Could you please explain to Varun that I am capable of making Malai Koftha.

Varun: Roshni I am not saying you cannot make Malai Koftha

Roshni: No. I thought that is what I heard you say.

Varun: No you never let me finish. I was trying to say you don't have enough time to make Malai Koftha. There is a difference.

Roshni: Either way you are saying I cannot make malai koftha.

Prithvi sees that Roshni is steaming and Varun is getting angry. He looks at Damini. Their eyes meet and she nods that he should intercede.

Prithvi: Roshni why don't you make Malai koftha tomorrow?

Roshni: But Jeej I wanted to make it today

Prithvi: Roshni we will have heavy food tonight – let us have something light for lunch – dal, chawal, sabzi, roti and some salad. It will be better for mama and maa too. Prithvi looks to the mothers for guidance.

Ila: Yes Roshni, Prithvi is right. I want to eat something light in the afternoon.

Roshni looks to Suman next

Suman: Main bhi Ilaji se sehmath hoon (I agree with Ila too).

Roshni shrugs her shoulders dejectedly. Damini walks up to her and hugs her. We will make malai kofta for lunch another day. Why don't you make that sooji halwa you learnt today for dessert. Roshni brightens up on hearing this.

Varun: Besides Roshni the party is in another 6 hours

Roshni: what. OMG. I have to finish cooking and get ready. She starts dragging Damini towards the kitchen. She stops and drags a startled Avni who was playing with the baby towards the kitchen.

Roshni: Di let's start. We have very little time left. I need to get ready.

Avni: Ab tak toh time ka koi khayal nahin tha tumhe (until now you were not bothered about the time).

Roshni: Chalo na Di – everyone must be hungry – lets start.

Both Damini and Avni laugh and all 3 sisters hug each other.

Prithvi and Sameer are laughing and shaking their heads at Varun who is cracking up too. Sameer is holding the baby and Prithvi and Varun go stand by him on either side cooing at the baby. Khushi takes one look at Prithvi and lunges for him. Prithvi settles her in his arms and Sameer and Varun stand on either side playing with her. Suman looks at her three sons playing with her first grandchild on one side and her three daughters (technically daughters-in-law but she considers them daughters) hugging on the other. Her eyes fill with tears of happiness. She turns to see Ila wiping tears too.

Suman to Ila: "We are both so blessed". How I wish Saxena Sahab (Ballu – that is how she refers to him) was here to see this. It was his dream to see the 3 special jodis.

Ila: Haan Sumanji. Kaash I had done something sooner. He would still have been alive.

Suman: Stop blaming yourself for what happened Ilaji. Sab vidhaata ki marzi thi (it was all god's wish). Unka katal us neech Inder ke haaton hua (that lowlife Inder was the one who killed him). Use saza mil chuki hain (He has been punished). Ab aapko bhi apne app ko maaf kar dena chahiye (you should forgive yourself).

Ila: You are right.

Prithvi notices both the mothers are crying and comes over with the baby. Sameer and Varun watch with concern.

Prithvi: Sab teek hai na? Aap kyun ro rahi ho? (is everything ok? Why are you crying?)

Suman: Roi mere dushman (may my enemies cry). Ye khushi ke aason hai (these are tears of happiness). La meri pothi mujhe de (Give me my graddaughter).

Prithvi hands the baby over to Suman and turns to Ila. He crouches down next to her

Prithvi: Mama are you ok?

Ila: haan beta. I am fine. She touches Prithvi's shoulder lightly to assure him she is fine.

Prithvi sits down next to Ila because he is concerned.

Prithvi: Mama I will take care of everything. You need not be worried.

Ila: Nahin Prithvi beta. Your mother is right - these are tears of joy. I never thought we would all be so happy and that I would be alive to see all this happiness. The doctors led me to believe that I would only live for a short time.

Damini notices her mother talking to Prithvi and comes by.

Prithvi: You never went to see a specialist until we forced you too.

Damini: Yes maa. Do you remember how much you resisted? And Prithvi pleaded and forced you to go. Even I was mad at him for making you go because you were so ill. But he still insisted you go.

Ila: Haan I remember. Apne pitah ka vaastha diya tha tumne (you told me to do this for your father). I owe your father my life and the happiness of my three daughters. Your parents have raised three excellent sons.

Prithvi is embarassed. His mother rescues him.

Suman: Ilaji you have done an excellent job with your three daughters too. Where else would I have found such good girls for my three sons - especially for Prithvi - isko tho koi ladki pasand hi nahin aati thi (he did not like any girl)

Prithvi: Maa stop.

Suman: Aur Sameer. How could I find a homely and nice girl like Avni for him. Varun ke liye tho Roshni is the best. I am waiting for tonight so that all my neighbors can see how lucky we are.

Ila takes the baby from Suman. Suman leaves with Damini to help the girls in the kitchen. Baby Khushi grabs ahold of her Uncle Prithvi's finger. Varun and Sameer also join them. Damini peeks from the kitchen to see the three brothers casually talking to her mom and turns around to see her sisters working in harmony with maaji. She says a prayer and goes to join her sisters and maaji. She was really looking forward to this evening.

(To be continued)


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jhaaan.. 🤗

it felt so nice to read the parts.. meri aakhon mei khushi key aansu aa gaye....😃

all of them actually smiling and happy... loved it...👏

malai kofta sey yaad aaya.. u were going to tell me the receipe to easy and fast malai kofta.. right???.. or Roshni is going to tell us in the next part...hahaha 😆😆

we need more scenes like these to get us through the evil times...

update soon,

-- Mru
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: MMM11

Jhaaan.. 🤗

it felt so nice to read the parts.. meri aakhon mei khushi key aansu aa gaye....😃
Besharam. mere writing ka mazaak uda rahi hai. 😆 😆 😆

all of them actually smiling and happy... loved it...👏 Yaaay ye screen pe bhi bahut jaldh hoga

malai kofta sey yaad aaya.. u were going to tell me the receipe to easy and fast malai kofta.. right???.. or Roshni is going to tell us in the next part...hahaha 😆😆Arrey yaar Mali koftha nahin Navrathan Korma. I will PM it to you. Tu marvayegi mujhe - all we need you and me trading recipies on posts - people will say gharelu banne ke liye yahi bacha tha. 😆 Mujhe joote pade toh it all your fault. You are the one who brought in the gharelu angle by asking for a recipe. 😆

we need more scenes like these to get us through the evil times... Agreed - we all do our bit and these times will be gone soon. 😳

update soon, will try 😳

-- Mru



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Jhan

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very beautiful ff jhanvi.i think it should be named happily-ever-after ff.loved savni's baby name KHUSHI.plz continue😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey jhan tht was a lovely part.........finally something happy and positive........👏 loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: carie

very beautiful ff jhanvi.i think it should be named happily-ever-after ff.loved savni's baby name KHUSHI.plz continue😊



Thanks for the suggestion Carie - I have renamed it. 😳
Thanks I wanted something nice for the baby. 😳

Jhan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jhan, looooooveddddddddd it!!!!!! 👏 Hai seeing everyone sooo happy just brings a smile to my face!! 😃 Prithvi uncle-- awwww, he'd be the cutest uncle everrrr 😳!! love the way u show the bonding btw the sisters, the brothers, the couples and just everyone in general!!! Hai wish we get to see these happy times on screen soon!! loved this scene when u posted it on the romantic thread, so glad u continued!!! 🤗
@Mru's comment- maybe u should add a gharelu element to this by giving us some recipes 😉 , maybe my mom won't mind me sitting on the comp so much if she finds out i am actually using my time wisely and learning cooking!! 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jhan dear...loved it to bits!
I loved the entire part 2...such a relief to the eyes on a bright sunny Sunday morning !
Sorry , cant comment is detail...gotta get back to studies....exams are starting tomorrow!
Rach

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