A WEDDING....[part -3 UPDATED IN Pg -4!] - Page 3

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...Maham... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
really nice niki.. i loved your description of the arrangements.. and especially damini... her feelings and emotions.. good job! waiting for kingsie......!
Cheerx,
Maham
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Niki .. that was fabbb! Totally loved it!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Especially loved the part where you've described the dresses and decor .. and lol .. the part where Rosh is checking to see if the decor matches her outfit .. which she calls 'supervising' .. was sooo funny! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Waiting for the next part ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wher is kingsie dam is waiting for him πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
@ achu : thanx a lot dear.. im glad u cud visualize the convo..i was a bit apprehensive wetr it wud match d characters... but nw im glad u likd it..😳 😳😳.. yup will brng it soon.. jus a bit mre of waiting tym..😳

@ krupsie dear ...awww.. thnk youuuuu dear !!..😳 😳 n yup.. i m there wth u .. me tooo eagerly waitin 2 see the wedding.. oh.. wen will it cm onscreen ??!! 😍😍

@ dew-drop : thnx a lot yar... will try ma best to keep up wth ur hopes..😳 😳

@ carie : thnx sweety.πŸ˜ƒ. a lil bit of wait mre...πŸ˜‰ n ya.. thnx 4 likn ma dress choices...😳😳

@ maham : thnx dear.... m glad u liked d way i wrote damz emotions.. her charcter is quite complicated.. n d wat CS plays it is jus toooooo gud.. so im afraid wetr i had done justice to her.. but anyways..im happy u likd it..😳😳.. n Hey .. im waitin 4 ur new Vm.. do 1 4 a kurbaan muvi song yaar... me waiting ..😊

@ Ekta : thnx a lot dear !! n ya.. u noticed dat matchn dress wth decor part !!πŸ˜ƒ had a doubt on dat..i m nt very gud wth humor u c..πŸ˜•πŸ˜• mre of a romantique..😳 So im really glad u likd it !!πŸ˜ƒ thnx again !! 😳 😳

@ Amby : thnx a lot sweety !!!πŸ˜ƒ

@ Pridafan : on the way dear.. on the way.. he too is dying to meet his queenie !! πŸ˜‰


luv niki..😊😊



Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved this part also!πŸ‘πŸΌ...bring on part 3!..jaidi jaldi type karo!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so nix aur kab likhogi..i am waiting...
especially cus it has my sameer/jai..yayy!!
yaar vaise nix..
do u think u cold write an FF of the truth coming out?that would be veryyy exciting!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ maziya: here cms ur 3rd part dear.. hope u like it too.. 😳 😳 😳

@ Amby : FF !!! 😲 😲 O no.. dear.. me very bad in writn FF or shud i say continuin an FF..πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• 1st evr FF i had written was for "left right left".. n still havnt cmpleted dat !! i knw many ppl want 2 murder me 4 dat still.. but cudnt help it.. had ma xams..then gt busy.. then Rajeev lft d shw.. on the whole dint hav tym.. n watevr interst i had too startd vanishd away wth hm πŸ˜”.. but nw wen i hv tym 2 write ,bt i cant cmplete it as the forum is locked.. πŸ˜’ So whoevr evr read dat FF n wantd me to cmplte..i wud lyk to say here..dat im really SORRY...

So anyways cmg to d point...wat i wanna say is dat...after dat terribl disaster..πŸ˜• dont wanna strt an FF again..πŸ˜• N this 1 too.. will b nly few scenes..nt a complete story..or anydng..πŸ˜•

bt yaa.. ur idea is gr8 !! πŸ‘πŸΌ wud really suggest all the fab writers in our dear forum 2 write on on dat !! πŸ˜ƒ n hey amby.. why dny u try 1 ??!! 😳 😳 wud b fun dear !! u can njoi describn ur samzy dear to ur heart's content n hey make hm do watevr u want !!! πŸ˜†

luv niki..😊
Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heres the part -3 swts! ...but haan.. its very very small..πŸ˜• cudnt write much 2day.. nt 2 well.. this i had written yestrday nite n kpt.. so nt much.. our dulhaa scene will cm 2mrw..😳😳 hope u all like readn it..😳 n hope even better prida scenes cm 2day..😍 so dat i get ma energy 4m it !! πŸ˜ƒ


PART-3

Rosh was heading towards her mom's rum.. Wch was quiet asusual.. But 2day there was smdng different ... smdng different abt the person who was there inside.. Evr charming Ila gujral..was not her ususal self 2day.. she was not the head of multi million dollar enterprise.. Nor was she the tough woman.. Who had raised her 3 darling daughters single handedly till now..no...not 2day.. 2day she was.. She was only a mother.. ..a mother whose daughter was gettn married 2nite.. She had mixed emotions... she dint knw wch emotion was overpowering.. All were equally heart wrenching.. There her daughter.. Her dearest damini.. Her sole pillar of strength was getting married.. A sense of loss was smwer lingering in her heart.. But the very thought dat her darling daughter was getting married to Prithvi..whom she knew wud b the best evr soulmate her daughter cud get.. N d fact dat her daughter liked him n more importantly she knew he adored her wth all her heart.. No matter hw much evr he tried to hide it.. His feelings 2wards her daughter had nvr escaped her eyes..She knew it 4m d day she met prithvi for the 1st time.. Dat he wud take care of her.. He wud protect her wth his life....He had nvr failed her till nw.. N till nw her judgement had nvr gone wrong too.. She was proud of both d facts...hoped to b.. till the end for dat..


so there she sat in her rum.. Wth tears hanging on the edges... waiting to b let out..flipping thru the pages of history... an album..wch had all the beautiful memories of her darling daughter...4m childhood to womanhood...till 2day she was her darling protective daughter.. 4m 2mrw she wud be smbdy's...smbdy's wife..the thot..made her heart stir...n those tears ...they cud no longer b restricted....n silently flowed dwn..blurring her world for a lifetime 2 cm..

Nxt scene.. We see the simple but adequately decorated Saxena house.. It was decorated wth simple golden yellow n orange marigolds n pure white .. Heavenly smelling jasmine flowers... a few golden lites hung on the walls.. Jus 2 denote the auspicious occasion.. Neither too flashy.. Nor too sombre.. Jus the way our groom wud have liked..A few guests had already started to arrive.. They were 4m varun's office.. Had come to join the baarat..varun was busy welcoming them..afterall he was the groom's brother..dat too the youngest.. N his eldest bro favorite one at dat..he was lukn smart in a simple dark blue sherwani wth dull siver thread wrk..it had very little embellishments..wasnt too flashy.. But nonetheless lukd very chic n complemented his luks..Rosh was surely in 4 a pleasant surprise 2nite..!

Well further inside the house.. We see smbdy calling out " bhaiyya..aap ready hue ki nahi ??!! Mujhe lagtha hai.. Babi aap se pehle ready ho chuki hongi.. Kitne der laga rahe ho aap??!! Kahin baraat aapko chodke na chala jae !! Darwaaza tho kholo!!" ..yes ! it was the evr charming.. Often witty n quite handsome Sameer calling out to his prithvi bhaiyya.. Who had locked himself up in the room 4 quite some tym nw.....πŸ˜‰




hey .. guys.. hope u all likd this teeny weeny part !..😳😳 If nt..dnt wory.. feel free 2 comment.. so jist of the story.. u like or dnt ..do comment..πŸ˜›..Meanin if u dnt like it ..u r welcm 2 gv ur suggestions to improve it..😳😳.. So waitn 4 ur comments.. n ya.. hopefully our dulhaa wil make a grand entry 2mrw !!😳😳.. n 2 samzy dear's fans.. dnt describe his dress nw bcoz.. will describe it latr in a bettr way.. in nxt eppy !!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


luv niki..😊😊



Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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SORRY.. had posted it again here..πŸ˜•πŸ˜• will reply to comments here, later then..😳
Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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arghhhhhhhhhhh niki still no kingsie... i hate you...! :P anyways nice part you described ila's emotions extremely well! great job..! as for the vm.. will you stop making me feel guilty.. first krups then you... im working on a vm but its not that good.. just something random that i started cox i was getting bored... so apologies in advance if you dont like it..! update soon... and this time you'd better make sure theres a certain saxena in it... and dont you dare confuse it with sameer and varun! ;)
Cheerx,
Maham

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