Revelation - A PriDa FF updt part 7 on pg 16

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Misfit007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

a very nice start...can't wait for he next part...

pls add me to your pm list..

--ashi

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sistu

@sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Loved part 3 diya. especially the first para. Nice to see how damini's emotions towards pri changed.

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Khakshan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Wonderful FF Diya... It's really great yar.. 👏

Khakshan

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Ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Diya .. I told you! You can't write anything short of AWESSSOME! 👏 👏 👏 👏

This is WOWWW! Loooved it .. especially Pithvi's conflict .. and yayyy .. Damini is getting naughty! 😉 lol! Can't wait for the next part! Write soooooon!!!! 😳

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Priya.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Awesome Diya...Loved it ..

And many thanks for the PM.

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maya

@coolfire

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

That was just amazing Diya! .. I loved how you portrayed the conflict of emotions in Prithvi! ... Ah! the angst! ... I can't wait for the next part (I'm guessing that an irresistible seduction is in store for us! ;)

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Arya311

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Oh diya!!! I really can't wait for more!!!!😆

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kheerni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Oh totally loved it Diya!! When's the next part, when?????????? Please make it fast! Damini in seductive mode is going to be AWESOME! Don't blame her really! With a man like him around you got to do what you got to do!! Love it! Bechara Prithvi won't know what hit him! 😆

And Diya, it was very well written! Beautiful, and touched all kinds of chords! I couldn't help laughing at what incensed her more - the blanket hogging! hehe and then he turns around and she forgets everything! And most of all the tentative kiss on his lips. Woww, I'm in PriDa Heaven again! Love it!