Prithvi and his Idiosyncrasies

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Hi everyone

This is a poem that was requested quite a while ago by Maz, Sistu and Mru. It is about Prithvi and his idiosyncrasies like his earring OCD, leaving early before Damzie wakes up etc. I finished it last night and thought I would put it up. Maz, Sistu and Mru - Thanks guys for inspiring this poem.

Today I tell a tale of lore

A story with twists galore

A story about a king and his queen ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And everything that happened in between. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Queenie had a favorite horse Toofan was its name

A horse with a wild streak that none could really tame ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Toofan had a real bad temper

Kingie showed the horse who was master ๐Ÿ˜‰

Toofan fell in love with Kingie so deeply

He would do Kingie's bidding obediently

Toofan hated Queenie with a vengeance ๐Ÿ˜ก

Tried to take her out at every chance ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Many a time did Queenie's life Kingie save ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Eventually her heart to him Queenie gave โ˜บ๏ธ

Kingie and Queenie concentrated on each other โ˜บ๏ธ

We haven't seen Toofi with Kingie in forever. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Kingie to her favorite restaurant did Queenie take ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The owners invited them to stay for some cake ๐Ÿ˜ณ

For them to dance they extended an invitation

Kingie could not withstand the temptation ๐Ÿ˜ณ

To dance, he swept Queenie into his arms โ˜บ๏ธ

Both sizzled enough to set off fire alarms โ˜บ๏ธ

We expected a beautiful dance - classy and clean

What we got was dubbed the grasshopper routine.

Kingie and Queenie found each other a major distraction ๐Ÿ˜ณ

But that idiotic maksad was a huge complication ๐Ÿ˜ก

Between 2 stubborn people who would not concede ๐Ÿ˜ณ

They were crazily attracted to each other indeed โ˜บ๏ธ

It became a regular affair, let not pretend

For Kingie to get hurt and Queenie to him attend ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Prithvi Saxena did not so much ask her out for a date ๐Ÿ˜•

Him possibly proposing marriage to her, well now that takes the cake. ๐Ÿคฃ

This fellow was not going to make his move until kingdom come ๐Ÿคฃ

So Ila decided to do something to unite them.

Calling Kingie - will you marry Queenie she enquired ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kingie agreed, but said Queenie's consent was really required. ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Their wedding night was spent wide awake

Avni decided to try to her own life take ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Kingie dear was just so tired ๐Ÿ˜ณ

To queenie's bedroom he retired ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Queenie came in to find Kingie slumbering away ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She figured he had just had a very long day

Her head on his chest, she fell asleep โ˜บ๏ธ

After all kingie was hers to keep ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Next morning and every single one after

Kingie seemed in a hurry to scamper ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

As queenie lay sleeping peacefully

Kingie would sneak out oh so silently ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Kingie, you idiot, would it have killed you to have stayed a while ๐Ÿ˜ก

Woken her up and said "Good morning darling" with a smile. โ˜บ๏ธ

.

To stare at Queenie, Kingie does have this propensity ๐Ÿ˜ณ

He looks at her with great intensity.โ˜บ๏ธ

Our kingie is bugged by quite a few things

But none more so than our queenie's earrings ๐Ÿคฃ

The angriest stares for them he does reserve ๐Ÿคฃ

Come on pal, what did that poor earring do to this deserve ๐Ÿคฃ

You eye it like it did you great personal harm ๐Ÿคฃ

Oh my, but that is just one more facet of your charm. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Now queenie and kingie are torn apart ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Both the poor dears have a broken heart ๐Ÿ˜ญ

That stupid maksad plan is totally to blame ๐Ÿ˜ก

That whole idea was so incredibly lame ๐Ÿ˜ก

Kingie's actions did Queenie's wrath earn ๐Ÿ˜ก

For queenie's sake he did toofan spurn ๐Ÿ˜•

Kingie dear you reap what you sow ๐Ÿ˜‰

Now you got nowhere to go

He must try to win his queenie back ๐Ÿ‘

To bring their love story back on track ๐Ÿ‘

In this quagmire of love he is really stuck ๐Ÿ˜•

Let us wish him all the best of luck.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Winning the queen is no cakewalk ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

You cannot do it with just empty talk ๐Ÿ˜‰

Your deeds have to prove that you are worthy of her trust

You got to do more than just be penitent and express regret

Woo the queen in style this time, show her you really care ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Time you learned to be a good husband, time you learned to share ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Share your deepest thoughts with her and you will not repent ๐Ÿ˜ณ

All that time you wasted just imagine how you could have spent ๐Ÿ˜ก

Your sincerity and protectiveness are what attracted her to you ๐Ÿ˜ณ

So show her that you love her and that you will always remain true ๐Ÿ˜ณ

This time court her like you mean it and do it in royal style ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Come on man you can do it, just go the extra mile.๐Ÿ˜ณ




Queenie is angry but will not be forever ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She knows you both belong together ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Deep in her heart she knows she loves you too ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Just give her reason to believe in you ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Then, into the sunset you will walk ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hand in hand and never look back. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

~Jhanavi


EDIT

Originally posted by diya86

Jhan!!

Please please please promise me that you'll write a celebratory poem when love is in the air! Chalo promise karo... lolz Check this out Diya - my pledge ๐Ÿ˜‰

I swear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I solemnly swear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

On Pri's hair ๐Ÿ˜ณ

and on his camouflage shirt that I hate ๐Ÿ˜ก

and that Ghajini suit that I love to berate ๐Ÿ˜ก

That I will write a poem to celebrate ๐Ÿ˜†

their whole love affair ๐Ÿ˜ณ

when love is finally in the air ๐Ÿ˜ณ

~Jhanavi

Diya babe - now you got witnesses too
๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†


EDIT 2

Poem from Diya

Originally posted by: diya86

Oh I LOVE that pledge!!!!

Just one more thing -

Do you Jhan, poetess of great wit,
promise to hate that abomination we call 'IT'
and write a poem cursing him to hell
when he comes ringing GM's doorbell

Tell me you'll vent your anger and mine
with words that rhyme, and in verse divine
this one promise will really be good for my nerves
cos I'll know that Inderetta'll get what he deserves

~ Diya


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Mru_bee thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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๐Ÿคฃ, Jhaannnn,๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

too good..... a poem of things that have been and will be for Pri....hahaha

yet it gives him and us hope in the end...hahahha

absolutely loved it...

-- Mru
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Posted: 15 years ago
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a beautiful poem, both beautiful and funny. but I can't remember any earring incident, what have i missed?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Our kingie is bugged by quite a few things

But none more so than our queenie's earrings ๐Ÿคฃ

The angriest stares for them he does reserve ๐Ÿคฃ

Come on pal, what did that poor earring do to this deserve ๐Ÿคฃ

Ouch my tummy hurts Jhan!
I lovvvvvvvvvedddd this part! Super duper funny! Keep it up! I guess i love the earrings more than anyone else here! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
@ nirjhor : well...then u have missed a lottt dear ! Thats a new thing which prithvi hates about damini!
He hates her earrings to come in b/w him and his queenie! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jhanvi, that was lovely.
The story of our Kingie and Queenie - lets see some wooing in royal style coming up. With you on that.
We have waited enough .....
Loved the earings part - angriest stares for them .....ha ha never know u were also obsessed with Queenie's earings like Rach.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Or rather obsessed with Kingie's obsession with earings ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Just awesome Jhanvi - keep writing.๐Ÿ‘
Edited by achumen - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: MMM11

๐Ÿคฃ, Jhaannnn,๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

too good..... a poem of things that have been and will be for Pri....hahaha totally it is what you all wanted right?๐Ÿ˜‰

yet it gives him and us hope in the end...hahahha you know me the eternal optimist ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

absolutely loved it... Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ

-- Mru



Jhan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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๐ŸคฃReally funny jhan.And about damz earing i think we all are in danger of getting more obssesed about her earings than prithvi is.๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

a beautiful poem, both beautiful and funny. but I can't remember any earring incident, what have i missed?



Hi Nirjhor105
Check out the looks Prithvi gives to Damini's earrings in the Marjawan sequence and then in the suhaag raat sequence - you will know what we are talking about. Krups thinks he has earring OCD and made a post about that. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks for liking my poem. Appreciate it.
Jhan

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Originally posted by: rachel.fds

Our kingie is bugged by quite a few things

But none more so than our queenie's earrings ๐Ÿคฃ

The angriest stares for them he does reserve ๐Ÿคฃ

Come on pal, what did that poor earring do to this deserve ๐Ÿคฃ

Ouch my tummy hurts Jhan! And you are telling me this because ๐Ÿ˜‰....... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
I lovvvvvvvvvedddd this part! Super duper funny! Keep it up! I guess i love the earrings more than anyone else here! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ I think we all realize that Kingie has OCD with respect to queenie's earrings or maybe we all do ๐Ÿ˜•
@ nirjhor : well...then u have missed a lottt dear ! Thats a new thing which prithvi hates about damini!
He hates her earrings to come in b/w him and his queenie! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Thanks Rach
Jhan

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: achumen

Jhanvi, that was lovely.

The story of our Kingie and Queenie - lets see some wooing in royal style coming up. With you on that.
We have waited enough ..... we all deserve some royal wooing too - CVs you listening?
Loved the earings part - angriest stares for them .....ha ha never know u were also obsessed with Queenie's earings like Rach.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Achu darling - we are all obsessed with kingie's earring OCD ๐Ÿ˜‰
Or rather obsessed with Kingie's obsession with earings ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Amen ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Just awesome Jhanvi - keep writing.๐Ÿ‘ Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Jhan

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