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Posted: 15 years ago
Mru..
your scenes bring PriDa alive..thank you soo much...
you rock..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MMM11

since you guys are encouraging a monster... here is your punishment...two more scenes ....hahaha
Aise punishment ke liye main hamesha taiyyar hoon - bolo phir kab doge? 😉
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Scene 9: Attack of the Alien 🤣🤣🤣🤣Kya title hai🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

She gave them a look head to toe, which creeped out poor Varun. Involuntarily he moved closer to Rosh. Sameer on the other hand, was quite enjoying the new drama queen.
I can totally believe this scenario.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Rakhi's eyes popped out when she laid her beady little eyes on Prithvi. She was speechless looking at the hunk in front of her. Prithvi was dressed casually in a black tee and jeans. She was gaping open-mouthed as she took in his well-built body, his towering height and his handsome face. She knew she had her target. Now now can we really blame her for being impressed with Kingie.☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Prithvi trying to run away from Rakhi (nice name by the way😉) unsuccessfully and her chasing him shamelessly and Damzie fuming - too good Mru - I was laughing.
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Damini nodded at Prithvi to come and sit by her on the sofa. Prithvi almost ran to the sofa, gratefully. His Damini would protect him now. Rakhi who was shameless, follwed PRithvi. Thus continued the game.Aww Queenie rescues Kingie for a change. 😳

Throughout the course of the evening and dinner, Damini had used all kinds of sarcasm to tell Rakhi to back off. She also came close to using her knife at her during dinner. She had successfully managed to stomp on Rakhi's foot, let the statue fall on her hands. Prithvi thoroughly enjoyed seeing Damini. Finally Rakhi stopped flinging herself at PRithvi. Rakhi was scared now that if she continued, Damini would certainly use her gun at her.
Too good - Damz would have done that too - Kingie is her territory and woe to the one who treads on her territory. 😳


Elaji noted all that had happened. It was not how she planned, but she was pleased with the way it turned out. She was glad that she insisted to Rasika to get Rakhi along as well to visit. She felt a little bit guilty using Rakhi as such, but then "Everything's fair in love and war", she convinced herself smiling.
Man Ilaji kya plan tha 👏. I miss her. Thanks for this. 😳

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Scene 11: Temporary Truce.


That is how they slept.. the husband - wife .. each on their side of the bed, with their fingers interlocked..
After a long time indeed, Prithvi and Damini slept a peaceful sleep.. a temporary truce today at least..
Aww kingie and queenie together at last and at peace
😍😍😍😍- sleeping in the same bed holding hands 😍😍😍😍- I can sleep well tonight...😆

Loved how Prithvi knew she was jealous and instinctively followed her - Damini angry with Prithvi accusing him of flirting while all the time knowing our Kingie would never do that 😳 😳 😳 and then she gets hurt and our kingie kisses her fingers and manofies her ☺️
☺️☺️☺️. He tells her that he did not call becos he was unsure 😳. And then they hug for a long time ☺️☺️☺️☺️ and then Damini invites him back into the bed. ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Awesome Mru - I am thankful to you for this. Wish the stupid CVs had shown us this instead. I will take Rakhi the pataka over Raani Chilli Chamchi any day of the week. 😡

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Do let me know if you liked it..😃I did not like it - I LOVED IT. ME WANT MORE. 😃
😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃



Jhan 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by liv2laugh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
MRU.....I loved it!.......seriously woman where have u been hiding all this talent....your scenes have everything..humour, romance, angst and passion.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mruuuuuuuu we need more scenes, plz plz plz preety plz write asap 😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the scenes
please write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mru this was soooo creative and wonderfully written!!! Loved it a lot!! Really liked ur addition of those two characters, and Rakhi was a quite suiting name for her 😆!! Varun creeped out by Rakhi and moves closer to Rosh, could totally imagine that, and Sameer enjoying the attention, could imagine that too!! Rakhi afraid that Rosh would scratch her 😆-liked that a lot!! And ofcourse Rakhi would go after the cutest and hottest---our Kingie!!! Prithvi thinking bout hiding behind Damini--too cute! Loved a jealous Damz when he called Rakhi interesting!! I just loved every bit of the scene in the room, loved how Damz questioned why he didn't call her, awww too cute!!! And whola what an ending with their hands intertwined!! 😍 Mru your scenes are always awesome!! Keep it up dear!! 🤗 Love u for giving us such beautiful scenes!!! Oh yes forgot to add absolutely loved the title Attack of the Alien--superb and very apt!!! 😉
Edited by desigirl_18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow...mru...what should i say...u the BEST👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼!!!....both the parts were wonderful and truly amazing👏👏👏....damini...getting jelous😳, frustrated, angry on prithvi😡 and then both hugging each other🤗...awwww...sooo sweet😳😳😳....the best part was that...she allowed him to share the bed with her😉😉😉...atleast because of that rakhi incidence😆...she is letting him come near her🤗...that is sooo interesting⭐️⭐️⭐️...loved both the scenes❤️❤️❤️...plzzz.keep writing dear🤗🤗🤗..continue soon plzzz plzzz plzz.....we want to read more😍😍😍.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mru, that was jsut awesome....wow what a Prida treat.... Loved it keep them coming - told you ur Pandora's box had intersting stuff... 👏👏👏 There are so many things the CVs could have done...and look at what we are getting... Why could they have not visited the forum and got some ideas ...why oh...why
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantastic mru.Both the scenes were just perfect.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mru totally Rocking 👏 👏 👏

everytime i think this is the best u come up with another part which is better than the previous ones...

Loved the way the story is going ........n the pace... with this i guess we can make so many episodes in case the CV's fall short and dont know how to proceed.they know whom to contact 😉 😉

Loved the new item Rakhi trying to flirt with Damz and the oh so possessive Damz giving those look to Pri to ask him sit besides him and Pri running towards her.... 😍 ......... Loved that Ila had done all this to get Prida together............

Loved the next part also which had Damz ask Pri why he didnt call.......uff.........so sweet.... no words to say.......they sharing the same bed..............

Wow it was so beautifully Prida..wht more can i say .......... that i am waiting eagerly for the next part......... hope u get more and more time to think such stuff and write such stuff........... which put a smile or makes me blush 😳

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