Revelation - A PriDa FF updt part 7 on pg 16

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Ivy

@Ivy9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

lovely update Diya! I loved the I love u's at the end!!!

Edited by Erutan99 - 15 years ago

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dee86

@dee86

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Rachel

Thanks a lot!! And welcome to the forum!

@ pm - sure!

Honey

Awww... you must be swamped with work, na? Never mind, it'll be done soon and we can go back to discussing GK/Prithvi!!

@ hona hiii hogaaa - ya you're right! hona hiiii hogaaa. just don't blame me if the long part bores you stupid!

@ Inder thingy, cheap imitation Villan - 🤣

Ivy

Thanks, babe! Glad you liked it!

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leaves45

@leaves45

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Awesome part diya....please please please write more...it makes me sigh and dream

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Priya.

@Priya.

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Never written anything before !!!!!.......

thank god for this show then...

You've got amazing talent and we are just so lucky to have you here 🤗

i mean its always an absolute pleasure reading what ever you write

LOVED this too......cant wait for the next part and need i say the longer the better..😃

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sabsfathima

@sabsfathima

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

hi loved ur ff pls pm me

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

yeah that was a good one! that bandar feel like smacking him!

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@Cassiopeia

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

I'm not a very big fan on FF's...but your's is 👏👏👏 SPLENDID!

The scenes you've created are simply par excellence...Keep up the good work...And may the writer's block never block your way...😉😊

P.S Pls add me to your pm list...

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Ekta

@Eksie

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Diya .. Dunno what to say! Brilliant & Mindblowing is an understatement! Simply LOVED it!!!!

Loved how you brought about Inder in the whole scenario .. and ofcourse, how Prithvi goes "My Wife!" 👏 👏 And best part .. Prithvi thinking 'Inder may have known her longer..but I know her better!" That was awessssome!!! 👏 And ofcourse .. Prithvi's "I love you too..." I sooooo wish something like this happens in the coming episodes!

And yesss .. I agree with Krupsie! I too wish for a 1070 pages book!! This has to go on... and ofcourse, only you can do it!

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kheerni

@kheerni

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Diya - just read part 5. Loved it! I can't get over how beautifully you write! You really have a way with words! I second everyone here who suggested you publish your works someday. ⭐️ And how do you keep multiple scenes/stories/poems running in your head all at the same time?? Pray, please tell! 😆